Good Track with some goof ups

Hi all,

I am just loving this show to the core the couples, the actors, the chemistry, story line , direction, acting everything is so so so perfect and loveable to watch.....but I feel with so many intricate details they somehow ended up doing some goof ups one way or the other......

In last track where Sid falls unconscious, the whole build up was so perfect, emotions, details everything was there but on that climax scene, the acting, the dialogue delivery was so flat....like Sid falls, instead of running towards the lock of that jail, Sanjana had a casual walk, then Monami and Sanjana verbal exchange was also not at all loud or power pack of emotions........

Last time it was more of editing errors, this time the whole Organ trafficking's track was intriguing, and genuinely they did pretty well with it , but Sid`s part looked so rushed and messed up😡😡😡, first Sid got stabbed twice, he lost blood, was barely breathing and then he was walking at the end of the mission as if nothing happened😲😲😲, can spare that but then Monami attended Shergill and was concerned about the bullet graze which was appropriate but she merely showed any concern for Sid, she slept in Shrgill`s room while he was able to walk himself while Sid was not even shown😕😕😕............

Even Monami falling for Shergill seemed too rushed, she got the realization just in two incidents.....it seemed so rushed.......

Mrs Batra entry was something i was expecting on a honest note as when Sid left he said " Leaving Prakram is equivalent to Death for him😭😭😭" he nearly escaped death after that stabbing incident. But nothing was there, Sid came to the inquiry room all by himself with a mere stick in his hand, and now in promo bullet graze needs a sling while stabbing wound is healed and Sid is all hearty and healthy..........

In my opinion when everything is working so well in the show, such blunders just mess up the spice, they need to work on these small details as well....

Sasta nasha darling.. itta load mat lo

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Sasta nasha darling.. itta load mat lo

haha if they will keep going like this, essence will be lost pretty soon

Agreed 🤭 ita hai so can't say anything

Problem is that there was to much focus on the fight scene and likely rushed everything else.

I agree that whoever made the call about Sid's scene...screwed up badly. Editing was also bad at the end. One of the agents should have done something to stop the bleeding and rushed him to the hospital.

At least there should have been a scene where they are trying to stop the bleeding. There are too much focus on Karan and glorying him....like some hero...which he is not because he nearly killed a civilian out of revenge.

A flawed character is awesome but a character being righteous is boring and end up being irritating. For me that what Karan is slowly becoming.

Sid saved Karan twice with his testimony, he also put his life in danger when he distracted the cops. Well knowing that the chance of being killed is big. That brave, but he was not even mentioned along side the cadet and the agents. They where not doing justice to Faizi's character in the past and the last few episode to Sid's character. This not going to go well with Kunalji's fans. The makers need to balance it right and the worst thing that makers can do is injustice to a character that people love.

To much focus is on Karan and the result is going to be, that fans of the other actors will stop watching on tv and not support the show. The reason people loved the show was because of the balance of seriousness and humor.

After seeing Seema ma'am back I believe things will go the right way or my support for the show ends. I don't want Kunal Karan Kapoor to be stuck on a show where injustice are done to his character or his character is used to make conflict between Karan and Monami.

Once the love realization and confession happens there is nothing left to show. Why are they rushing it ? Why not take a few months ?