MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Thanks for the pm Kelly

Loved the update ⭐️

Shaurya is one jealous man love their online chat hope to see more of their discussion 😆

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Chapter 8 :

I know i m very late n I m extremely sorry for that so pls forgive me.

Another fabulous update!!! Loved it...Poor Shaurie is seething in jealousy thinking tht his MS has found another "god friend". I can totally understand his dislike towards Malik.

Just a point, didnt Mehak mention about Rajeev Sir to Shaurya while chatting..am i reading too much between the lines or has she given away her identity to her online admirer Shaurya Khanna!!!

I m also loving the fact tht they are talking and discussing about their daily activities...such a common thing between two people in a relationship and here clearly Shaurie wants more than friendship with MS.

Now as per Uday's suggestion Mehak will be back in the new season of ISC...well tht will surely lead to some fireworks...Ok so now off to reading the next update!!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Chapter 9:

Hmm...so Shaurya Khanna has competition and tht too from a guys with an amazing simple n cute dimples!!! He is so insecure to lose MS to this Malik tht he googled this guy!!!Jelaous Shaurie!!

He seems to be a decent guy to me and he doesnt remotely seem interested in her romantically.

Waiting for the next update!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Yaay...again first to cumnt 😉⭐️
So the dinner date was actually ...official haan 😉
I mean the set up..and thier talks we're just perfect ..

Malik seem to be one gentle man 😳

And the description of

Was good 😉😆
And description of malik ...cute smile and dimples ..was just ..

Which literally made shaurya jealous 😆 that he googled his info ...😆

I really love the way mehak just answerd shaurya ...
She was bang on ..
And shauryas inner thoughts wer ...true 👍🏼
Very well written ..it's was a

Update so

⭐️

Thank you Thabs...IMO Mehek deserved a little fun with a simple albeit attractive guy😆. I am glad that you enjoyed the details of their date, and of course SK angst 😉. A few chores to take care of then I hope to begin the next chapter.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Loved the chapter... Though there were few chats ...Hope we will get to see more of chatting session in the next chapter😉
Liked the way you described Malik...He is so charming that The Shaurya Khanna strated feeling unsecured ...Men will be men 😛😛😛

Thnx for the PM Kelly and please update soon 😊

The lack of chat in this update will be more thand made up for in the next Shams😊. And yes why not introduce a charming potential suitor for Mehek she deserves it in my view. But of course thus has kicked in SK territorial thoughts...as you say men😕😆. Looking to start the next update later today after some work and will pm when it is ready to go.

Thanks for commenting😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: jani_faizal
I guess we too have to wait to see what Shaurya's message was. Hope we can get a teaser...

Hopefully you , and Mehek😉, will find the message worth the wait. I would prefer to post the next update in its entirety, but should it take longer than expected then I will post a teaser for sure.

Thanks for reading and commenting

Kelly

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Mehek's dinner date with Malik is official..
She has bowled over by his dimple smile.. 😉
Shaurya is jealousy & went to Google him.. 😆
Mehek spoke to her family members after long. 😛

Shaurya got good answer from Mehek.. 😆
She just ignored his messages.. 😆

Nice chap & thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

@Kelly 👏... I am at awe with your writing style. I loved the interaction in chapter 8. SK is arrogant, egoistic moron, who is stubborn regarding his unapologetic approach to every goddamned thing on this earth. He is trying but metamorphosis is impossible for any living human being. He is very true to his character. Chapter 9 mainly deals with MS' introspection regarding the new guy in her life and inadvertently comparing him with the one who has, unknown to her, taken quite a few strides to reside in her mind permanently. I am eager about their next face to face interaction for ISC S2 and SK knowing MS' actual identity. Should I say can't wait any longer. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

Dinner date. Chef Malik you are a very good competitor. Shaurya had me doing the maths 🤣 Handsome you lost your second chance before it even started. You need to tell MS that you like her strange as it seems. Your jealousy and your ability not to trust got in the way. But you have to set that record straight and then apologize for your behaviour. Good one Kel.

I don't know I can't wrap my head around Mahek staying at Disney. I feel bad for Handsome. Poor thing is struggling between his feelings for MS and the tashan between Mahek. I'm sure being bias for Shaurya. Smh* but something between Malik and Mahek I won't mind seeing. Although he reminds me of the angel version of Shaurya. Won't Mahek think the same? Shaurya will always be on her mind. If I was her I'll be thinking if Shaurya had the ability to be like Malik if things were different. KK is nice... Shaurya is the devil fighting his own demons that she got sucked in

Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago

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melissaR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Hey Mel, hope things are getting back to normal for you. I've seen you a bit more active on the forum, so I assume things are getting better. So happy that you have caught up and have enjoyed what you have read.

Yeah, I decided to make CM a bit of a cutie, a little older but appealing all the same😉. Shaurya will not be a happy camper for sure LOL.

I do like you thought of Mehek's return though...great potential in that 😊

Kel not quite. More active but not as much as I want to. Using my phone for the time being. I'm happy for catching up too! 😆

Sure right Handsome isn't happy about CM. Me either but that's me being bias for Handsome 😳

Yay! Glad I can help a little with a potential story line 😛 speaking of... it will be nice for Shaurya to see Mahek and get to know her like how he got to know MS. Simultaneously telling MS that Mahek is a nice person and his demons made him judge her without getting to her. Make it complicated...that his attraction to Mahek deepens. Then when he meets or finds out who MS really is... what will he do? 😲

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