MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 76

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -mina-

Not what I was expecting at all!! I am intrigued as ever. Loving the maelstrom of emotions in this chapter. On tenterhooks for the next one!


Shaurya now infamous dream was but the tip if the iceburg I'm afraid. Interesting times ahead for sure. Thanks for the read and comment mina.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Kelly Di I feel dizzy reading ur update..

Just when expectations had fully grown its limbs u make us confront something which was unexpected from u and expected from a story...
So dignified a relationship faced such a tremendous downfall...Di its the MAHA TWIST that u have brought just to dismantle all our hopes from their root...ohhh good lord!!
I felt like crying when mehek said she had enough of sobbing..and when MALIK showed up...
But I really think that malik would react as an angry young Indian man who would run up to confront shaurya..just to seek ANSWERS!!

I expect to face another rollercoaster ride!!

Di we expect quick update..
For our heart's sake Di.. 👏😭

Thanks for the pm di

Frankly I have no clue how published writers do this sort of thing on a regular basis. I have had as many qualms just knowing I was approaching unchartered waters in this tale. There is definitely more to come and I hope that I am able to do the story justice. Aiming to increase the frequency of the updates to cover everything that has to happen so look for a pm sooner than later.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Hold on what is going on here...how come on Earth Uday knows about MS ...iam sure it's Rajeev behind this ...esha...uday and Rajeev are upto something??

It's an astonishing twist Kelly
I can't wait for next week to know what all happened how come there is such a big MU between them

Waiting for the next...do update soon

And there you were doing practice attacks for an update Shamz😛. See what happens when you do...I come up with amazing and unexpected twists😕
Seriously though, i expected this one to throw everyone for a loop even more than SK dream.

I did want to point out that Rajiv is and will remain a good guy in my ff...as to the other two you have mentioned well thats another story. Aiming to update more frequently which means I will also respond to the reviews quicker as well...hopefully by midweek I will be ready to post...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Reserved till I get over this Maha Twist
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update👏Finally when she decides to come clean you gave this unfortunate turn 😲 Koi nai warna story aage kaise badhegi😛 Poor shaurya trapped...eagerly waiting to know what happens next. Pls update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read last 2 chapters in one go.
Eagerly waiting to know what next.
Is Esha n Uday done this together?
How shaurya is going to sort out everything?
I have many more questions in mind after reading last chapter.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

And there you were doing practice attacks for an update Shamz😛. See what happens when you do...I come up with amazing and unexpected twists😕
Seriously though, i expected this one to throw everyone for a loop even more than SK dream.

I did want to point out that Rajiv is and will remain a good guy in my ff...as to the other two you have mentioned well thats another story. Aiming to update more frequently which means I will also respond to the reviews quicker as well...hopefully by midweek I will be ready to post...


Good than i don't have to bang my head...how this uday came to know abouts their chats...do he have any hidden motives 😲😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kelly for sure u have given us a heartbreak update this time, a very shocking one indeed. 😕This chapter has made me to go back and read all the previous chapter to see where Uday fits in and how does he know about MS. ST has affected u a little I think 😲 and you have started giving us astonishing and unique twists. Hope doesn't fall into Malik's way on rebound. When one is vulnerable, the rebound effect could be very bad. We waited and waited for your next update and got a bomb ourselves. Hope people have started with theirs and bombarding you already with all their might.😉😆 Good luck to us for ur next update. Bring in peace Kelly.😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome Kelly ⭐️ update soon 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kelly,
What was that? Just as were anticipating a blossoming love story, you dropped a MOAB 😔

Where did this Uday get hold of all the information? So was it Uday who had been tampering with Mehek's phone while she had supposedly left it in Rajiv's cabin?

How is Esha fitting into all of this? What's she got to do in this whole fiasco?

Poor Mehek, she's so heartbroken and feels betrayed. 😭
And Shaurya is clueless (wish he manages to figure out what's going on before it's too late)

Let's see what happens now. Will be waiting eagerly for the next update (N don't worry..u'r doing fantastic as a writer...😃)
Edited by jhankarbeats87 - 8 years ago

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