Tomorrow's Promise - A Mehrya FF Chapter 6 Page 45 updated 23/07 - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PragAngel

Thank you😳

Acknowledgement is not everyone's cup of tea😛😆
I don't mind it being slow, for the quality of this writing shows how much effort it takes, requires deep thinking to come out with such an analysis. But will be waiting desperately for further updates since now on😃
My favorite elements are Earth and Sky😊Providing a base to both fire and rain, they will act as balancing factors, and the uniting ones too, otherwise, they would have never been able to come together, for wind may take rain away but is still not powerful enough to make her part ways with the sky, which will eventually let her fall on the Fire and as a result on Earth too. Fire may respond fiercely, but when mother Earth will accept the rains, her cool, soothing touch, and imbibe her in every particle, fire will douse off eventually since it can burn but cannot part her ways from the Earth. I am not a good writer and most of the times my words fail to make a sense, but I know one thing,if one have elements describing mothers, what else can we look for liking😊


Great Pragati ..
Tum toh yaar Waqai mein bahut Pragati sheel ho
Not many people get the link between earth and Fire on one hand and rain and sky ..
You are right they are the mothers ...
And people might see their flaws... but their
Prime reason for existence is to protect and propagate
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

bhai main story likh rahi hoon ...ki plot kaat kaat ka bech rahi hoon ...itna reserve 🤣

Arre yeh tho kuch bhi nahi...agar apne ne shamz ka update post karne ke baad dekhoge na kithne sare res hote !
Sab milakar ek land banaya ja saktha...uthna res hotein hain 😆

Unresd my post on the updated page 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Arre yeh tho kuch bhi nahi...agar apne ne shamz ka update post karne ke baad dekhoge na kithne sare res hote !
Sab milakar ek land banaya ja saktha...uthna res hotein hain 😆

Unresd my post on the updated page 😉


Aur mein sabsy waooli Bhai ki tarh feedback's wasool Karti Hoon ... dhamkiyaan de de kar 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09


how does tomorrow sound ...I have started writing the next part ..hopefully likh loongi


Kaash mein Kuch aur bhi maang leti 😆😆

Waiting for tomorrow's promise by you 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

<font size="4">Wow thank god ..Res...</font>

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<font size="4">Yaay !😃</font>


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<font size="4">Tibs...thank you for the detailed update ...😳, after along time... Which is dedicated to virtual friends</font>

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<font size="4">Awsum update tibs</font>
<font size="4">I thoroughly enjoyed it ...</font>
<font size="4">They still love each other , shaurya wants to see her happy ...and she is trying hard to find a reason to forgive him ...</font>
<font size="4">I'm glad mehak dint try to stop ther..instead she took her virtual friends advice abt the shape shifters and tries to give herself a chance to Start living again...</font>
<font size="4">Shaurya must felt he got the love of his life backbseeing mehak getting along with his mother and aunt ..</font>
<font size="4">Wats up with this nani ?</font>
<font size="4">I'm so glad that you have kept maasi good , just too good here ...her turmoil and POV was explained well ...</font>

<font size="4">Kk and shaurya ...😉...</font>

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<font size="4">He was jealous of himself...well he dint stop to tease her for reffering my shape shifter ...😆</font>
<font size="4">I know he was trying to change her mood ...</font>
<font size="4">And about the toad trip ?</font>
<font size="4">Is he trying to get her committed in sumthing ?</font>
<font size="4">And the weather out was not good...I'm trying to find symbolism here😕</font>

<font size="4">Okay we need next update soon tibs...bahut delay nahi chalega ...</font>
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<font size="4">As usual ...</font>

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Thanks Thabs ... as I always say your comments make my day ..
Thabs you are probably right ... He is trying her to get committed to something
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehryan

Res
Unres
Plot yaad krne ke liye 4th chapter bhi fir se khatam kar lee 😛
All chapters r awesome...fir bhi don't know kyu 5th chapter kuch jyada hi accha laga 😳


Ek hi chhat ke neeche rehkar bhi ek durse se kosho dur hai dono..

Hum Tum Kitne Door
Kitne Paas


Dono ek dusre ke jeevan sathi toh zaroor bann gaye rashmo se
Pata nhi mann se , puri kasmo ke sath kab ek dusre ke ho jayenge

Logo Ko Rab Mil Jaata Hai Yaar Nahin Milta
Yahan Wahan Kya Saath Samundar Paar Nahin Milta


Dolly maasi ka character mujhe bohot pasand aaya 😃

After reading this type of ff s I'm falling more n more for mehrya

Waiting on the next update
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For this beautiful ff


Exactly Hon hum tum kitne door kitne pass
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hai good morning😃 tibs di.
Pm mila mujhe padnemein wakth lagega.
Dictionary doondkar padne mein wakth lagega.
So fb doongi late .
Bye .happy weekend .
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res... I decided to block the plot too for now, to come back and buy later... 😉
Will be back soon...

UnRes...

Oh! Dear God Tibs! Sky is Meera Sharama! It is absolutely mind blowing! How could I not see that! I think I was too much wrapped up in Showrya and Mehak back then, to see this. Girl, you can write, you think...you are an absolute original! Please take a sincere bow from me here!

There is something in every chapter of yours that jumps out of the page and screams and grabs the reader. In this chapter, what did that for me are those few lines you write in the beginning about those conflicting emotions and whether they were losing because of the past or the present. I read and re read and re read those few lines. Isn't it true that the future influences the present as much as the past? What a chaotic mess the ghosts of the past and the hopes of the future make for the present! It is like a ball of tangled yarn...how do you untangle it all without cutting the thread, where do you even start from. It takes an incredible amount of patience, perseverance and dedication to the task of untangling what probably feels like an endless mess. But, hopefully the each bit that comes undone becomes the very fiber that bind them together...

Earth and Sky! Wow! One that grounded him and gave him the much needed roots and the other that has to set her free now! It is said that the life travels to the human body through this space. I hope the mother breathes life yet again to her daughter. The sky and its objects have so much influence on what happens below. As above, so below! I hope they turn the tides around for these two now.

Please don't reveal KK yet (I haven't read the other chapter yet, maybe you already have?). My heart goes out for her. That will be like yanking the ground from beneath both of them... they are both each other's anchor in this grief. What he says to her while she was asleep was just beautiful. I was hoping she would have heard it. I wish he permits himself to utter those unsaid words to her! Maybe that is what she needs... to give herself the permission to let go.

Your titles in itself are a puzzle! I googled to know what this eye of the hurricane is. And it says that rather than being this pocket of peacefulness caught in the midst of the violent storms, it is the cause of the whole hurricane. While calm and peaceful on land, it is also the most dangerous on the ocean. Are you referring to the relative gaiety that Mehak has temporarily brought to their lives or the pseudo calmness that KK and Mehak together have bought to their lives? Or is there is a reference I am completely missing! Like I said.puzzles...😊

Edited by DiyaKash - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Hai good morning😃tibs di.

Pm mila mujhe padnemein wakth lagega.
Dictionary doondkar padne mein wakth lagega.
So fb doongi late .
Bye .happy weekend .
😃


Haaaww Jaya .. Aisa mine kya likh diya ??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DiyaKash

Res... I decided to block the plot too for now, to come back and buy later...😉

Will be back soon...


Et Tu Diya ??

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