Hi...Ash...! Sorry for late review...was kind of busy...! 😊
Woww...didn't get time to read the 1st Chapter...and you've already updated the second one...! Good going girl...! Amazing start...and awesome story...love it...!👏
Well..read the two parts in one go...! What a brilliant idea to introduce each chapter with those poetic verses...four short phrases, but so meaningful..! They give an indication what to expect from each update...!
What a powerful entry/introduction of Shaurya Khanna...the man, whom one should think twice before trespassing into his land, and invade his Kingdom...! A Kingdom which, he is the King...which he hasn't received in heritage or by magic...but, built/set up with his hard-works, times, determinations, devotions, sacrifices and sweats...!
Until recently...Shaurya was the powerful King who used to control his subjects with his strict rule of law...but, still thirsty and kept on looking for even more power and control...! But...the day, he crossed the path of a girl @ Mehek Sharma..who wasn't even a princess or belong to the aristocrat society...his life changed for the worst...! The very first time, his eyes met hers...he knew, she carry troubles along with her...! Troubles...especially for him, his power and his kingdom...!
To punish her for invading his privacy and creating turbulence in his well-organized life...he imprisoned her in his castle...in a secluded and remote place, far from her family and the outside world...! Although...the girl hated the cruel King, as he was the cause of all her miseries...deep down, she respected him...! He was a hardworking and respectable King who was respected by all his people...!
When one day...Mehek, the girl got the chance to contact her family, to let them know she was fine...using the help of some carrier/homing pigeons @ the media...King Shaurya anger reached another level...! Accusing her of betrayal, trying to be in the spotlight and trying to take control of his Kingdom...by gaining the sympathy of the outside world...he decided to punish her using physical force...forcing himself, into her chamber...!
Mehek...who was a timid, shy girl...was forced to become a warrior...to defend herself from the atrocious behaviors of her captor...! Till now...she has always faced and fight with him on equal grounds...and even won the battle many times...! But...this time, the war seems more difficult...as her opponent isn't a human anymore...but a Beast with an incredible force...!
Well...Ash...! I think I shall have to wait for your next update to know who won the battle this time..."Beauty or the Beast"...?⭐️
Edited by Waida1234 - 8 years ago
