Illusion||MehRya os - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hai anshika..

Very well written buddy ..

You expressed the whole scenario very well.

Is it a scene we're mehak left shaurya after he destroyed her chachus shop ???

Plz continue soon...

Hey Thabassum, I am assuming that's your name
Thanks a ton!! Glad you liked it
Yup its that scene just a bit revamped
This was just a one shot ,I am not planning to continue it further at least for now

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you! Wonderful piece! So beautiful and poignant ... I just loved it!

No need to thank me 😆
Woah...thanks a lot for appreciation
Glad you liked it well

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Hey Thabassum, I am assuming that's your name
Thanks a ton!! Glad you liked it
Yup its that scene just a bit revamped
This was just a one shot ,I am not planning to continue it further at least for now

Originally posted by: hailly

Nice os dear.

Thank uu 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice..

Thanks a lot !!

Originally posted by: jasbir24

sad though I liked it I was sad it reminded me of the day she left him after taking off her chura I cried 4 her but also 4 him because he was a typical indian man don't show or say yr feelings but I saw his desperation of trying to keep hold of her 4 a woman brought up in the west expressing yr feelings & emotions are normal for both men & women please write some more

Thank uu 😊
I agree it was sad

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

very beautifully written di!!! it has a very soothing effect on the reader...the time, the space a relationship needs when there are two different people t the ends!!!

thehraav...is the word that came into my mind at the first instant...

though i longed to read that shaurya would realise and call her but the need to gather oneself overtook on the need of love!!!

loved it👏

Whoohoo thank u!!
A relationship has different dynamics rather than just cuddly and fluffy.
Ahh Thehraav, right.Exactly.
One needs time for introspection, and if shaurya called her right now then it would have destroyed the whole angst feel.

Thank u again ,bro!!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Nicely written Anishka

Keep writing girl

Vinu

Heyy vinu..
Thanks a lot .
I will ,its not easy to stop me from writing

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Yup tats my name can call me thabs / thabu...

I'm glad ur trying to continue it...lovely work👏

I gonna call h thabu,it reminds me of actress Tabu😆
I will continue it in a week or so though m not sure what the outcome will be