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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: nicky13

Oh great .. It's awesome... Please continue it:)



ThAnks dear

Glad u liked it

Will post the update soon ... In a matter of minutes
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajvilover

interesting teaser

continue
and update soon


thanks dear

glad u liked it

will update in few minutes😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Hi guys , so heres the complete drabble , hope you like it and please let me know how it is

Mehrya drabble : Apology
Mehek was alone at her house as the family had went to a wedding as mehek wasnt feeling well... The rainy season and cold had made hr ill...

It was raining outside ... Somebody ranf the bell of the house ... Mehek was on bed resting ... She was wearing black salwar suit ... She got up and took her dupatta ...
And went to open the door... When she opened the door... The sight in front of her had left her shocked : Shaurya Khanna standing in front of her in the rain drenched from head to toe ...looking at her With blood shot eyes ... (he was wearing a white shirt blue and black tie and dark blue trousers )
M. Tum ! Tumhaari himaat kaise hui mere ghar aane ki !

And she tried to close the door on his face ... But he didnt let hr close it ...and came into the house without her permission ... His shirt was transparennttedd as it was wet , hence His well toned upper body ws exposed in front of her , Mehek was looking at him with fear mixed with hatred ... As he walked in and closed the door behind him...
M. Darwaaza kyun band kiya tumne ?!
She took few steps ahead to open it in shock... but he stopped her grabbing her arms ... She looked at him ...in his eyes ... As he was staring her eyes... With pain and regret
S. Mujhse aaj tak itni badi galti nahi hui hai... Kabhi nahi... Aur ... Jo maine kiya ...woh... Woh galti nahi thi... Woh ek bahut bada gunaah tha...
M. Mujhe tumhaari koi bakwaas nahi sun ni hai... Nikaljao mere ghar se...!!

She took his arm and tried to drag him out of her house but he ended up pinning her to the door ... Placing his hands on the door on each side of her ...
S. Mein yahaan... Tumse maafi maagne aaya hoon Ms Mehek Sharma... ( he said in angr and helplessness as she didnt want to hear a word of what hecwanted to say )
M. Maafi ? Kis baat ki maafi ? Kis kis galti ki maafi maango ge tum ? ! Tumhaari wajah se mere dadaji ne mujhe unhe dadaji bulane mana kar diya !( she continued getting more hyper and shouting histerically crying )Tumhaari wajah hamari itni badnami hui hai ! tum jaise ghatia aur gire hue aadmi ko toh mein kabhi zindagi mein dekhoon bhi nahi ...(then she started to hit his chest strongly in great anger )
S. Mehek... Mehek...meri baat suno ... ( he stopped her grabbing both her warm soft forearms ...she looked at him ...devasted )
M. Mujhe kuch nahi sunna... Tum bas meri zindagi se duur chale jao ...
S. Tumhaari zindagi se toh duur jaana hi hai Mehek ...kyunki mujhe kabhi kisi ladki ka pyaar nahi milega... ( she looked at him with confused eyes and he started having tears in his eyes, and his ears were getting really reddish ) ... Bas... Itna kehne aaya tha ki... Mere gunaahon ki tumhe jo sazaa dehni hai de do mujhe ...tum jo bologi mein woh karunga ... Please tum mujhe maaf kardo mehek ... Please ( few tears fell on his cheeks )
M. ( she cut him ) kar diya maaf ... Chalo jao yahan se ab ... ( she said wiping her tears and composing herself ) kar diya tumhe maaf ... Ab nikal jao mere ghar se ...

And she forcefully grabbed his cold arm ... Opened the door and basically throwing him out of her house she closed the door on his face... Leaving him standing in the rain ... Which was now heavier than before ... After closing the door... She sat down breaking down... Crying her heart out...
M. Kaise? Kaise maaf karun mein tumko Shaurya khanna ? ... Kitna bhi chahun... Toh bhi tumhe mein kabhi maaf kar nahi sakti ! Kabhi nahi !
Shaurya stood in front of the door... Knowing very well... His apology wasnt accepted ... And will never be accepted , after what he did...
S. Mein haar nahi manunga... Mein phir koshish karunga ...
He said... Devasted ... Helpless.. But with a slight hope in his heart , that his apology might be accepted some day.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Awesome update. I really liked it. I was totally imagining the scene in my head. Mehak opening the door to find a wet Shaurya. Then Shaurya pinning Mehak to the wall and Mehak hitting him and throwing him out of the house. Very intense. Can't wait for an update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
wow
awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Great .. Intense .. Loved it how u linked it to what his Mom had said and what Dadaji said to M ..
Very well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
i was hell shocked Shaurya Khanna in tears , crying , and was begging of apology ... serious i was hell shocked ...

but was lovely ... update soon
... and keep writing more i love your writing
... thora romance zaroor dalna

i will waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
hi dear well firstly let me say i enjoyed it although i don't speak hindi need english subtitles 😆 the way how you described the scene is brilliant i did not need any subtitles to enjoy and understand this.⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Beautifully written . . I loved the scene . . . Don't know if you would continue this story but I would seriously want too see more. . . . Fingers crossed 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
🤗 👍🏼 👏
Loveeed it... ❤️

Could you continue it please??? 😳

I think am addicted to Mehrya... cant read enough of them... 😆

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