Mehrya SS:When will you confess Mr. Khadoos kumar? Last Part Upd.15/10

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YourNightmare

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Posted: 7 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

You got it right harry 😉...alright getting late here good nitev...take care of ur hand and health ...don't stress too much ...samjihi !

Good night Thabs🤗...i sure will, i am going too..Take care thabu

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YourNightmare

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Posted: 7 years ago

#532

So here comes the final chapter Shri

Loved it...Shaurya was angry at her for not answering his proposal and made her work for it but in the process he got jealous and angry 😆 when Mehak was applying Mehendi and that Kunal told to put his initials on her hand and he left without seeing Mehak didn't do it and that scene afterwards was so beautiful...She put his initials and she also accepted his proposal...One thing i would add his i would have liked to have read about Karuna's reaction to this as well, as earlier you brought her up i thought she would make an entry at some point but no worries we know she would be jumping with joy at finding out its Mehak😃

Great Job Shri🤗...This was a wonderful story indeed i read all those chapters in one go to where u left it couldn't get enough of it and then i got more to read and we have you to thank for it😳

Hope you come up with another story soon as u are a brilliant writer and ur huge talent should always be on display😳

Edited by HaRiSKh - 7 years ago

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vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#533

Shaurya was very cute he was just acting being angry on Mehak. He knows how to rule his lady love and played well his avoiding games. was Karan purposely told write his name or had he feelings for Mehak. 🤔 proposal was best finally Khadoos proposed her & they are going to get married in future.

No Epilogue why? 🥺
Thanks for PM Shristi
sorry for late reply 😒

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#534

Bdw yeh shri nazar kyun nahi aah rahi hai aaj kal ?!?!? 😳

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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Mera bhi res ...
Last chapter😲
UNres ..
Shri this can't be the last chapter😲
There is so much scope to write more..
Iam sure you can bring out one more chapter from this or at least a Epilogue...
It was a beautiful update... MS made excuse and stayed back but to her surprise Shaurya was already in the ceremony...she joined them and had applied henna on her hand .. Shaurya was still trying to Ignore her 😆
Finally things got cleared and a happy ending😳
But still want to read more😛
Thank you for the PM 😃

thank you for ur comments Sham...the last two chapters were bonus chapters...I didnt wish to drag this story coz i always feel that a story loses its essence if its dragged too much...

I m glad that you liked this story...i m planning to write an OS so i am putting all my energies there😆

Warning you to expect a delay there!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: Misthilove
res...
unres..
di, it was beautiful update.
oh! this shaurya khanna is such a naughty soul.so this is the actual reason, why he show his anger for 2 long days- just for the revenge😳 for not answering his proposal.i wonder hw mehak gonna manage her whole life with this jealous fellow.she trully said when it comes to her his brain stop working😆😆😆
this is final chapter and no epilougue???😭 Yes Misthi there wont be any epilogue coz i m really bad at writing one😆😆
no di,atleast try to write a small part of epilougue,pretty please😊
lots of love to u our beautiful writer.
do come with a new story soon.

Appreciate your love for this story Mishti..Earlier, i had planned to write only 2 chapters for this..but then i started adding scenes and it came to 9 long chapters!!!!

Lots of love to you sweetheart!!!😳

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thabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: shristi0706
...i m planning to write an OS so i am putting all my energies there😆

Kya ?

Kyaa ?

Kyaaa?

Dayum ...Dayum ...Dayum...😲😆

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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: Manjulaiju
Res
Unrez. Beautiful chapter😃 Shrishti thanks for the update😉
Now coming to the chapter its wonderful. Istly Mehek wanted a confrontation from SK regarding his love and she made him confess his love. SK also is stubborn like MS 😆 when he proposed her she never given a return reply reply immediately. So he actually took his sweet revenge by making her to confess her love in a tricky way😆 i am happy that in the end both of them won and their love with a new beginning.
Once again thanks😛

This is the Shaurya Khanna tht i have always loved!!! We all know he always has his way so i wanted Mehak to come running to him confessing her feelings...😉😉😉

Yes, Mehrya are indeed a perfect match for each other..A match made in heaven😳😳😳

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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: dewcute
Everything is over! 😒

Story ended suddenly and then there is no Epilogue!😔
Oh this is so depressing..heartbreaking...help..me...I am..falling into the depths of depression!!.😭😭😭

Shut up my drama queen!!!😆😆😆

Its just the beginning of something more beautiful n passionate!!!!

DiD my story really depress you so much????😭😭😭

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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: cvdmerwe40
why did you end the story like this 😡 leave us all hang for more 😡 thank you for a beautiful update. was nice to read about jealous sk again

Thank you so much Cindy!!!

I love seeing a jealous SK rather than a jealous MK...

Hope my dreams come true when he starts wooing back while she keeps going away from to the idiotic Mandar