Karthik survi ss - tum meri ho part 7 updated page 5

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Shweta Giri

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi guys I m Shweta and I I have recently started watching Yeh vaada raha and kartik character after leap is more interesting than before and so I have decided to write an as hope u guys like it

The ss starts with survi entry I'n the party in a white Chudidaar with the dress in her hand

Kartik gives an evil smirk seeing survi in the party but then gets angry noticing her address on the other side aniket is happy to see survi in the party he cheerfully welcomes her

Ani : hii simmi

Sim : hii aniket, aniket I m sorry for that day mujhe tumhe jaane ko nahi Kehna chahiye tha

Ani : it's okay simmi bhai ki baat aaj tak Mai nahi yaar paya the tum kaise talogi by the way u look beautiful today

Simmi : thanks aniket

Kartik watches their conversation from a distance and decided to confront survi for the dress

Kartik : simmi

Ani turns back to face his brother

Ani : bhai Mai hi simmi se

Kartik : Ani mujhe simmi se kuch zaroori baat karni Hai

He takes survi away in a corner

Survi has decided that she would confess her truth to kartik today and accept his every punishment

Kartik : simmi Maine

Simmi interrupts in between

Simmi : survi... Mai survi hoon kartik aapki dost and aapki gunehgaar

Kartik is shocked to know that survi who he thought to be a lier finally came in front and confessed her truth

Kartik : tho tumse mujhe apna sach Bata hi diya

Simmi : sach tho Hamesha se aapke saamne hi tha kartik bas aapki use kabhi pehchaan nahi paaye ( in a low voice)

Kartik : kya

Simmi : kuch nahi

Kartik gets irritated seeing survi repeat her habit

Tai simran and her mom come there and enquire what was going on

Simmi : Tai Mai kartik ko Bata rahi thi ki Mera naam

Kartik interrupts

Kartik : ki iska naam simmi kaise pads... .. Yeh naam ise suit nahi karta

Tai : ek dam sahich Bola re tu katya Maine bhi see yahi poocha tha

Kartik : simmi Yeh dress pehenkar Bahar aao

Simmi : nahi kartik sir

All three including kartik gets shocked as how did she say no to him. No one dares to do so

Kartik : mujhe na sunne ki aadat nahi Hai

Simmi : aur mujhe aise kapde pehenne ki

Kartik gets completely furious

Kartik :15 min Agar tum se dress ko pehenkar Bahar nahi aayi tho Mai es launch party ko farewell party Mai badal dhunga

Simran gets very scared gearing this and tries to talk to survi but kartik asks everyone to leave

Precap : kartik dances with survi and misbehaves with her

Edited by piya05 - 9 years ago

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Shweta Giri

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Posted: 9 years ago

I m sorry guys there are many mistakes in the os as I have posted from mobile next time I'll try to rectify my mistakes

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swathi sen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thatss awesome. Plz update soonish...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow beautiful start !

Loved it

Do pm me whenever u update

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Apeksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey shweta!! Nice start continue soon😊

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Shweta Giri

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Posted: 9 years ago

Kartik survi - tum meri ho part 2

Survi wears the dress and comes out in the party. Simran is relieved seeing survi in the dress but kartik is surprised as survi can do such sacrifices for her cousin then why did she betray her best friend and the guy who loved and cared for her do much

Simran : thank u sur.. Simmi tuney aaj bohot bada Ehsaan Kiya Hai yaar mujhpe

Survi : Yeh tho kuch bhi nahi Hai pagli tere liye tho Mai apni jaan bhi de sakti hoon

This hurts kartik more

Aniket is not happy seeing survi wear thst dress

Kartik comes close to survi and asks her for a dance. At first she hesitates but she knows she doesn't have any option left

He takes her on the dance floor

The song plays " wajah tum ho"

He misbehaves her which irks simran and aniket

Simmi : kartik aap Yeh kya Kar rahe Hai Sab dekh Rahe Hai

Kartik : kyo ab kyu sharam aarahi Hai tumhe SIMMI... US waqt he sharam kaha gayi jab mujhe gale lagya tha aur us waqt kaha gayi thi jab tumne mujhe apna Pati kaha tha

Survi starts crying seeing him react such a way

Simmi : Maine jo kuch bhi Kiya aap ke liye Kiya

He rotates survi and she falls in aniket arms having an eye lock

Kartik rages with fury and breaks the glass nearby breaking their eye lock

Survi sees his hand and asks the waitress to bring the first aid kit. She shows concern for kartik for which kartik responds like kid listening to her for the first time

Simmi : bohot Dard ho raha Hai kya

Kartik : jis Dard se Mai guzar raha hoon uske saamne bohot chota Hai

They share an eye lock and then kartik looks away and a drop of tear passes from his eye which only survi notices

Kartik again goes to bar tender and orders himself a drink

Aniket gets furious seeing survi show so much concern for kartik and leaves

Another man tries to flirt with survi

An mam : hey beautiful tumhe es se pehle tho kabhi nahi dekhna... Who are u

Simmi : sur... Simmi heroine ki behen

He eyes simran and returns to survi

An man : lagta Hai kartik ki aankhon Mai kuch problem... Boam saamne khadi Hai aur woh churchure ke saath film bana raha Hai.. U look hot ( he holds her waist)

Someone holds his hand which he has kept at her waist. It's kartik. He removes his hand and breaks it

Kartik : aaj sirf heath Toda Hai Agar dubara meri Sur... Simmi to hath lagya tho tutne ke liye tere jism Mai haddiya nahi bachengi

The other people of the party take him away

Precap : survi and kartik in a room and kartik asks her explanation for her deeds

Edited by piya05 - 9 years ago