SHE: a mehrya one shot (part 2-c and 2-d updated) on pg 14 end - Page 12

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

I loved their confrontation and mutual trust .It's necessary in a relationship .Kaash Zindagi mein aisa confront Karne se sab Kuch theek hojatha tho Kitna acha hotha.

Awesome ending arpu.

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Arpi. ... wonderful job

Very well written..

Iss age mein you are writing like this ...

I'm just wondering tum jab thoda mature hojoygi how will you write😉

Just loved that confrontation part...though I don't like all these shit words but it was his frustration Which was coming out and I so wanted him to read that diary 😆

PS : Waiting for another master piece from you and please update your header 😛

Thanks for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: melissaR

Appu! Res... I'm going to read all the parts and come back with my comment 🤗

Ok I can't help myself from commenting on the first part...Omg! Appu that was amazing 🤗👏 But the ending...what? If she died two weeks ago then who is she? 😕 What the hell Handsome 🤣 Appu you won't believe while reading Part 1 I was listening to Thomas Rhett song "Craving You" and the lyrics was so fitting where I was reading.

Some of the Lyrics:

I never had something that I can't walk away from
But, girl, my self-control's so paralyzed
When it comes to you, no, I ain't got no patience
There's something 'bout you girl I just can't fight

You're like that cigarette
That shot of 100 proof
No matter how much I get
I'm always craving
That feeling when we kiss
The way your body moves
No matter how much I get
I'm always craving you
Craving you

Read the rest in one go. Appu 👏 👏 👏 very good job done. Its very different. A unique Mehrya story. Handsome went through a lot emotions I have to say. Poor thing *hugs* I am so proud of Cutie Pie!! 🤗 he stood by his bhai's side no matter what. Poor thing got a slap too. I felt so sorry for him when he got it. Handsome how rude! He was just trying to help you...😭

Mehek really did a lot for her Mohit. The things she did to make ends meet and to provide a good life for Mohit. Best part is Mehrya meet again and everything is all well and good 🤗 its the note he sent her... 🤣 I wonder if the helper read the note 😲 😉 😆


Appu a small request...can you translate the parts Mehek was talking to Handsome? I had to skip through those parts sorry.

Lastly... I am so happy for you my darling on your story 🤗 *mwah* I'm sorry I didn't get to read it earlier.

Originally posted by: rumeyha

Apppuuu bacchaaa❤️such a faaab update yaaar. When i read the first part I thought you had ended it here I was all ready to confront you y you did this y you didn't continue ,with all my rants basically but then i saw the last part. I was sooo happy. It was love. I loved the way you used dedicate words for this one. It was a soothing piece to read. I won't say romantic but instead it was heart pleasing. Fantastic job. Keep up the good work.

Ps. I wrote a not so long summary for you😛

Originally posted by: sunet27taherian

Unique concept with a nice ending 😊 have some gaps but it's okay 😊

Originally posted by: Santiago24

Geeky, you update too infrequently😡

Btw I loved it.. can u reduce the hindi a bit and as I am not a native speaker, find it difficult to comprehend.. 😊

Originally posted by: sudha_

Amazing update dear.. 😊
Loved it..!!
Nice ending..
❤️