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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnkitaPritu

Writing to you for the first time as I'm new on IndiaForum platform so catching up with ur story today

It's just magic to read this new Abir n somewhat similar Mishti.. Abir is just magnetic hope mishti will have get a bit tender towards Abir before marriage so tht we can get a bit tender Mishti n romantic abir

You are having perfect pace bas lagta hai saare parts ek baar me mil jaaye 👍🙏

Thanx for your efforts waiting for next part eagerly won't add any suggestions bas want a bit eager mishti like abir is for her...

Hii ankita.. Welcome to the forum 🤗

Don't be a silent reader, do share your thoughts about mishbir n the show with us at the mishbir AT😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Abir’s calm and reassuring nature is definitely what Mishti needs in her life.

I really liked how caring Abir was.. waiting for the day when he will put some ointment on her internal wounds as well. I liked this literal sample because it showed Mishti that there’s more to him than what he did that night.

And last but not least I LOVE how confident he is. Let’s see if it lasts when he comes face to face with Naksh and Kirti after what happened comes out 😛
Excited for Mehandi and can’t wait to see more Abir and Mishti’s interactions

See you on Friday,

Take Care❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

I read the last three chapters in one go....

I'm very glad that you got Naksh and Keerti into the story...I rest liked these two.

Mishti will have someone on her side...I'm happy...I loved everything that you wrote about MishBir...very beautiful n thoughtful scenes.

Last chapter was my favorite 😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

WOW the caring Abir even though Bhabhi is watching every move he takes and all the oldies this does not stop our Abir 🤗

what is making Mishit so nervous if anyone see them why does she suffer in silence when her bhai and bhabhi is always with her no matter what👍🏼

Abir needs to understand mishit‘s background before he can help mishit in anyway

Nicely written I take my 🎩 off.


my Hindi is not that brilliant but getting the story.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Oh my God! How did I miss the previous chapter?! 😲

Well I can read two chapters together now. 😃 Will be back after reading.

It's fine! But I get the joy of reading two chapters in a go. I am glad that you read though! :)

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi3

I already like Kirti. She's awesome! Seeing Abir all nervous before her was fun. 🤣 She's as protective as Naksh. Poor Abir! He have a tough job ahead. He have too many people to appease including Mishti herself. Poor guy is so scared of Kirti. What will be his state when he have to deal with rest of her family?😆


Mishti won't let her guards down even before Kirti. I hope Kirti will find out the reason on her own. And I can't wait for Naksh to join these two. I have a thing for protective siblings. ❤️ So I'm enjoying this to the fullest. Would we get to see rest of her family too? And what about Abir's family?


Mishti is injured, but she is refusing Abir's help just for the fear of the judgmental society. She is not realising that unknowingly she is letting the pathetic mentality of the same society win, by giving in to the pressure. I do understand that the constant taunts have took a toll on her and made her this way. But she should learn to ignore people and their opinions about her. They will always have something or the other to say. However that doesn't change the person she is. The people who truly loves her know what she is. And honestly that's the only thing that matters.


I appreciate the fact that Abir let her take the decision. He didn't force his decision upon her. The guy has started to think sanely. Good going! 😆 I like the way he is dealing with her. Giving her space, yet helping her in the hour of need. That was such a sweet gesture. And it has earned him some brownie points with Mishti too. Loved this warm& gentle side of Abir. He has started to impress me too along with Mishti. 😉


Loved both the updates, Shenz. The way you described the exchange between Mishti & Abir is beautiful! ❤️ ❤️ Though I wonder what conversation occurred between Naksh and Abir before he left. I would have loved to read that. 😆


Already waiting for the next chapter dear. Come back with it soon. 🤗

Thank you so much, Ashi! Oh man, I like her too! 😉 You tell me, what do you think would be his reaction when thrown to the vultures - in this case, the protective family of the girl he is chasing. (or at least wants to.)


Well, I am in there with you. I am sucker for protective siblings. Aah! That always gets my heart. ❤️ I don't know.. you tell me, would that extended drama.. meet and greet the family be something you would like to see. I haven't thought so far. But definitely some are going to make a sure shot appearance. Everyone else, I will have to see. I feel like this story has already exceeded the amount of chapters I had decided earlier, and it's not even halfway through.


I will have that concern answered soon. The reason why she is affected by the constant buzz around her and the opinions of the not-so important society. She just hasn't learnt how to deal with the whole hypocrite society. Hopefully, she will get to learn them too. How? I will keep that open.


Abir even though makes mistakes and tumbles quite a lot of times, he will act sanely (most of the times). Learning from his previous encounters, taking hints and doing what he deems fit.


Now, that's something I feel relieved and glad about. Abir has managed to impress you as well while he is working his charms on Mishti. Great! 😆


Glad you enjoyed both of them. Well, I thought that a conversation between Naksh and Abir would bore you all out. And we also had an upcoming conversation between Abir and Kirti. Well, more like a brief interrogation/meet. But yeah! Hopefully, you will get another conversation between the two coming up soon. Pretty soon! Hopefully that will do justice and come out the way it sounds in my head.


I will have the next chapter up by tonight or might have some change in plans and delay the chapter to tomorrow. But at max, it will be up by tomorrow.


Thanks again! I love reading your comments. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: screen22

WOW the caring Abir even though Bhabhi is watching every move he takes and all the oldies this does not stop our Abir 🤗

what is making Mishit so nervous if anyone see them why does she suffer in silence when her bhai and bhabhi is always with her no matter what👍🏼

Abir needs to understand mishit‘s background before he can help mishit in anyway

Nicely written I take my 🎩 off.


my Hindi is not that brilliant but getting the story.


🙏


Hey! 🤗 Thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you all like it.


About Mishti's suffering and her behaviour about taking all of it and letting it affect her, well you will have your answers to it as to why she is letting that happen.


Abir has a lot of understanding to do.. and everyone who cares about Mishti has to come together if they want to help her in any way.


Thanks again! In case, you need any help with Hindi let me know. Not that I use much of Hindi in my stories, but still in case there's anything. Let me know! 🤗


And by the way, if you don't mind, may I have your name please?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AnkitaPritu

Writing to you for the first time as I'm new on IndiaForum platform so catching up with ur story today

It's just magic to read this new Abir n somewhat similar Mishti.. Abir is just magnetic hope mishti will have get a bit tender towards Abir before marriage so tht we can get a bit tender Mishti n romantic abir

You are having perfect pace bas lagta hai saare parts ek baar me mil jaaye 👍🙏

Thanx for your efforts waiting for next part eagerly won't add any suggestions bas want a bit eager mishti like abir is for her...


Firstly, Welcome 🤗 I hope you have a fun time and enjoy your experience on IF.

Secondly, thanks for stopping by and giving this story a shot. Means the absolute world to me.

I like to experiment a bit with my characters, so I would usually take these gambles to alter the traits of the characters, at times completely and while other times just a tad bit. I am glad you liked the changes. I won't make any promises whether or not would Mishti warm up to Abir before the marriage ceremonies are completed. But whatever it is, you will have lots to read about Mishti and Abir.

Thanks for the compliment.. but saare parts ek baar me milne se rahe.. I can't write all of it in one go. It's a struggle in itself to tackle down each of the chapters as and when we move forward. Saare ek saath dene gayi toh toh ho gayi story complete. 😆

My efforts pay off with each comment like this one. A review and a satisfied (at times even unsatisfied, who complains and pin points at loop holes and all the shit load of crap that they dislike..) or eager reader. So, Thank you so much!! 😊

Suggestion, well noted. But you will have to wait a bit longer to witness eager Mishti for Abir. There's a lot going in her head and that needs to be cleared first.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashi23

Hii ankita.. Welcome to the forum 🤗

Don't be a silent reader, do share your thoughts about mishbir n the show with us at the mishbir AT😊

I agree to this!

Thanks for dropping by though! 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Looking forward to next chapter interesting can’t wait.

If you don’t mind words in Hindi are put into brackets for English translation will be very helpful only to understand the story more and be able to reply.

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