Mannata Ve Mannata.. ❤️ Part 8, Page 41 - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Next update kab milegi? 😆😆😆


Next upate tab milegi jab aap promise karo ki meko lamba wala comment dego!!😉😆 Kyu doge na??😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl


Next upate tab milegi jab aap promise karo ki meko lamba wala comment dego!!😉😆 Kyu doge na??😃😃

Ok I will give just update asap 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl

Ye kab unres hoga di?? 😆

Hoga hoga jaldi hoga Cindy.😛

Unres on Page 11 Cindy.😃
Edited by snehatara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara

Res.😊

Unres.

You came with another winner there Cindy. Chapter filled with lots of fun. 👏Your Biji is a
star here and a very spicy one too.❤️ As the head of the family, she dictates everyone and
beats her grown up son who has his own grown up beta. The chasing in the locked room was
very well written and the fun of it was when Krishna overheard the beating and Devendra's
howling. 🤣 Engagement ka jhoot Shaurya ke saamne aayega kya. He'll run for his life
again I think but the unknown force of the melodic new voice may just pull him back.😳
Mehek playing and singing along with the kids was very alluring. The overall concept of this
FF has captured my heart Cindy. The bonding, love and the warmth between all the characters
just fills ones heart. 👏Waiting to see how Mehek gels in this family and this affectionate and
demonstrative fun filled family.⭐️

Thanks Cindy for the PM. 👍🏼❤️


Awww.. Thank you for such cute review. 🤗 I have heard that you don't like to read to read online stories yet you read, like and comment. It's like an honor for me. I'm seriously grateful to the reader like you. Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandu0123

Ok I will give just update asap 😆😆

Update is on the way, just wait for 10 minutes!😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl


Awww.. Thank you for such cute review. 🤗 I have heard that you don't like to read to read online stories yet you read, like and comment. It's like an honor for me. I'm seriously grateful to the reader like you. Thank you so much😊


Pleasure is all mine Cindy. 😊Lucky we have some very good and interesting writers like u
on the forum.👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mannata Ve Mannata.. <3 (Part 4)

Everyone see this and Manasavi screams her name in fear "Mehak!! Be careful!!"

Shaurya stare at her face. Though, Mehak face is covered from her dupatta but still her face is slightly visible to him. Mehak has kept her eyes closed in fear of falling but when she realizes that she is floating in air, she opens her one eye cutely to check the situation and when she sees that she is okay she smiles on her own, but again she realizes something and then look upwards, towards Shaurya who was totally cleaned bowled on her. She gulped her saliva and then looks downwards again on the floor and then at their position. She looks back again at Shaurya and then at floor. She closes her eyes and shook her head in No cutely and then again gulps down her saliva. She looks at Shaurya again and shook her head in No, Shaurya saw this and he shook his head in Yes. She again closes here eyes and looks at him again and by eyes asks him to leave her, he denies and shook his head in No. She wide open her eyes at this and then again by her eyes asks him to leave her but again he denies. At last, she pushes him hard by which he falls down and Mehak stands up on her feet and starts to adjust her dupatta, Shaurya saw her face when she moves dupatta from her face. He gets completely cleaned bowled by her looks and aura, he kept staring at her face and her actions. He didn't blinked his eyes once and just kept staring at her, forgetting he got hurt on his hand by falling and it's already bleeding, as the floor was slightly rough. Manasavi, his parents and Biji saw this and gets shock seeing him reacting like this for the time after seeing any girl. Vicky and Mehul smirks and wink at each other.

"Bakra fass gaya!" Mehul commented.

"Ejactly!" Vicky smirked.

Manasavi came out of her trance when she herd her hubby and Vicky's talk. She looked at them and then at Shaurya and then again at them with confused look. Mehul and Vicky straighten their expression and runs towards their brother, who got hurt. Manasavi stood their in confusion but later smirks when she realizes that what she wants, others wants the same too. She too goes towards Mehak and Shaurya to see their condition.

Here in the room, Devendra was the first one to come out of shock "That's why you called him here? This is the reason you called him back? So, that he can-" He left his statement incomplete and looks at Biji, who was smirking while looking t them.

"Hayoo Rabba!! Bebe, Shaurya to gaya kaam se!" Krishna said. Three of them looked at each other faces and smirks evilly at each other.

Here, Mehak notices someone's constant gaze on her. She looks down at Shaurya and fond him looking at her without blinking his eyes. She sighs in disbelief and says "So bothersome" and moves away from there. Shaurya was shocked beyond words on her reaction, he quickly stands up and grab her wrist from behind but she was fast then him, she quickly twist his hands back and speaks "What do you think you are doing? Huh?"

Manasavi, Mehul and Vicky stops in their way and looks at the situation, wide eyes. Manasavi coughs out loud seeing her sister, literally, twisting her brother-in-law hands. Mehul and Vicky were too shocked to react, the look on their face was worth watching. Mehul never ever thought that he will see this side of Mehak and Vicky, well, he was somewhere enjoying his elder brother condition.

"Hey!! Let go off me you.. Owww!!" Shaurya winces in pain, as Mehak twists his hands more.

"What?" Mehak said.

"I said let me go. It's paining. Who the hell are you? Ahh.." He shouts. Mehak twists his hands more and he screams more.

"Me? I'm someone whom you don't know about yet" She leaves his hands with jerk, he fells down again on floor and looks at her in anger, she continues after pointing her finger at him "So, it will be better if you keep your hands on check. Understood?" She finishes, crossing her arms. Shaurya sighs in disbelief and held his left arm which she had twisted and gets up "You? How dare you-" He lifts his hand to do something but again she twists his left arm and said "I'm, Mehak Sharma. So, never ever mess with me." She leaves him and moves from there to her room. Shaurya looks at her in deep shock "Ye kaun thi? Ye kya tha? Ye ladki thi ya fir monster? Ahhh.. my hand!! Mom!!" He shouts loudly and leaves from there to see his Mom. The other three were too shocked to react that they stood there like frozen people, Manasavi was the first one to react "Abhi, abhi kya hua?" She asks others.

"Tumhari behen ne mere bhai ko dho daala." Mehul said.

"Aur wo bhi bina detergent ke!!" Vicky said.

Three of them looked at each other and then at the position where few minutes Mehak and Shaurya was standing and then again at each other. After few minutes, they laughed out loud thinking of Shaurya condition and Mehak's daring attitude.

"Mehak is really something. Usne to ek baari mein hi Shaurya ko aasmaan se zameen pe laakar patak dia aur wo bhi zoro se!!" Mehul said, trying to control his laugh.

"Seriously, maine aaj tak kabhi bhi Devar Ji ko inna laachar kabhi nahi dekha. Tab bhi nahi jab unhe yeh pata chala tha ki hum dono ki shaadi Mumbai mein hone wali hai aur Devar Ji ko apne dosto ko humare baare mein batana pada aur uske baad jo unke dosto ne unki dhulaai ki thi unki. Gosh!! Mehak ki karditta tune?" She laughs again. They had their good belly laugh.

Here, Shaurya comes back to his room and starts to find out first aid, cursing Mehak under his breath "What the hell does she thinks of herself? Jhansi ki rani hai kya? Hadh hai, ek to maine usse bachaya aur bandi merko hi attitude dikha rahi thi? Uski to main aisi ki taisi karke rahuga!! Aane do mom ko, uski aisi shikayat lagauga na ki usse ye pata chalega ki usne kisse panga lia tha" He finds out the first aid box and sat down the bed and soaks one cotton ball in Dettol and applies on his hand "Oww.. it hurts." He blows on his hand and does the band aid. After finishing up with his wounds. He stands up and look at himself in the mirror, he reminisces the incident happened few minutes back. At first he smiles, thinking how she ended up falling in his arms and how cutely she reacted but soon his reaction changes into anger, actually cute anger, he looks coldly at himself in the mirror "Who the hell she thinks of herself? Who is she? I have to find out. No one, never ever has treated me like this. What was her name?" He turns his back to mirror and moves towards his bed. He fells down on his bed and tries to remember her name "Chehak? No, no, not Chehak. I think it was something like Jhanak. Ahh.. na. Then what is it?" He gets up from his bed and sits crossing his legs on bed "Gotcha! Mehak. Yeah, So she is Mehak, Mehak Sharma." He smirks evilly but then "But, wait. She is Mehak, ye to samajh aata hai. Par aakhir ye Mehak hai kaun?" He screams out loud and fells down again on bed, hiding his face in pillow. Pioneers looks at him from the door and feels strange.

"What's wrong with him now?" Raunak wonders.

"May be, he had constipation." Khishtij said. Everyone looks at him and then at Shaurya. They thinks for a while and then agrees with Khishtij.

"I think you are right. He definitely have constipation." Megha said, making awkward face.

"Guys, let's leave him alone and let him take some rest. We should leave, let's go" Sakshi said. Everyone agrees to her and leaves after giving him pitiful look.

*I had good belly laugh, while penning down this part. This is so hilarious, isn't it?? Hahahaa*

Here, Mehak comes to her room and closes the door quickly. After closing down he door, she literally jumps at her place and screams "You fool Mehak, Donkey Mehak, Idiot Mehak. ye kya kar dia maine? Rabba, Maine Shaurya Khanna ka haath mod dia? Rabba, kill me." She said, leaning down on the room door. She snatches her own hair and curses herself "Kab sudhregi tu Mehak? Kab? Rabba!!" She scolds herself and cries (in a funny way) "Ab main kya karugi? Rabba!!" She cries while throwing her legs in air, just like kids do when they want something.

"Shaurya Khanna, mujhe zinda nahi chodega, wo menu kachcha chaba jayega. Rabba!!" She cries again, throwing her legs in air but stops and stands up. She goes towards the mirror and looks at herself in the mirror "Mehak, apna bag pack kar le (cries) kyuki ab Shaurya teko akela nahi chodega (cries) wo to terko jaan se hi maar daalega" and cries again. After few minutes of more crying, she wipes down her fake tears and peeps out from her window to see what is happening outside. She saw Pioneer coming down laughing and her sister coming towards her room. She hides behind curtains and quickly locks her room door, she leans on the door and shook her head in No, closing her eyes (in funny way). Manasavi tries to open the door but she couldn't.

"Ab isko kya ho gaya?" Manasavi said. She knocks on the door "Mehak? Are you in there? Ye door kyu nahi khul raha? Mehak? Gate khol na!! Mehak!!" Manasavi calls out for her. Pioneers saw this and decides to help her.

Here, Mehak tries to find out the way to sneak and prays to God, to not to get caught by her sister. She hides herself under blanket but gets up throwing it away, then she hid herself in the cupboard but soon comes out from there coughing loudly due to short of breath. Here, Pioneers comes to Manasavi and asks her the matter. She explains to them that what happened and she is not able to open the door. Pioneer boys after listening to her, decides to help he by breaking the door.

Here, Mehak not finding any other way decides to open the door and face the circumstances. By taking God name once more she opens the door and with this Pioneer boys lands up on the floor, on her feet. *rofling*

Actually, when Pioneer boys were about to hit the door, at the same time Mehak opened the door and like this they fell down on the floor. Everyone gets shock, seeing them on the floor. Sakshi and Megha runs to her respective hubby's to check on them. Manasavi looks at them with wide eye and then at Mehak, who was about to cry again (in funny way). Manasavi chuckles seeing her little sister condition. She goes towards her and taps on her shoulder, Mehak looks at her with cute sad pout and then at Pioneers, who were looking at her with anger, fake anger. She closes her eyes and lowers down her head.

"What did you do just now, Miss?" Megha asked her sarcastically, crossing her arms.

"I, just opened the door." Mehak replied, looking all cute with that sad pout.

"Really?" Sakshi asked this time, fully annoyed. Mehak nodded cutely. Manasavi smiles but hides it when she saw Mehak looking at her with anger.

"Are you okay? Raunak? Khishtij?" Manasavi asks them. They shook their head in Yes and smiles seeing Mehak so scared of their wives. They tries to say something to her but stops when they hear Shaurya voice from behind "What is happening?"


To be continued.. *wink wink*

Next, Lohri celebration and more nok jhok! *winking*

Stay tuned! Ignore any typos.

Don't forget to like and comment. Don't be a silent reader.

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting.

See ya! :)


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara


Pleasure is all mine Cindy. 😊Lucky we have some very good and interesting writers like u
on the forum.👏⭐️

Thank you!! *bows down*😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res 😃
Unres
Wow nice update
Love the family bonding here 😃
Sk clean bounded here when he first saw ms 😃
Love their tom and Jerry fights
Waiting for next one continue soon😃
Edited by Nandu0123 - 7 years ago
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Res again.🤣
Unres.😛

Comedy of errors and tashan bhara chapter Cindy. Shaurya, the savior gets his arm twisted and
has a great fall. All for what, saving Mehek😲. She would have been flat on her face if he hadn't
caught her. Not fair. Now the family knows Biji's game plan and they think Shaurya is a goner in
Biji's conspiracy.😉😆 Everybody is enjoying and rejoicing the fall of great Shaurya Khanna, I
mean his getting lost into Mehek's charm and beauty and also are happy that there is somebody
who can bring him down to earth. Gosh, how the mighty fall. 😳🤣❤️
Their first encounter is lovely Cindy.👏🤗
Toofaan mail Mehek doesn't spare anybody and makes the Pioneer heroes trip and fall. She is
awesome troublesome. AN open invitation to comedy of errors. Both are planning and plotting
each other's downfall and yet have some fondness for each other. First it's going to be payback
time for the flips and flops. Lohri is going to be interesting, right Cindy.😃😳 Just waiting for them
to fall for each other and the role of music in their lives. Waiting eagerly for the next update.⭐️
Thanks a lot for the PM.👏🤗
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