Originally posted by: Parud7
Sorry sorry my Darling sanjh...yr sach me time nhi mila and bht bura lgra hai I m commenting very late and u r waiting but u know I m not feeling well so kaan pakad k sorryšš
OK when finally I read the chapter I have songs in my mind like how shaurya feels in this situation
Mere dil mein aaj kya haiii
Tu khe to mein bta du
Teri zulff fir sawaroon
Teri maang fir sja duun
Wakai jangal mein mangal hogyašmtlb hote hote rh gya hahaha
Truelly holi update is beyond my expectations and please Abhi don't remind mehak about her past let them be more closeš
And u know what I like always the best part in ur ff...when he kissed her maang that's so pure expression I like the most. How do u write yrrr ur imaginations are very deep and pureš
And whose that ugly man how dare he entered there WHAT THE HELL??š
Shaurya k lye yha bhi song hai mere pass
Hum tum ik kmre me band hon
Aur chabi kho jaaye
I liked yr and please this time delay na krna mjhe intezaar rhega next part ka. Loved the updateš
Lots of hugs to u sweety
Your lovely friend
Harryš