MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#301

Fantastic 👏

Another fabulous update...you have me feeling sorry for shaurya now. ..seething in jealousy.

Seems like MS is going to be uncovered soon...fireworks

So where do you get the ideas for all food items...you a chef or really good at research.😳

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: bworm
Fantastic 👏
Another fabulous update...you have me feeling sorry for shaurya now. ..seething in jealousy.
Seems like MS is going to be uncovered soon...fireworks

So where do you get the ideas for all food items...you a chef or really good at research.😳

I agree Shaurya is going through a lot, but no more than he deserves I think😆.

The discovery of MS is in the works, but perhaps not the way that most will imagine...I hope anyway.

Oh and I assure you I am so far from a chef😆, but I love good food, and actually the restaurant I refer to here. Saana is one of my favorites...but that is the extent of my knowledge, so yes I do loads of research...😆 all in the name of the writing process. Just my nature I think, that everything has to fit and make sense. Thank goodness I like that part (the research) as well😆

Thanks for your comment. I hope to update again in a few days.

Kelly

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stellaV

@stellaV

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#303

Amazing update kelly.. I've said it already, you are a perfectionist when it comes to details. 👏 I would like to see a more jealous shaurya 😆 And for mahek, slowly it is getting difficult for her to differentiate between shaurya and KK. Whatever he says is affecting her though she knows his real identity.Characters having conflict of emotions is something that i really like to see more in the stories, it makes them more realistic and close to our heart.❤️ Yours is the one which has ample of it, Love the way shaurya and mahek are self introspecting all that is going through their mind. Ending has already built enough anticipation. It would be difficult to wait for long 😃 Update soon buddy.

Thanks for the PM 😊

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#304

Another cliff hanger end Kelly...

I have to bite my nails now 😲😲

What will Google uncle give him the information...

Please update soon 😊

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#305

Nice Update! I do hope that Shaurya gets a link between Chef Malik and Mehak in the next week. It would be double fun. Let him also dig up something.

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#306

Love it Kelly

I am looking forward to Shaurya finding about CM his jealousy is showing and if in the process he finds out about Mehek that will be explosive 😆

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#307

Wow Kelly... what am update..loved it. And the dedication and effort you put into your stories is clearly seen. I too love things to make sense and flow (researching is a must for me). Your stories are too good, have you ever considered publishing your works?... I think you should.

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Kash

@KashishJ

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#308

Nice update Kelly.

Hopefully search of Chef Malik doesnt lead Shaurya to suspect that Mehek and MS are the same.

Waiting for next update

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Edit 😉...

Glad tat i logged in wen u updated 😉😆...
Okay so mehak is gonna go on not so official date with chef malik haan ?!?!? 😆
Sumthing came to my mind after Reading tat part 😆

I loved the part wer she was trying hard to defend tat it was not official date to her online friend buddy shaurya 😆

How wud be the date ...I'm wondering 😉

On the other side I'm just thinking

How wud shaurya and rajiv bring mehak back to isc season two ..I liked how you used the food fusion here to describe mehak's recipe ...they just sounded yummy ...

So mehak is worried tat she dint send pictures of her to her haaan !?!? 😳
On the other I enjoyed reading shauryas impatience regarding her online buddy messages ...😆

Enjoyed reading this part 😳..

⭐️...

That was good timing indeed Thabs. As you see I am trying to be more timely in my updates and I am happy that you benefitted from it.

So next update will bring the official unofficial first date of Mehek and Malik much to SK dismay. I hope you enjoy what i have planned😉. Looking to update in a few days and will PM you.

Of course without saying, I love the sparkly review😃

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: stellaV
Amazing update kelly.. I've said it already, you are a perfectionist when it comes to details. 👏 I would like to see a more jealous shaurya 😆 And for mahek, slowly it is getting difficult for her to differentiate between shaurya and KK. Whatever he says is affecting her though she knows his real identity.Characters having conflict of emotions is something that i really like to see more in the stories, it makes them more realistic and close to our heart.❤️ Yours is the one which has ample of it, Love the way shaurya and mahek are self introspecting all that is going through their mind. Ending has already built enough anticipation. It would be difficult to wait for long 😃 Update soon buddy.
Thanks for the PM 😊

Thank you Stella. Glad to see you have reached the point where you are able to post more freely and managed to provide your feedback.😊

Having the right wording for me is paramount that some would be baffled at times the processes I go through, but to me it is giving the reader the best experience possible, so I do what I do. I often wonder if it ends up slowing down the pace of my stories, but thus far I haven't seen a reason to change my method completely..

Anyway, my writing preferences aside😆 I am happy that you are enjoying the storyline here. I have defenite intentions for both of them to be at specific places in their opnions of the other before the inevitable reveal. Obviously Mehek has the advantage here as she is already aware of who KK is so I felt it important to reflect her growing turmoil as she deviates from her original intentions as more and more she sees traces of her online friend in SK. And whereas SK has fallen hard and fast for MS, in my mind Mehek was on the same route as he in her feelings for KK. It has the potentail to make for a far more interesting reveal.

Anway I hope to have the next update available in a few days. We have experienced a cold spell on the island for the last day or so which has everyone dashing for the warmth of their bed covers after work so actually I haven't even opened my laptop since posting the last update for fear that my poor fingers will freeze😊. But at least it gives me more time for more details to formulate in my frozen lttle brain.

Will PM when it is done.

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