new Os~dil ne jise apna kaha

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~~NEW OS~~

Dil ne jise apna kaha


Hello guys... This is my first os for our favorite show (ye wada rha).. Hope you guys like it.




Situation: Survi and kartik are now a married couple as they were forced by same husband wife who forced Kartik to fill survi's hairline as they eventually came in survi and aniket marriage (or whom so ever survi's marriage is fixed with..) And she has not told anything about tai to kartik as she herself has no proof that it was her wo pushed kartik's mother from terrace... Kartik and survi lives like friends in one bedroom as kartik some how know that survi cant do this to her mother as she does cares for his mother like she is her own mother.


There was a major event in kartik'house Tai calls a waiter and picks a glass of wine...and offers to kartik for grand success in business...kartik is about to drink that glass...just then a voice comes from behind.. "Kartik ...kartik" survi comes there shouting his name ,although she is well dressed but she looks like she is been running...from where ever she was...




Kartik puts back the glass in tray...and goes to survi...and asks.."survi...kya hua tumhe...tum theek toh ho na..."




"Kartik.. W..w..wo..b...ba..baba..." Survi in scared and emotinal tone.




"Baba...kya hua ...sab theek toh hai? ." kartik asks survi in concerned voice.




"Kartik...baba... wo mare nahi the...unhe maara gaya tha... " Says survi in crying voice..




"Kya...ye tum kya keh rhi ho..aisa kise ho sakta hai" Asks kartik in angry and apprehensive tone.




"Kartik mujhe uss hospital ke ward boy ne bataya...ki wo heart attck se nahi maare...ye sab kisi ne jaan bujh kar kiya...aur case band karne ke liye...heart attack ka naam de diya."




"Ae surve...tu aisa kaisa keh sakti hai...tere baba ki kisi se kya dusmani jo koi unke khilaaf sazish karega??" Asks tai from survi.




Hearing tai...survi...then recollects her conversation with tai ..."survi tune mujhse panga le kar acha ni kiya...ab tu dekh main kya karti hai..."flashback ends.




"T..t..tai.. Aapne mere baba ko maar diya...aap ne ...aapne ye theek ni kiya ...aap..." Then she notices the glasses kept on tray...one of the glass is marked...while watching the glass and tai..she says"aap kartik ko bhi...main aisa kabhi nahi hone dungi..."then she goes to kartik and hugs him tightly..




Tai in her mind "lagta iss ko glass ke baare mein pata lag gaya..".To pacify situation.. She continues as..
"Oye survi...zyasti ni bolne ka..maine tere baba ko ni mara...or...mana ki tu iss waqt dukhi hai...chal anni..tu isse andar leja..dukh ke maare na jane kya kya bol ri hai...aur kartiya.." She picks the marked glass"ye le...party shuru karni hai...sab mehmaan wait kar rhe hai..."




Aniket holds survi..and they are just about to move...survi again sees that marked glass in tai's hand..she snatches it from her...says.."nahi...kartik tum ye nahi piyoge...issme zeher hai..."




"Zeher ...kartiya...tujhe lagta hai ki main tere ko zeher degi...haan main toh hoon hi parai...tu mujh par kyun yakeen karega.."says tai...emotinally..




" nahi...tai..aisa kuch ni hai"..snatches glass from survi's hand and is again about to drink it.




"Kaartik...nahi...ruko...mera yakeen karo...tai tumhari jaan lena chahti hai."




"Survi...tumhe galat faimi hui hai..." And ignores survi...




Survi snatches glass from him and drink in one go...




Pyaare says.."dekha kuch ni hua...faltu mein tai ka naam kharab kar rhi thi ye survi..chalo bhai party chalu rakho.."




Everyone is about to go from there to enjoy party just then anniket points out "Survi..ye khoon ..khoon nikal rha hai tumhari naak se..."




After hearing aniket ,survi touches her nose...and looks to see blood oozing from her nose...while doing this.. She feels dizzy and collapse on the floor...




Kartik catches her before she hit the ground... "S...su..Survi...survi...kya hua tumhe?"




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Kartik catches her before she hit the ground... "S...su..Survi...survi...kya hua tumhe?"




"K..ka..kartik" survi says in small and breaking voice while trying to touch his cheeks.. Just then...she losses conscious... And her hand falls freely...




Seeing this... Kartik breaks into tears... And shouts "Surviii"




It has been a week... When this incident happened.. From then only survi has not gained conscious...kartik has not been home since then..he now knows that whatever survi was saying about tai was right and he hadn't talk to anyone in the home ... half of the tym he is either watching over survi or praying to bappa...to save her friend whom he never trusted , her well wisher whom he never acknowledged and his wife whom he never ever loved .




"Mr.Kartik... Aapki wife ki condition ab stable hai..unhe 1ghante mein hosh aa jaega.." Doctor to kartik




As if someone has gifted a world to him... He is happy..with tears in his eyes...he then goes to baapa.."aaj aap ni jante ki aapne mere liye kya kiya hai...aapne mujhe meri jaan lauta di...ab main uska apni jaan se bhi zyada khyaal rakhunga..."




Survi opens her eyes and sees kartik outside of window and becomes happy... But then she remembers the last moment when kartik didn't believe her and gets sad...




Kartik comes in...and seeing survi awake he calls "doctor.. Doctor"... To check on survi.




Doctor does her routine checkup and asks survi if how is she feeling...



" doctor... Main theek hoon...bas thode chakkar se aa rhe hai.."



"Mrs survi..wo dawai ka asar hai...aapko ab aaram karna chahiye..." Saying this he leaves the room




Without looking at kartik...she went to sleep...




Kartik sits at sofa nearby in the room...




After sometime...survi wakes up and sees kartik in sleep... She then slowly gets up and out of bed...




She goes near kartik and is about to touch his hair... She again remembers that scene and then she stops suddenly...and leaves the room..




She goes on terrace and while remembering all the moments with his husband whether good or bad... She is looks down from the building and is about to fall ..Then she feels a strong grip around her waist... And she is then pulled backwards...




"Survi...kya kar rahi ho tum...tum pagal toh nahi ho..." Screams kartik angrily.




"Main jo bhi karu isse tumhe kya..chodo mera hath.." Says survi in frustrated tone




"Jo bhi karu se kya matlab ...isse suicide kehte hai.. Aur suicide wo karte hai jinke paas jeene ki koi wajah ni hoti." Says kartik more angry than ever




"Sahi kaha tumne ...mere paas jeene ki koi wajah ni bachi.." Says survi sadly.




"Baba...unke sanskaar...ki zindagi mein kabhi haar ni manni chahiye..uska kya"




"Jab baba hi nahi rhe toh...waise bhi unhi ke paas toh jaa rhi hhoon main.."




"Aur tumhara..dost kartik...uske liye bhi nahi rukogi.."


"Kartik...halkat veda...kahi ka..hamesha mujhse ladta rehta hai...uske liye toh kabhi na ruku.."


"Aur tumhara pati..."




"Sirf naam ka...usne kabhi mujhse pyaar nahi kiya..."



Kartik looks at survi in surprise and then in i-know-what-u-are-talking-abt wali look deta hai...and then...in scared tone he kisses survi on forhead...and says"ab bhi nahi rukogi..??"




Survi childishly says"nahi"




Then kartik kisses her left cheek softly and asks in lower voice... "Aur ab"




Survi nods no without saying a word.




Kartik then kisses her right cheek and asks in lower than previous voice but huskier this time... "Aur ab"..




Survi stands still.




Kartik then softly kisses her lips ...and then parts from her...again is about to ask.." Aur..a."




Survi tightly hugs kartik and says...haan...while smiling sweetly..




Kartik hugs her back and then they walks towards the life for which they have always dreamt of... A life where there is love , trust and most important friendship..




Guys... ... please like and comment on how it was..


Edited by rocking_bhawna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing this instills positivity. are u a girl or a guy?
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😳 girl i guess fromname
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nish_vir

😳 girl i guess fromname



Yup..i m a girl 😊
Edited by rocking_bhawna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayye ! Kya os likhi tumne ! Manna parega ! I just loved it ! Superb !
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

Hayye ! Kya os likhi tumne ! Manna parega ! I just loved it ! Superb !

Keep writing



Thank you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one ! Keep going
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lasyap3

Good one ! Keep going


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good attempt. Really liked it :)

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