Imperfectly Perfect ff on mehrya (chapter 4 page 26 31/12)

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Lin

@linlin1911

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

It was awesome shagun... Their nok jok was cute.. Mehak's character is lovely and irritating... SK as usual no doubt in entertainment... Keep writing with fast updates..

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Bukkad dono noddles khatam Shaurya ka room occupied by Mehek now where Shaurya going to be sleep.

Good one Mehek his employee means she is working for him

he is not restaurant owner?

What is his occupation?

Thanks for PM Shagun

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Diva200

@Diva200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Thank you for the Pm.

Awesome update, I like this Mehak, she has spunk. Lol took over Sk room and gave him smaller portion of noodles. Their fights are cute, pls update soon

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Okay so shaurya is khadoos and full of himself...but not cunning and manipulative ...

He helped mehak so that she will work for him...

Ther tashan and nok jhoks we're cute ...I'm glad mehak speaks up to him in his own language ...😆

I really like the way she outsmarted shaurya and took hi room to rest ...proud of her 😉

I'm really thinking wat wud shaurya do now seeing her sleeping in his room...😉

So ur planning to put mehrya here with corporate business background ?

Wud be cool ...great chapter and

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Shagun

@shagun_2702

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Offfo she is acting like her wife Abhi se qabzaa jamaa rahi hai..
You want to change their profession😲
Abhi toh koi idea nahi Hai ...let me see if I get any...
But I loved this chapter and their never ending tom.and Jerry fights🤣

Thanks for the PM 🤗

Ahem Ahem seriously yaar wife matlab abhi toh voh dost bhi nahi bane tu shaadi directly karvaade😆 well baad mein koi idea aaye toh bataana mat bhoolna

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Shagun

@shagun_2702

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: linlin1911
It was awesome shagun... Their nok jok was cute.. Mehak's character is lovely and irritating... SK as usual no doubt in entertainment... Keep writing with fast updates..

Thanks for the comment lin u are talking about fast update I realised it now that its been 8 days and I have not updated but u dont worry I am dojng it

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Shagun

@shagun_2702

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Bukkad dono noddles khatam Shaurya ka room occupied by Mehek now where Shaurya going to be sleep.
Good one Mehek his employee means she is working for him
he is not restaurant owner?
What is his occupation?
Thanks for PM Shagun
Vinu

Vinu I am asking his occupation from u all ..actually I have not decided it yet😉😉 ..weel thanks for tge comment

Edited by Shagun_2702 - 8 years ago

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tibs09

@tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Very interesting concept...
I really loved the line "mera khana gir jaata phir mujhe tumhe hi khana padta" 🤣
Jhoota bhukkad and bahanebaaz 🤣

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Shagun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Diva200
Thank you for the Pm.
Awesome update, I like this Mehak, she has spunk. Lol took over Sk room and gave him smaller portion of noodles. Their fights are cute, pls update soon

Hey thanks diva for the comment vaise all this khurafati ideas were mine and credit goes to mahek..lol😆😆