Mehrya drabble * Apology * updated drabble page 2 !!! - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...mini...!


Another naughty one shot from your side...! You and your obsession of Shaurya drenched and wet body, control mini...control...or you'll get drown yourself...! 😆

An awesome and hot drabble...! Loved and enjoyed reading it...! My poor Shaurya...he even cried when Mehek didn't accept his apologies...! But..Shaurya is a brave warrior...he will insist, until he has the upper hand...! He knows the battle will be difficult...but, he'll try his best to win this War of Forgiveness & Love...! ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intense and poignant...
Perfectly written...
Meheks anger was right at its place...nd so was his guilt.
Shaurya crying...i mean thats something impossible... but his tears were true enough..to proove that he was guilty..nd apologized from his heart
Hw i wish they show something similiar to this onscreen..
Loved it mini!
Amazing drabble...

Love Sharmi

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: oceanus85

Awesome update. I really liked it. I was totally imagining the scene in my head. Mehak opening the door to find a wet Shaurya. Then Shaurya pinning Mehak to the wall and Mehak hitting him and throwing him out of the house. Very intense. Can't wait for an update.



Thanks dear

Glad u liked it

Will update soon 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its awesome ...both r in deep pain aww my poor babies ...thanks for the update ...update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely brilliant..dil maage more..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon


thanks dear


glad u liked it


will post a part 2 soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Wow awesome...
Shaurya trying hard to get apology from Mehek... But Mehek is shattered from inside that she can't forgive him so easily... The trauma which her family went in that can't be forgetable...

Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tibs09

Great .. Intense .. Loved it how u linked it to what his Mom had said and what Dadaji said to M ..
Very well written


thanks a lot dear

glad u likedit 😃

after all meheks pain of not letting him call dadaji has pierced her heart 😳
Edited by miniapplepie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great story..very emotional ...
Nice writing !

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