MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 16

Not bad Mehek... Shaurya Khanna toh ab gaya... 😆

Loved it! Please update soon!

Truly amazing. Love how you have depicted Mahek.

You nailed it...read all parts in one go...absolutely loved it and should I tell you, your language is just too exotic..

Excellent story. Looking forward to the next part. Would have loved it if they showed something like this on the show.👍🏼

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Too good... Reserved till I find better words.

looking forward...thanks for reading and your continued support😊

Originally posted by: miniapplepie

unres

loved it dear!!!!!!!!

waiting for the next chapter alreaady !

love the way you wirite

awesome part

loved it

Thanks mini...and right back at you. I think i owe you a few reviews on your fab story so now that I am back from vacay I intend on doing so in addition to being more consistent with my updates, so hopefully you all won't have too long a wait for the next.

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Wow Kelly a powerful update ⭐️ poor Shaurya i feel for him and Mehak she now has the upper hand tp torture him continue soon 😊

Thanks Sharlene glad you appreciated. Obviously we are well aware of SK capabilities and know that at anytime he could revert back to a domineering role in this ff but i felt it important not to show Mehek as some wilting flower. The man trifiled with her self-respect after all. 😉

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

good for you mehak

cannot wait

continue soon

please pm me

Amazing update Kelly. Loved it.
Continue soon please.