SHE: a mehrya one shot (part 2-c and 2-d updated) on pg 14 end

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Niha1999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow awesome...

Eagerly waiting for ur update...

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Shaurya's first make out with ghost. 😆

Yeh question sirf Shaurya ke mann mein nehin humare mann bhi aya woh kaun thi. 😆 I know it's OS but I think u should give one more shot yeh gutti suljani padegi. 😆 who was that girl with Shaurya last night 😉

Nice writing dear I hope u will give one more shot. 😛

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Shaurya's first make out with ghost.

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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Ohh Teri love story became horror story

Shabash meri Jaan ...it was a great start

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

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Sham isn't it funny 😆 bechara kaam ka mara nehin pata chala was she real or just his imagination 😆

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sunet27taherian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

this story reminds me an old english novel😊wonderful👏

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aparajita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hahahahahaha...yehi toh hai chaska...😆😆😆

To know more u have to wait...

Ghost thi ya koi aur????

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Okay..I really liked the way u wrote ...

Impressive storyline...shaurya being entrepreneur and mehak being fashion designer...👍🏼

As far as I understood is

shaurya had love at first sight ???

Wat came as a shocker is ...

Shaurya had his one night stand with a ghost 😲 ...

She was dead before two yrs 🤔...

Very well written bud ...

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aparajita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Why confused look 😛

i thoght that i did'nt write nice that's why

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aparajita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Okay..I really liked the way u wrote ...
Impressive storyline...shaurya being entrepreneur and mehak being fashion designer...👍🏼
As far as I understood is
shaurya had love at first sight ???
Wat came as a shocker is ...
Shaurya had his one night stand with a ghost 😲 ...
She was dead before two yrs 🤔...

Very well written bud ...

thank u di..

u got it right

though u too seem to be confused later

i wanted to end it here

but i will give it a second shot

😃