Aftershocks - A ZDMN -Two Shot- Updated - Page 2

I just loved the way u written faizi and sanju's anger.......

jaldi update karo.....plz pm me

Awesome 👍

Continue soon

That was spine chilling

I totally justify the action of Faizi & Sanju & if Karan really they should react to it in the same way

Well I disagree to Mrs Batra being overprotective & emotional covering up his entire mess just like this Sid deserves to be punished

I believe Monami would need a shock jolt to understand this entire thing & now Sid & MONAMI both will understand their mistakes

Waiting for more

Keep writing ✍️

Originally posted by: Dee10

I like longer reads 😆😆 Patiently waiting 😊

Yeah! Easy for you to say.

Anyways this has already turned from one shot to two shot!

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

👏👏

Loved the way Sanju-faizi & Mr.Batra took stand for Karan ..

What happened to him 😭?

waiting for Next part ...

I think Of those 3 as brothers in arms, so they will support each other through everything.

He took 3 bullets and is bleeding out.

Thanks for the reply.

Originally posted by: Cheshtha

Amazing😍😍. Please continue soon

Thank you so much, I will try to finish it in next couple of days.

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

This was amazing!! Exactly like the way I want the story to go forward. Faizi and Sanju teaming up in criticizing Monami's impulsive decision! Well done with the dialogues! Totally loved it!! Can't wait to read more!!

I wish this would happen too but I do not have a lot of hopes of this happening so I wrote it down myself.

Thank you so much for reading. I am glad you liked it.

Story is amazing. Your writing is very impressive

Spine chilling I felt so much sadness

U agve depicted exactly what i felt ...

Even I have heard these comments that I am cold ..but I can't comprehend love at first sight , love within a few meetings, u can feel a connect which u can explore ,but without knowing understanding love 🥺🧐

Honor loyalty respect are very valuable

I adore the trio friendship

I want to see the trainees and especially mona to understand how much imp rules and discipline are ..

Waiting ...

Please tag me when u update

Wow..

That was intense..

Hope karan thik ho jaye..

Situation jyada critical na ho.

Please continue soon..