KarVi SS ~Teri Meri Kahani~ | part 6 updated page 8. 30 march | - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Welcome back yush... nice update... 👏

Thank you aimy! 😳❤️
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Heyy everyone!


PART 5: ~ Revelation of the untold past ~


the day went by very fast for both the lovers! Karthik kept glancing at survi while she blushed!

The bell rang signalling the end of the day.
Survi was going but karthik stopped her.
Karthik: survi can I walk u to ur house?" he blushed.

Survi: uh..haan kyu nahi" kinda happy that he asked.

While walking karthik interwined their hands. Which made both of them blush. She felt her cheeks heated up.

They reached the mohite Villa.

Survi's mother lata and her father shrikant and her bro karan were in london for some buissness trip. As karan was heir of the company!
And her sis shanti was at home!

They reached the entrance of the house.

Karthik: wow survi ur house is so beautiful.
Survi smiled and nodded.

Shanti opened the door n welcomed the duo.
Shanti: oh so aap hai karthik jiske bare me itna baat karti hai.." she smirked.

Karthik looked at survi with a question look on his face.
Survi: shanti wht are u saying u idiot." Blushed + embaressed!

Shanti and karthik chuckled.

Karthik: ok then i'll go raat bohot hogayi hai.
Shanti and survi nodded.
Survi smiled and waved her hand and so did karthik.

After he went survi immediately rushed to her while blushing leaving a confused shanti.

Survi was so tired so started changing her clothes into a track and loose Tshirt.

While she was wearing her tshirt she heard a noise and turned to look what is it.

It was karthik who came from the window.
YOU PERVERT! Can't you i was changing?!" and threw a pillow at him.

Karthik: sorry i did'nt know u wer changing" and turned away.

Don't even dare to turn here orelse i'll make sure you're dead.." warned survi.

Karthik laughed weakly scared by her anger.

She finished chnging and asked him to turn now.

Survi: why did you came here now at this time?
Karthik: i just wanted to see u that's it!

He came closer and leaned in. But survi immediately pushed him away.

Karthik: survi why do you hate every guy?" a lil'bit annoyed.

Survi: i dont hate every guy i just hate playboys cuz of some past incident.

Karthik: care to say me about that?"

survi: actually there was a guy whom i used to love. But he was also a playboy like you. We dated for almost one month. And one day he took advantage of me. Since that i came to hate evry guy.

Karthik: oh..it's a sad one!. But survi am not like any other guy..u changed me. U taught me the real meaning of love. U knw during my inter days i was a total nerd. Always studying. But a girl caught my eyes she was so beautiful and i fell for her. One day i decided to confess my feeling for her but she rejected infrnt of the whole campus. I was shattered after that incident. Then i changed my looks, became a lil'bit cooler and girls started to notice me. I did the same with every girl i dated. Dumping them infrnt of whole campus. The girl whom i used to love came back to m due to my increasing popularity and i rejcted her infrnt of everone. My revenge was over. After that i was named "the notorious player".

Survi was shocked by his revelation.
Survi: so Mr.playboy was a nerd back then? I can't believe it." in a teasing tone.

He blushed and nodded.
Then he pulled her closer to him and their fell on the bed.
Both of them staring at eachother with burning passion in their eyes.

They came closer n closer...and kissed!
It was a soft and loving kiss.
She moaned.

Then they heard a knock on the door by shanti.
They immediately pulled away and karthik rushed out of the window giving her a goodbye kiss on the forehead.
Survi opened the door.
Shanti: i heard some noises is there some1 else in ur room survi?"
survi: ofcourse not shanti..who'll it be at this time of night.? U go and sleep.
Shanti nodded and left.

Survi closed the door and sighed in relief.
She jumped on the bed and slept while thnking about karthik.

To be continued...

Precap: karthik proposing survi!.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely!😳 karvi!❤️ but survi's past was a bit shocking!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Karvi always rocks... .. n u to yush how beautifully u write story...intersting
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Originally posted by: chandana1

Lovely!😳 karvi!❤️ but survi's past was a bit shocking!😆

I know Right! 😆
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Karvi always rocks... .. n u to yush how beautifully u write story...intersting

Awww! Thnks dear! 😳
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Originally posted by: Yush001

Awww! Thnks dear! 😳

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Hello everyone! 😃
PART 6: ~ THE PROPOSAL! ~

The next day after karthik visited survi's house.
It was Sunday. Survi was sleeping soundly on her comfortable bed but her sleep was disturbed by some call. It was karthik. A blush crept across her beautiful face.
She received the call.

Karthik: survi..
Survi: yes karthik.
Karthik: can you come at the place which am saying you to? Sorry for disturbing you early morning.
Survi: yeah sure. No problem.
Karthik: ok then I'll msg you the address..don't ask me any questions just do as I say ok na?
Survi: a bit confused..but she eventually said yes.

She got dressed in a baby pink knee length frock. Tied her hair into a messy ponytail.did a lil'bit of make up! Now she was ready to go. She was kinda happy that she's going to meet karthik.
Her mother started suspecting her and sent her brother karan to follow her.


Survi reached the place. It was karthik's farmhouse on some hilly area. The guard showed her way to the entrance. She entered the villa. The lights were off. Suddenly some one hugged her from behind. She got scared n was about to beat him.

Karthik: shhh..survi it's me. He said seductively in his husky voice.
Survi: karthik are u an idiot? I was scared to death. First u called me in this sumsaan place and now u r scaring me! She pouted angrily.

Karthik: no worries survi..u'll know soon! Just wait for big surprise.

He blindfolded her and took her to the place he decorated for her. Then he opened the blindfold and she was awestruck. The place was decorated with roses and candles. Her photos wer hanged on the wall everywhere. She turned to look at karthik who was beaming happily just by watching her intersting expressions.
His smile made her blush every shade of red.

He knelt to the ground and took out a ring and said. "Survi, you light up my world like nobody else. You taught me the real meaning of love.. I know I was a playboy I used to hurt every girl I date. I was a spoilt brat. But meri Jaan you changed me. You are the ray of hope in my hopeless life. You are the only women with whom I want my spend my life with. Forgive me survi for everything. Now the playboy karthik is dead and your karthik is born!. I love You survi. Will you marry me? Will you spend your whole life with me?.." He asked with a tint of worry in his eyes. (Sorry I suck at dialogues and such cheesy lines 😛)

She had tears of joy in her eyes. She immediately said YES and hugged him.
Karan was watching all this and got furious. He went to call his mother. To inform about his sister's deed.

He kissed her on the forehead and was about to kiss her but was disturbed as he heard some lady yelling at him. It was Lata.

Lata: karthik, how dare you touch my daughter? Get ur filthy hands off her.
And survi, what are you doing with this playboy. She said angrily.

Survi: mom I love karthik and he too loves me and we can't live without each other. So you have to accept him.
Karthik nodded in approval.

No I won't." Shouted Lata.

Survi: ok then I'll live with karthik or I'd rather die with him.." After saying this she took karthik with her and jumped off the cliff with him.

Lata shouted." SUURRRVVVIII.""

To be continued..

Precap: SUSPENCE! 😉

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