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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Okay so shaurya is khadoos and full of himself...but not cunning and manipulative ...

He helped mehak so that she will work for him...
Ther tashan and nok jhoks we're cute ...I'm glad mehak speaks up to him in his own language ...😆
I really like the way she outsmarted shaurya and took hi room to rest ...proud of her 😉
I'm really thinking wat wud shaurya do now seeing her sleeping in his room...😉

So ur planning to put mehrya here with corporate business background ?
Wud be cool ...great chapter and

First of all I loved that teddy thabs..
Seriously thabbs u are proud of mahek and not me well what else can he do other tgan sleeping in guest room in that hard mattress which he choosed for mahek bechara dusro ke liye gadha khodne chala tha khud hi gir gaya lol..well I wi think about the occupation ..I habe not plot it yet
Edited by Shagun_2702 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Just now finished the chapter
It's amazing shagun
Why mehak is wearing a lehenga? From where they came? Why she is in his apartment 😕 well there r lots of questions arising in my mind..

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: tibs09

Very interesting concept...
I really loved the line "mera khana gir jaata phir mujhe tumhe hi khana padta" 🤣
Jhoota bhukkad and bahanebaaz 🤣

Well when I was creating this line I didnt get any laugh but when u commented I am laughing like hell this is known as locha ye ulfat ho gaya and last but not the least thanks for your comment tibs
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Mehryan

Just now finished the chapter
It's amazing shagun
Why mehak is wearing a lehenga? From where they came? Why she is in his apartment 😕 well there r lots of questions arising in my mind..

Update soon

Well mehryan I think u have not read the prologue please read it and your queries would be solve😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shagun_2702

Well mehryan I think u have not read the prologue please read it and your queries would be solve😃


Ohh sorry I didn't check that
Thanks ll read it 😳
Btw u can call me riya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Hi yaar.. It's a long time .. No update... Just can't wait to read your next part.. Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

CHAPTER 2

Hello everyone here is the update sorry for making u wait long actually I was not getting time to write so that's why the delay happened ..

So here it goes

Shaurya ate whole noodles and proceeded to his room

"what the hell".. was the first word which he said

Mahek got disturbed by this and she wakes up ..mahek was yawning

"kya hai bhaiya subah subah kyun bhadak rahe ho bhabhi ne firse maara kya ?"mahek said

"oh hello ms sharma mein tumhara koi bhaiya nahi hoon I am your boss and u are sleeping again in my bed " shaurya said

Mahek came to her senses and realized that she was not in her house

"SO what"she said rudely

"what do u mean by it"

"pehle guest room mein soft mattress laga dena aur fir mein vahan so jaoongi ..ohk good night"she said slimingly and pulled her blanket and slept

Shaurya was frustrated and went to guest room but he was not getting sleep sso he decided to move to his room again

"my couch is much better than that hard mattress"

He slept on the couch

Now morning ..the sun rays were falling on both of them

"maa yeh parde band karo na mujhe neend aa rahi hai "mahek said

Shaurya get awaked

"Oh hello mahek sharma tumhein office jana hai"he said in a loud anf harsh voice

Mahek got scared and screamed "bhoot bhoot" and mutter "kal tk toh shaurya khanna zinda tha aaj expire ho gaya kya oh no meine toh uski aakhri ichaa bhi poori nahiki thi"

"what the hell mahek sharma mein shaurya khanna hi hoon tumhara boss " he said angrily

Mahek get reliefed "ohk but how do u came here I mean u were in another room:

"because of u ..I was not getting sleep so I have to come here fine ... Now get ready fast we have to leave"

"why we have to leave I mean are we going to America"mahek said

"no idiot we are going to office u remember ur promise "shaurya said

"oh ..ya ya I remember but before that I need to go on shopping" mahek replied

"No need to go on shopping I will arrange your clothes and then after coming from the office you can move to shopping"shaurya said

"but" before she can complete he started moving out of the room and mahek followed him telling him to stop

He went out of the apartment and rang his neighbour's bell and mahek was looking him in disbelief

A beautiful young lady came out wearing a beautiful red saree

"oh shaurya ..how are u and where were you .I have not seen you from one week"she said

"oh yes bhabhi actually I had some important work btw bhabhi can you give me some of your clothes" he said

Well the lady was shaurya's bhabhi cum friend Ishaani Waghela the wife of RV waghela (ranveer)they also had a love marriage and they both were very close to shaurya although RV was not his real brother but he was his best friend who supported him in his hard times whenever shaurya feels tensed he always go to RV and Ishaani for help

(1st one ishaani and 2nd one RV😉)

"whaat ..pardon please"she looked him in disbelief

"bhabhi you heard me right actually I want some clothes for her "he looked back and was pointing but he didn't find her

"kahan gayi yeh ..oh no kahin firse to nahi bhaag gi kya"his tone was tensed

"who run away shaurya and whom you are talking about can you please tell me" ishaani said being terrified

"bhabhi talk to u later" and he ran by shouting her name and he listened a voice from his apartment

"shaurya" she whispered silently ..shaurya got a sigh of relief and he went to his apartment and opened the door

"you just scared me" shaurya said

"u thought that I ran away again" she said with tears in her eyes

"no ..voh actually"

"shaurya u will never understand why I ran away from my wedding"there was a serious environment making both of them quiet until they listen the doorbell

Shaurya went and opened the door

"shaurya where is she" ishaani said he pointed his eye towards mahek who was wearing his clothes Ishanni was not getting it and move towards mahek

"hellos"he said

Mahek looks up towards Ishaani

"oh hello ..but"

"why you were hiding and running" ishaani said

"who actually because of my clothes they look so bad shaurya's choice is so bad I think he seriously needs a training from you otherwise maybe his to be wife would be just like it"she said by looking at ishaani's beautiful red color saree

"what the hell I mean till yesterday u were telling me that my choice is so good and now" he huffs

Ishani laughs

"oh god mahek u are so cute just like.." she was about to complete that shaurya stopped her in between and said "bhabhi"

Ishaani realized that what was she doing

"how come you know my name"said a bewildered mahek

"woh.." Ishanni looked down

"you are seriously a fool mahek u know na I was shouting your name so how come she will not know your name" shaurya said trying to cover up and they both again get in a fight

"ohk stop it bot of you kabse dekh rahi hoon u both are fighting continuously" she said being terrified

"mahek you come with me I will provide you with some clothes" Ishani said samilingly

"yes didi"mahek said

"you can call me bhabhi" Ishaani said

Mahek's eyes filled with tears

"What happened are you alright"ishanni asked

"no it just reminded me of someone" she said with a heavy voice

Ishaani hugged her ..

"no worries mahek I am just like your friend if you have any problem just let me know it" Ishaani said she broke the hug and she took mahek with her blinking to shaurya in assurance

Ishaani's apartment

"mahek you took this because I don't have any western clothes may be you will like this anarkali "she said

"Its very preety bhabhi .I told you na ur fasion sense is too good"she smiled by taking the anarkali in her hands

"ohk mahek so u take a bath and wear it" ishaani said and went out of the room and came to her room where Ranveer her husband and shaurya's friend cum brother was dressing

"ranveer u know what I am very happy today finally I met her"

Rv(ranveer) looks at her and smiles

"whom do u met wifey"he said by wearing his watch

"mahek"

The watch he was wearing dropped from his hands

"really where is she I wanna meet her"

"not know bhai" a voice came it was of shaurya who came from the unlocked door well dresses in his regular three piece suit

"but why shaurya I mean why can't I meet your lady love"

"because you will tell her everything bhai"

Suddenly Ishaani's phone rang and she went out of the apartment

Mahek shouted from the bath room "bhabhi where are you"

Ishaani cant listen her as she was busy talking with her friend

Shaurya become tensed thinking if she is alright or not he went to the room .RV was following him but then decided to give them some privacy

Shaurya bang on the door

TO BE CONTINUED

PRECAP-well may be some mehrya moments😉😉

well I know that I am just stretching the story bcoz I don't where I would take it 😆😆 so if u have any suggestion please please tell me 😛😛 and ya if I have done grammatical mistake(I know there are many) u can pm me or can write in the comment 😊 ..maybe it would improve my English😆

So if u liked it then hit the like button and don't forget to comment

Edited by Shagun_2702 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: linlin1911

Hi yaar.. It's a long time .. No update... Just can't wait to read your next part.. Update soon

Hey lin I got my license back so here is the update (just below😉😉)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
Unres
So sk is in love of ms but he hide for some cause and ishani and her hubby help them great I like it.
This mehak is always cartoon. Omg I don't know why
Update soon honey
Thanks for pm dear 😊

AGR mene res kia h to smjhle ki offline save kia h and I ll read later. Mein bger pdhe good work likhkr fb dene valo mese nhi hoon dear
U can ask sham di or sanjh i always give FBS and respect writers a lot. Unhe bhi late hi deti hoon but confirmed h k dungi so don't worry about res 😊
Edited by Parud7 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
coughing loud ..10 minute mein toh pad lena chahiye tha toh abhi unres kyun nahi hua vaise thanks for being the first one to comment😊😊

Edited by Shagun_2702 - 8 years ago

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