Shaleen - Kaveri {KarMi }• AT #10 • |Too late.... Ab toh hogaya na| - Page 12

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Ek baar yeh Sanju waala track khatam ho, kam se kam 7-8 minute se episode length waapas 22 minute aayegi. Yahan par 7-8 minute kar kar ke yeh log confess karke, poora romance karke, lad kar, ladai sort bhi kar chuke hain, aur wahan uski shaadi hi nahi ho rahi hai. Shaadi hai ya phir CA exams ke paper?

Exam hi lag raha hai..attempts khatam nahi ho rahe wahan😁

Waise toh KarMi hi main track hona chahiye next kyunki Koel then SidSa tha..toh next hamara hi hona chahiye with atleast 15 min SS..

And inke paas bahut acchi aur badi cast hai, even the other characters like bala, chitra, Sumanji, premji

Itni chize hain explore karne ke liye, ki scripts aur tracks ki kami hi nahi hai, sahi se balance bana kar tracks chalaye aur trp mile to show bahut aage tak chal sakta hai. Itna sab hone ke baad bhi episode bank nahi ban pa raha. Reason, I am not aware about. Any idea?

Originally posted by: mineforever

Yeh hona chahiye,maybe they will build up with small things happening..but I want it more on the side of Karan being afraid of harming her/losing her rather than that lame money trope because woh bahut hi ghisa pita track hota hai and I dont think Monami is someone who really cares..woh toh academy bhi bus main travel kar ke gayi thi..

Agreed. Karan also doesn't seem to care too much. Ameerzaadon se toh pehle hi problem thi use. Walnut ke paas hai toh bahut kuch jisse wo Karan ko uksa sakta hai. Bringing up the gunshot track, bringing up the pain of losing a wife.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

They can manage it during missions very well. Organ trafficking mein bahut achhe se teenon ko manage kiya. Koel waale mein bhi theek se hi kara tha. I really liked the episode jahan par Mission Cuckoo ki success party thi. Kitna achhe se teenon ko balance kiya tha.

Organ wale main it was a good balance but Koel track main bahut low tha KarMi ,except the success party..

I think Koel track tak we had good KarMi but uske baad se hamari SS kaafi reduce ho gayi thi..4-5 min here & there..

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Agreed. Karan also doesn't seem to care too much. Ameerzaadon se toh pehle hi problem thi use. Walnut ke paas hai toh bahut kuch jisse wo Karan ko uksa sakta hai. Bringing up the gunshot track, bringing up the pain of losing a wife.

Correct!! Monami has given the impression many times that she is not someone who considers money as an important aspect. And Walnut surely knows about it, so may be he uses Karan's insecurities about losing her

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

And inke paas bahut acchi aur badi cast hai, even the other characters like bala, chitra, Sumanji, premji

Itni chize hain explore karne ke liye, ki scripts aur tracks ki kami hi nahi hai, sahi se balance bana kar tracks chalaye aur trp mile to show bahut aage tak chal sakta hai. Itna sab hone ke baad bhi episode bank nahi ban pa raha. Reason, I am not aware about. Any idea?

Jo yeh shoot karte hain un mein se kitna kuch toh kaat dete hain. Ab koi bhi reason ho, chaahe yeh hi ho ki wo episode ki tone par fit nahi baithta, par actors aur crew ka time toh laga hi, na? Jitne time mein wo yeh waala scene shoot karte hain, utne time mein wo aur kar sakte the. Toh, maybe that's the reason? Covid restrictions could be another?

Originally posted by: mineforever

Organ wale main it was a good balance but Koel track main bahut low tha KarMi ,except the success party..

I think Koel track tak we had good KarMi but uske baad se hamari SS kaafi reduce ho gayi thi..4-5 min here & there..

Kam tha par bahut zyaada lacking nahi laga tha. Natural laga tha. Maybe isliye kyunki baaki inter-personal relations dikhaaye the. Like Sanju-Karan-Faizi waala scene jab wo chatt par baat karte hain, ya phir cadets talking to each other about Koel. Aur romantic KarMi lacking tha, but tashan toh mili thi aur wo restaurant waala bhi and that hug outside Abhay's house.

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

And inke paas bahut acchi aur badi cast hai, even the other characters like bala, chitra, Sumanji, premji

Itni chize hain explore karne ke liye, ki scripts aur tracks ki kami hi nahi hai, sahi se balance bana kar tracks chalaye aur trp mile to show bahut aage tak chal sakta hai. Itna sab hone ke baad bhi episode bank nahi ban pa raha. Reason, I am not aware about. Any idea?

Ek toh reason editing hai ...

baaki pata nahi,

they could always put supporting cast ke part,usse increase hoga bank,but again they dont know how to balance it..

They need to probably start showing small tracks..maybe 1-2 weeks type because itna drag hota hai ki people tend to lose interest..

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

Correct!! Monami has given the impression many times that she is not someone who considers money as an important aspect. And Walnut surely knows about it, so may be he uses Karan's insecurities about losing her

then again,jiss stage par yeh log abhi hai,mujhe lag raha hai ki aisa track baad main aana chahiye

I mean jab aise 1-2 instances ho gaye ho that he could have lost her & uske back of the mind main woh ho & Walnut strikes with this..😕

Originally posted by: mineforever

Ek toh reson editing hai ...

baaki para nahi,

they could always put supporting cast ke part,usse increase hoga bank,but again they dont know how to balance it..

They need to probably start showing small tracks..maybe 1-2 weeks type because itna drag hota hai ki people tend to lose interest..

Exactly! Ek taraf toh KarMi ka itna fast paced dikhaaya tha. Academy ka, in general. Even Pushpa waala fast-paced tha. Par Sanju wala track toh alag hi level par slow chal raha hai. Itna slow toh mera dimaag exams ke time par bhi nahi chalta.

Koel ke track mein bhi inhone thoda drag kiya tha, par sab kuch sync mein tha. Academy waale log Koel ke baare mein soch rahe the, baat kar rahe the, tones same thi. Tensed, angry. Even jo light moments the (like that scene with Sanju and Sid and their tejaswi taala), wo bhi related tha to the track. Aur agar koi tangent par jaata tha (like Karan Monami and their cadet-trainer waala convo), wo bhi wahi se originate hota tha. Out of the blue nahi tha.