You Are My Heart Beat ...Two Shot On MehRya part 2 is updated on PG 4

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Leandra

@Leandra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Make it fast eagerly waiting for next update

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svnshtty

@svnshtty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Shamz second part upload fast
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I hope today turns out the way You have written

Loved it

Edited by svnshtty - 8 years ago

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Ahida

@noya28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Shams dear nice os 🤗

But update 2 part soon eargly waiting for the next part

Edited by noya28 - 8 years ago

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stellaV

@stellaV

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Shamz 😭😭

Cliffhanger 😕 Tension nahi sahen ho rahi mujhse aaj

It was too emotional. Shaurya ki kya condition rahi hogi jab mehek ne usse bola that she's gonna die in his arms 😕😕 Thank god they have reached the hospital.

Agla part please jaldi. Double tension ho jaegi varna mujhe. Vaise bhi aaj to din hi nahi nikal raha h, aur upar se i won't be able to watch the episode too 😭

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Girls have some patience...Iam working on part 2 😛

Just got distracted...Coz it was our rank day today...Will be back and reply everyone 🤗

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

May be in the show also we would be able see this kind of scene 😲

Shaurya's condition was hopeless, he was broken the way he asked his mother to pray to her God because he wouldn't listens to him. 😭 my heart goes for him. 😭 Sharma family is angry on him but couldn't say anything at this time 😕

Waiting for next chap 😃

Thanks for PM 👏 beautiful OS 😛

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Kya kar rahe ho aap shammu...2nd part kan update karoge..?

I can't see Shaurya in this state and our poor mahek in danger...Please please update soon...I want to confess Shaurya what mahek for him...

Dekhkar palke meri kehne laga koi fakeer...,

Inn pe barkhurdar sapno ka vajan kuch kum karo...!!!

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Sudha

@sudha_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Emotional update shams.. 😭
Beautifully written dear.. 😊
Hope so aaj yeh sab serial Mai bhi ho..liked the way shaurya was asking her mom to prey to her god..
Waiting for the 2 nd part..continue soon.. 😊
Thanks fr the pm..
Lots of love nd 🤗
Sudha.. ❤️

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Cindy_Daisy

@Cindy_Daisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Res

UnRes😛

Koi mujhse kehta tha ki teri stories rula deti hai. Tu bohot badi wali draamebaaz hai. Apni stories ko thoda kam emotional banaya kar.. but ab yeh sab kya hai hmm??😲

Didu yr.. rula diya yr aapne. SK ki condition dekh ke na mujhe kisi ki yaad aa gayi. 😭

You penned it down very well yr. Every emotion every scene was just perfectly penned down😊

Keep it up for the best work you did👏⭐️

Thanks for pm😛

Give next part soon!!😉

See ya!!😆

PS - Give this story title from OS to TS (Two Shots). As there are just two parts only na so😛

Edited by CinderellaGirl - 8 years ago