Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 37

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for the double update Tibs 🤗
the revelation of KK identity is still a suspense.. 😆 ST ki tarah humko kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho ? 😭 that man doesn't want us to enjoy MehRya romance. aap toh humko laddo de do.. please...

Did Meera Sharma decide to make an appearance in the form of that old lady? 🤔 her damaad wasn't pleased with her responses 😆

want more 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

Res... I decided to block the plot too for now, to come back and buy later...😉

Will be back soon...

UnRes...

Oh! Dear God Tibs! Sky is
Meera Sharama! It is absolutely mind blowing! How could I not see that! I think
I was too much wrapped up in Showrya and Mehak back then, to see this. Girl,
you can write, you think...you are an absolute original! Please take a sincere
bow from me here!


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There is something in
every chapter of yours that jumps out of the page and screams and grabs the
reader. In this chapter, what did that for me are those few lines you write in
the beginning about those conflicting emotions and whether they were losing
because of the past or the present. I read and re read and re read those few
lines. Isn't it true that the future influences the present as much as the
past? What a chaotic mess the ghosts of the past and the hopes of the future make
for the present! It is like a ball of tangled yarn...how do you untangle it all without cutting the thread, where do you even start from. It takes an incredible
amount of patience, perseverance and dedication to the task of untangling what probably feels like an endless mess. But, hopefully the each bit that comes undone
becomes the very fiber that bind them together...



Earth and Sky! Wow! One
that grounded him and gave him the much needed roots and the other that has to
set her free now! It is said that the life travels to the human body through
this space. I hope the mother breathes life yet again to her daughter. The sky and
its objects have so much influence on what happens below. As above, so below! I hope they turn the tides around for these
two now.



Please don't reveal KK yet
(I haven't read the other chapter yet, maybe you already have?). My heart goes
out for her. That will be like yanking the ground from beneath both of them... they
are both each other's anchor in this grief. What he says to her while she was asleep
was just beautiful. I was hoping she would have heard it. I wish he permits
himself to utter those unsaid words to her! Maybe that is what she needs... to
give herself the permission to let go.



<p>Your titles in itself are
a puzzle! I googled to know what this eye of the hurricane is. And it says that
rather than being this pocket of peacefulness caught in the midst of the violent
storms, it is the cause of the whole hurricane. While calm and peaceful on
land, it is also the most dangerous on the ocean. Are you referring to the
relative gaiety that Mehak has temporarily brought to their lives or the pseudo
calmness that KK and Mehak together have bought to their lives? Or is there is
a reference I am completely missing! Like I said.puzzles...😊


Thanks Diya ...
It is no exaggeration that I wait for your comments really eagerly , checking my phone often to see whether you updated
Because you not only understand my amateur attempts to tackle a really complex subject, but also take it one step forward
Yes Meera is sky and you will see her through chapter 5 and 6 ... I am sure you would have gone and re read my prologue because I did give that thought a continuation in this chapter
As far as my title is concerned Hurricane's eyes is both the the temporary calmness that KK/Mehak have brought both in their lives and in Khanna Mansion and also the source of hurricane again in Khanna Mansion
Hint : think who is left behind in KM on the day of trip
Edited by tibs09 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Just came from marriage and catch up with this update ...

Loved their car journey and those songs
Hmm so he opened a charatiable trust on her name... that's something unusual...why your updates are ending with message tones ... this time iam sure MS is gonna catch him red handed🤣

Waiting for the next chapter...
Update as per your convenience😆😃
Thanks for sharing the pm😛



Haan kitni baar bachega 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey there Tibs... Waade ke mutabik I m here with my comments..
Brilliant piece of writing!!! So Shaurya opened an orphanage in Mehak's mothers name... Good!! He truly regrets for killing her parents. Though it was an accident, nobody can deny tht two innocent ppl were killed for no fault of theirs n it's painfully difficult for Mehak to forgive him for his sins...they both r justified!!

Who was tht lady who met them on the highway?? I liked how Shaurie reacted when he had asked her a question... Typical Shaurya Khanna.

Aur agar yeh phone silent pe rakhna na sikha toh, it won't take too long for Mehak to figure out who her KK is... Itni bhi bewakoof Nahi Hai apni Delhi 6 ki Mehek Sharma.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09


Thanks Diya ...
It is no exaggeration that I wait for your comments really eagerly , checking my phone often to see whether you updated
Because you not only understand my amateur attempts to tackle a really complex subject, but also take it one step forward
Yes Meera is sky and you will see her through chapter 5 and 6 ... I am sure you would have gone and re read my prologue because I did give that thought a continuation in this chapter
As far as my title is concerned Hurricane's eyes is both the the temporary calmness that KK/Mehak have brought both in their lives and in Khanna Mansion and also the source of hurricane again in Khanna Mansion
Hint : think who is left behind in KM on the day of trip


Ah! I knew you were gunning for Naani/Naani-maami duo! 😊


Thanks Tibs for the wonderful compliment... 🤗. But Amateur??? Really?? Are we on different planets here??? You have the gift girl... I hope you take it up as a passion since u seem to enjoy writing too. You could write and put it up in places like good reads, tumblr or other blogs. This is me being purely selfish here...since the show isn't holding your interest and the Harry Potter didn't work for either of us, I need to find other avenues for you to write and publish... 😊
Edited by DiyaKash - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow it's awesome di
What's going on between maasi n naani?? Lagta accident ki asli zar nani hi hai 😡

Finally mehak thoda toh pighal gayi
Lagta hai sk ka bhanda footne wala hai😆
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

wow this is something great news Shaurya adopted orphanage and trying to help needy Children.
Orphanage on Meera Sharma's name. this is his homeage to her from him because he was a reason of her death.
Mehek purposely messaged KK so she can find out the truth of Sharuya. now Shauya would get caught easily KK ka banda phootega 😆

Thanks for PM Tibs

Vinu ❤️


Yes you are right the trust is Shaurya trying to make amends ..
He took away two lives .. he is trying to redeem himself by making difference in the life of others ...
Nahi Mehak be Jaan boojh kar message nahi kiya tha .. Shaurya ki kismat kharaab hai .. 😆
Thanks Vinu for reading and commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandu0123

So mahek have doubt on sk now😊

Nice update...Continue soon😆😆😆


Thanks Nandu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrima02

<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">I must thank you for you know what. For the last but one, I have found the following words. But not sure whether they fit properly. This is one of my favourite songs. It has got inspirations from English poet Ben Jonson's 1616 poem "Songs: To Celia", which I had put in my last comment...</font>


<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="2">On numerous occasions, I have intended to unlock myself, to unwrap and offer my heart at your feet !! Clutching your feet I will disclose how much I love you discretely !! I have imagined you as a Goddess from the heavens !! How will I utter the words of adoration in front of you !! I have every intention to stay afar and secretly worship you in seclusion !! Concealed will remain my deep love!! Unseen will remain my droplets of tears !! I wonder if you ever seek for my acquiescence, how will I express my profound reverence towards you!!</font>



Such beautiful and apt line Chandrima
Shaurya does try to show his reverence and love in the next chapter .. do read and comment
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashiqana

Ohoo yaaar ,shaurya will never learn his lesson,by now he should have learnt to put his phone on vibrating mode. Aaag thank you that you updated after ages,and that 2 twice,you made it a happy weekend for us mehryans. This was such a kind gesture from shaurya to open a trust on her mom name,please update soon


Thanks Hon ..
I too enjoyed writing these two chapters a lot

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