MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Awesome update Kelly...

Loved to see their encounters now 😛

Malik is such a sweet character...

Loved the Scene where SK caught staring at her 😆

Men will be men 😛

Waiting for the next chapter ...Thnx for the PM 😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Res 😛🤣

I was so unnerved by that cracker that my brain ceased to function. 😆 I didn't even respond to the comments on the last chapter.

I have no idea how Shristi et al handle such intimidation😲

Off to bed now, hope you enjoy the chapter...or what you may consider the mother of all teasers to this MehRya dinner date😆

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tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Oh Kelly jaan ... the trick is not to take cognizance at all of the bombers .. till you are happy with what you have written and posted ...
And treat the bombs as hugs and kisses from them...
BTW intriguing chapter and I am in love with that blue outfit

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Hello Everyone...it is 11:15 PM here, so according to Atlantic time, I am keeping my promise to post the chapter today😆

Thanks everyone for the anniversary wishes. You know you have a keeper, when he not only makes the dinner reservations, but also sets the DVD to tape ZKM so you can watch it later😳 I have spared myself from seeing Nani in action😡, but plan on doing so tomorrow.

I guess I did okay with this teaser eh...don't worry, I won't make it a habit. Also I am not going to torture you any longer by responding individually to everyone's teaser posts.

So here's one collective hug 🤗 to all of you who responded, speculated, and whichever camp you found yourself in pro or con tryst...I hope you all enjoy the chapter and it satisfies your curiosity.

Please let me know If it meets your expectations

Kelly

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Res 😆

Good Morning Kelly

UNres..

Loved the update...so Shaurya has taken his first move...

After discussing with his 3 well wishers back home 😛

He doesn't want to put himself in any kind of risk...

That was a great move by him...

If Malik wasn't enough to annoy us you have brought his mom as well but looks like she is indirectly gonna help Shaurya... how easily he can judge a person and knows exactly what's gonna come next his way...

Mahek is still confused...she wasn't happy when she heard that he has left and now again she isn't happy to see him back...😆

Waiting for the next chapter... update soon dear

Thanks for the PM 😃😳

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Shamz15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Kelly I have tears in my eyes...just woked up and got to read the teaser... Which was full of SK chat...Great work you were able to bring out his inner turmoil so Well... Can't wait for the whole update...

Thnx for the PM 😊

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

That was beautiful. ..you ur are such a tease...

How long are you going to make us wait for this😒

A glimpse into what made shaurya what he is today..

Good going

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Woow...now that is sum intense feelings of Shaurya...

He had to bear so much pain...

Lost his love ...

I was totally flattered reading his feelings ...glad he tried to share it to his friend ..

I'm now eager to know wat wud be ms reaction to it..

Do update soon ji ...

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

No need to chat when you are FACE-TO-FACE 😉

ENJOY 😛

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Mina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

What a punchy ending!! That was a very satisfying chapter Kelly, thanks for including all of these scenes. Hehe I feel Shaurya's balance will not soon be restored - there's so much he doesn't know. Will be intrigued to see how it goes. Loving Mehek's return home after a period of independence and growth. Will we be seeing much of her with her family? I know to tell a focused story they may not fit but "home" can only mean family na? 😉

Also, I still remember receiving a PM from you when I was posting one of my first fics, and your appreciation meant so much to me ❤️. I accidentally deleted all my PMs a few months ago so I no longer have it but I do remember it well. Was beyond excited to see your name as a fic author when I peeked in on the forum specifically hoping to find an interesting story! Loving the progress and looking forward to more 😊

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