Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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Niha1999

@Niha1999

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Nice update dear...

It isn't a very long update... I want more... I'm becoming greedy for mehrya😉

Continue soon...

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Hey that wasn't long thou !!!

But I.loved ur effort ...it was great beyond my expectation shri !!!

But as usual ...u writers leave it hanging at the very important point !!!

I can totally imagine how mehak ignored himwen he entered the session ..

In order to break her heart , he is breaking his own Level of stupidity ...

Hope he realizes that he has fell for her , without his conscious😳

Well written ji !!

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#173

what is shaurya up to

amazing update

totally brilliant

continue soon

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soniaanna

@soniaanna

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Great one, I hope the mahek in the serial turns out like this, strong and just ignore SK

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#175

shauraya is not happy that mehek is going out with ajay what does he want.. he wanted revenge and thinks he has not done anything wrong.. so what does he actually want 😕
he is angry when his mom talks about mehek he gets irritated.. whats his problem 😕 let him sort that out first... why is shaurya wanting so much attention from mehek
i am wondering what will he do when he is attending the meeting now

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melissaR

@melissaR

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Shristi I couldn't stop laughing at Shaurya antics 🤣 🤣 🤣 I pictured every scenario in my head. Really good one 👏

Do update soon! I want to know if Mahek left the room or sat in another chair to face him directly in his face. Dun dun dun...

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candy02

@candy02

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Words woven beautifully. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Loving the tension you are building between these two. Keep her strong and make him suffer as much as you can. Have I become a sadist 😆 !!! Please update the next chapter ASAP.

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nish_vir

@nish_vir

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Really all parts in one go...I just love it when his ego hurts, I just love it when she deprives him of the satisfaction of seeing her hurt. Loved it, update soon

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Shwetz1

That wasn't long. I want more please. 😃

Aweosme. I loved it. Please update soon. Cv's to bahut wait karwa rahe hai. Plz aap mat karana. 😃

Thanks Swetz 😳. I ll be updating the teaser on Friday. Hope u like it!!!