MehRya FF: Empire Updated Ch4: pg 12 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
go mehak
amazing updates
absolutely brilliant
love them
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
As much as I anticipated, and wouldn't have minded on bit, a bash to the head for Mr. Shaurya Khanna, what you did was so so much better. I read the update with a smile on my face, with both the unexpected turn of events, and the fact that Mehek was smarter in not resorting to violence... and Shaurya's fall was even more satisfying at any rate...not too violent, but just as effective
Loving this story so much,

Kelly
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall...
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall... 🤣

Serves him right... 👍🏼

Great update... want more... ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
It's awesome oh my God 🤣🤣🤣
Shaurya deserve it 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Oops Girr giya Shaurya... Poor boy ... But the question is that Ke what will Mehak do now and most importantly my question is that Ke what will he do now .. Gussa !!! Awesome update... Next part update soon.. Can't wait for the reaction...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Amazing update dear. Loved it.
Shaurya fell on the floor was nice. 😆
Continue soon please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Hey...Ash...!

You're in a roll these days...updating so fast...! And I'm not complaining...! This chapter is so refreshing, funny, sweet, entertaining and hilarious...packed and parceled in one courier...! So...will make my review sweet and short...!

This time your verses defined and compliments both MehRya..and the situation they're in right now...!I'm enjoying this continual game of cat and mouse...!

The cat @ Shauya likes to play with the mouse @ Mehek...before the killing blow...it's a metaphor...! Here...Shaurya is trying to intimidate and make Mehek weak by using his charm and his physical proximity to disarm her (the weapon is the famous vase)...!

In a race between a cat and a mouse...the mouse mostly wins...! Because the cat runs for its food (Mehek)...and the mouse runs for its life...! To save her life and evading the false accusation of Shaurya threatening menace i.e, making him the victim and her the assaulter...Mehek abides to his order and lets go of the vase...! The first time Mehek surrenders before Shaurya...resulted in the downfall of the Great Shaurya Khanna...! The man who always like to place/put himself on a pedestal and considers himself to be a King...for the first time, fell flat on his butt...and that too, before a nobody...a middle-class girl with no nobility...! What a shocking moment for Mehek...and what an embarrassing one for Shaurya...! This scene is epic...! 👍🏼😆

But...Mehek should know, never to play cat and mouse games...if you're a mouse...! She should remember, when the mouse laughs at the cat..there should always be a hole nearby to escape...!

For once...the mouse didn't run...and be tagged as a coward...! Though...she is in the receiving end...she decided to face and challenge her enemy like a brave...! Good going Mehek...proud of you..! Women Empowerment...! 👏

Well...as of now...! The vase is still safe and intact...but, for how long...?


Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Hey Ash...! Hope everything is fine and ok from your side...! Not seen you active these passing days...?

When are you updating this FF of yours..! Waiting...waiting..! Please come back soon sweetheart...!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
OMG shaurya fell down haha just picturing it in my head haha totally loved it.
loved whole series
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Superb updates dear ..really loved the way u wrote ...
Esp the one u write in the beginning of updates !

Read it one go !

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