Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 103

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

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Wowww take a bow Shri..well written Chapter..

With high on emotions... ending part was bang on...

Don't know when he is gonna realize his feelings and accept his mistake, Ahhh I hate this langoor...Kitni Bak Bak karta Hai yeh...and Shaurya was right why can't she be a bit rude with Ajay😡

10 days left for the marriage😲

And I guess something is gonna happen in party when he will realize his mistake... don't make us wait for the next chapter...

Weekend par update kardena 😉

Thanks for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

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Shri didaa wonderful update 🤗 very beautifully written ⭐️

Poor Mehak 😭 Feeling sad for her she don't want to disappoint her family that's why she is ready to marry that stupid Ajay

Yeh Ajay bahuti irritating bandha hai 🤢 yeh Ajay ko apni chehra mirror mein dekhna chahiye 😡 kudh ko sharukh samajtha hai kya

Di ek doubt hai sk ka uss samay waha hona aur Ajay ka car karab hona coincidence nahi ho saktha hai 😉 kya yeh Sab sk ne plan kiya hai kya

Yeh Ajay uss party mein janana chahtha hai issliye ithna insist kiya tha mehak ko 😆

Shukar hai iss Ajay ka Ghar jaldhi aagayi nahi toh main waha jaa kar Ajay ko laak maar ke dhakka de dethi 😉😆

Mehak har ek baath sk ko thappad se kam nahi hai 😆

Last scene was emotional 😭

Thank you for quick update didaa and sorry for trouble you 😆

I am waiting for next update😉

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Di aapne bhi emotional kardiya mujhe .Very painful chapter.Mehek didn't scolded shaurya but her words hurted him.I can understand her pain.she loved him but he betrayed her and she don't want to marry Ajay but she can't refuse her kanta Chachi's wish .He asked her many questions for which she had answers but she couldnt answer as her answers wont solve her problems.So she did the thing she could that to keep quiet.

Sorry di for this my stupid comment.What i wrote i dont know.chappals,tomatoes anything accepted.Its the effect of watching zkm today.

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Mehek doesn't want to get married Ajay she is not feeling comfortable with him. She feels something is not right but she can't refuse to her family especially Kanta chachi.

Good for nothing Ajay took her dinner thank God like in the show he did take her to pub. Shaurya trying make her understand not to get married Ajay but he couldn't give certain reason for her not to get married him.he is loss of words in front of her. He can see she is going away from him he felt something in his heart but still he is not able to give name for that feelings. Hope he realise his feelings for her & confess before bina pooch ka longoor Mehek ko udake leke jaye.🤣

Thanks for PM Sri

Vinu

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

Originally posted by: Sanjh30

Lovely update! Beautifully written once again 👏
Hats off for your talent my dear ..really appreciate your story here ..please continue writing because your writing skills is just "wow!" 👏

I think langoor pitega party mein 😆
Hopefully Shaurya realizes his love for Mehek soon 😳
Waiting for next chapter soniye 😆
Love and hugs,
Sanjh 😎

Originally posted by: rumeyha

This was such a beautiful update. I so so sooo love your storyline. Update soon please 😉

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hola shri ...first I shud definitely tell u a big

For the update ...u we're bugged a lot for it 😆

Cuming to the update...

Who is this shaurya ? Haan ??

He sounds completely different from previous 😳

I can feel the poor girl , wat must b going on in her mind...

She was ready to marry ajay only for the sake of her family

I cud feel her helplessness...she cudnt even share it with sonal ..

And ajay being a jerk was trying to built up things in front of mehak

He is just too much 😡..

Doono wen will we get rid of him and his mother , here 🤢

The car convo was perfect , she doesn't leaves a single chance to make him realize wat he did to her ...

And at the very end , she just hit the nail in his head ...

Well let's see wat the party holds ...

Shri bud ⭐️ , !!

Keep it up ...

PS...sorry thoda zayada bugging hogaya 😆

PPS ...wen will this flash back end 🤔 😆

Originally posted by: richasharma0991

Beautiful yaar .

U writing is amazing it conveys even the silent emotions .

I like this mehek but really wanted her to take a stand on marrying that ajay . I m waiting for this party.

Update soon yaar