MishBir: Entwined Eternally|Ch17: Pg22 - Page 14

Originally posted by: tumhiho

Abir’s calm and reassuring nature is definitely what Mishti needs in her life.

I really liked how caring Abir was.. waiting for the day when he will put some ointment on her internal wounds as well. I liked this literal sample because it showed Mishti that there’s more to him than what he did that night.

And last but not least I LOVE how confident he is. Let’s see if it lasts when he comes face to face with Naksh and Kirti after what happened comes out 😛
Excited for Mehandi and can’t wait to see more Abir and Mishti’s interactions

See you on Friday,

Take Care❤️

Thanks a ton! It's good to know that you are liking the story so far. 😊

I agree, she needs a bit of that in her life. And hopefully, she will have it too.

I am astounded at how well you have correlated this incident and put it like an upcoming act for the future when he soothes her internal, emotional wounds.. when he treats them.. because that's to come for sure. And of course, there's more to the guy. He just needs to express things in a less creepy way, I guess.

I won't talk about his confidence in front of the two overprotective bears - Naksh and Kirti. Especially abour the epic scene that didn't go down well with Mishti. If it wasn't okay to her.. I would rather not think, how they would take it. 🤪

Their interactions, I believe, are going to get better. Hopefully.

Well, I should be updating this today but just in case it doesn't go up by tonight.. then it will be up tomorrow at max. Might have some change of plans. I am yet to work on the next chapter.

Thanks again! You too, take care. ❤️

Originally posted by: screen22

Looking forward to next chapter interesting can’t wait.

If you don’t mind words in Hindi are put into brackets for English translation will be very helpful only to understand the story more and be able to reply.

Thank You 😊

My name is Jaya

Thanks, Jaya! 🤗

The next chapter maybe up by tomorrow at max. Certain change of plans, in case I don't get it done by tonight. But hopefully, you will have it soon. Tomorrow at max.

Point taken. In case, if there's any term or dialogue in Hindi, I will have the same translated in English and put them in brackets. For convenience sake. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I read the last three chapters in one go....

I'm very glad that you got Naksh and Keerti into the story...I rest liked these two.

Mishti will have someone on her side...I'm happy...I loved everything that you wrote about MishBir...very beautiful n thoughtful scenes.

Last chapter was my favorite 😍

Hey Nikki! Thanks, I am glad you read these! Hope you are doing well.

Yeah! I wanted these two in my story here. Just some freshness. Mishti will have them and more on her side. Thank you!

Well, it was meant to leave an impression. And if you liked it out of all three, then it did a pretty decent job. I am satisfied to know that.

Thanks again! 🤗

Thank you 😊 kindly for understanding

Take care of yourself and be safe😊

Are we getting any update ? Take your time if you are busy...stay safe

Shenz, when can I expect the update? 🤗

Originally posted by: screen22

Thank you 😊 kindly for understanding

Take care of yourself and be safe😊

Well, I will try my level best. But in case, there's anything I miss out on, you can just let me know.

You too! :)

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Are we getting any update ? Take your time if you are busy...stay safe

Sorry, I had a busy weekend. But the update will be up in another 5 minutes or so. Nit more than that.

Thanks for being understanding. :) You too, stay safe.

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Shenz, when can I expect the update? 🤗

I am so sorry! This had to wait longer than expected. I am posting the next chapter in the next couple of minutes.