MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: Diva200
Kelly, I read all the chapters together, little time ago and I wanted to post reply but I could not find this thread. I want to say that I love this story so much and that you are brilliant writer👏.
I liked the KK and Ms conversation and the connection they made. Sk falling in love with her just with this connection is lovely and I love his character on here. Also Sk shock in seeing her at ICU and their meetings, dance the kiss was lovely and not to forget the wet dream where you managed to fool us that they slept together with your fantastic writing. You have brought the story so well together.
So will Mehak be happy to see Sk before everything is cleared, I think Rajeev and Karuna ma will help to sort their problems. Will she wear the black dress for him ?
Many congrats to the proud mum and I hope you have great time with family 👍🏼.

Please update when you have time.

Hi Diva,

Thanks so much for the comment. I have finally made some progress with a first of two part update of the next chapter...I had so much in mind for this chapter that I had to split in two. I hope you get the opportunity to read. And yes it the upcoming this infamous black dress will make an appearance.

Do let me know what you think of what I have posted, and thanks again for the commenting😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: mandu
Wow Kelly...you write very well...I opened this thread not even expecting anything...but this is way beyond ...mesmerizing...I had to read it all without stopping and I'm on tenterhooks to read more.
Please do update soon

Thank you so much Mandu. I am so happy to have you on board reading. I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses.😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: Kaval05
Hey love your friends. The way you have written the characters and presented the story is amazing. Also your writing style is great as well. I hope you come back soon and continue to write! I stopped watching the show long time ago; it wasn't able to hold my interest for too long but your FF is amazing... Sometimes FF are better then the shows itself.
Waiting to read more...update soon

You are absolutely correct. Where as the shows tend to go astray after a while, the FFs usually make up for it, and ZKM is blessed to have so many talented writers on the forum, so if nothing else we are always entertained😛

Thank you for appreciation my version on MehRya. I am looking forward to updating on a regular basis now, and hope that you stick around for the story

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: snehatara
Res. Will come back Kelly with my comments.
Good morning from India, Kelly.😃

Unres.

Kelly, you sure made us wait long for this beautiful update. Thanks anyways for taking time and
updating. Things must have settled down and you must be breathing easy. Congratulations proud
Mom on your daughter's success and gaining yourself another daughter close to your heart.😊⭐️

Shaurya landing up at Mehek's place and seeking his MS. May be deep down he knew MS and
Mehek were the same. But he needed to find this out himself and the face off seemed inevitable.
Karuna is being shrewd and wants Shaurya to know things by himself and doesn't give any hints.
Finally, the realisation hits Shaurya and now he knows Mehek is his MS and he confronts Mehek
and dares her to speak the truth. Mehek now has the chance to pay Shaurya back for his treachery
and lies that this time she played with his emotions. I don't think Shaurya will buy her lies and will
make her confess her feelings. He knows Mehek is not a revengeful person and can never do
something like that. She is being indifferent to him and saying hurtful things to protect herself from
a hear break, just a defence mechanism. But these two have cosmic connection and are meant to
be together. Destiny will find its own way to bring them together and unite them forever.

Thanks Kelly for the wonderful update. ⭐️👏👍🏼

@ bold: thank you so much. It has been such and exciting time for us as a family and you have succinctly summed up everything here. Ah the stories I could tell LOL😆 However I am happy that we some normalcy has returned to daily life.

As it pertains to part A: you understand completely, but hopefully I haven't revealed everything. Hopefully I can manage to throw in a few unexpected things as the story progresses!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: sarroo
Nice update... loved it.. thanks for the pm

NP dear, I am glad you enjoyed it and took the time out to comment. Will be working on part B on the weekend.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Hey Kelly Darl, welcome back! 🤗
Hope you had a lovely time with your family.
It was an awesome dhamakedaar update, but yeh dil maange more!...
Eagerly waiting for Part B...can't wait to know Mehak's pov...
Will get back with more comments in a bit... Update soon!

Hi Patsy, how are you?

I am not back on the forum as I once was, but am happy to have finally made some headway with my FF. I had so much that I wanted to include in the chapter, but felt it important to get SK there properly, so I changed my mind from picking right up from their confrontation, and gave more of a backstory of his travel. And then I realized that Mehek POV should be expressed as well, so I decided that this would be the approach for Ch 24...hence we will have and A and B.

Will be working on B this weekend, so hopefully another post will be coming in a day or so! I will PM when it's ready.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Res
UNres..

Had to wait really long for this confrontation but at the end of the chapter their misunderstanding haven't resolved 😲... hope in next chapter they will clear their MU's 😛

Well written update as usual Kelly...and mahek tried her best to handle the situation... looking forward for the next chapter⭐️

Update soon
Thank you for the PM 😳

Hi Shamz...or is Ms Coolbie now😛. Congrats on all of the exciting things going on with you on the forum...these accolades are well deserved my friend.

Now, to your comment.

Surely you didn't expect me to solve everything in one chapter now did you😆. C'mon you should know better. Aiming to have Meheks POV completed this weekend, and will certainly pm you when it is ready.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: Nandu0123
Nice update ...Continue soon😃

Thank you Nandu😊

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Diva200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#969

Lovely update, worth waiting long for😛

Karuna was cool and she did not give any hint to Sk about Mehak and MS being same, as she wanted him to work it out himself.

So finally KK and MS meet but Mehak is too hurt to accept him easily. Sk will not give up easily so he will try his best to win her over. Rajeev might be able to help to sort the misunderstanding.

So when will she wear the black number ? Pls update soon ⭐️

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Hi Kelly welcome back 🤗
Loved the update 😊 so the MU continues waiting for Mehak's POV 😊 and how SK will pacify her 😆

Thanks so much Sharlene, how have you been?

Finally back to the writing, and some more back and forth with MehRya. And since you know how much I like my secondary characters playing an active role in my story, there is that to look forward to as well.

Hmm a meet up between SK and Chef Malik could be interesting don't you think😆

Will PM when the next update is ready.