Mishbir OS: And He was loved. - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was beautiful. I don't have words to convey how much your piece moved me. You get Abir's characterisation so wellšŸ¤—

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Posted: 6 years ago
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First, a very happy birthday to youšŸ’ƒšŸ»šŸ„³

This was an awesome piece! I could actually imagine Abir s all emotions like am watching the scene šŸ˜ beautifully written!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Is it still your birthday? God bless you. Hope you had great fun.

This is what I wanted. Finally technology being helpful.. Thank you so much darling.. Wowwwww

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: fangirl1012

This was beautiful. I don't have words to convey how much your piece moved me. You get Abir's characterisation so wellšŸ¤—

Thanks.as it discussed before in the forum,abir's way of interaction with people makes him so loveable & a dignified character.tried to put justice on that aspect.happy that it worked.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow, this was absolutely beautiful!! Loved it!!!

Have been feeling a little restless with the episodes this week and was disappointed that Abir didn't get to witness all the special things Mishti did for him... but you have compensated it so beautifully! You have truly captured Abir's essence... could feel his every single emotion! Do write the 2nd part if possible... waiting

What a lovely gift to us on the 100th episode! Thank you for spreading happiness and wish you a very Happy Birthday dear šŸ¤—

Edited by SheThought - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Finally someone wrote what i wanted to see. Thank for the os lovely story loved abir inner emotions more šŸ˜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is so beautifully written! Great Job! It is definitely one of my favorite Mishbir stories on this forum because of how well you have captured the emotional intensity and feelings of Abir. Also, I really like that the story has Abir seeing Mishti's proposal. If only he could actually see/find out about it on the show!

Please please do write a second part soon because you have done an amazing job so far and I would love to read about Abir finding out about Meenu's evil deeds and giving it back to her in his own way.

P.S. Wishing you a very happy birthday!!!! Cheers to an amazing day and heartfelt story!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Firstly a very happy birthday, Flora! šŸ¤—., wishing you abundant prosperity, health and happiness !

This is wonderfully penned! šŸ‘ā­ļøWords fail me for I am overwhelmed! 😳 Can we expect a sequel please ?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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A very Happy Birthday to you.

Loved this. Particularly " Dyaan se" ā¤ļø

Really wish this happened in the show.

Good that you kept You know who out of this beautifully written story.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This was so freaking beautiful! I loved every bit of this OS. The way you described the emotions running through Abir as he watched Mishti was so amazing. I'm so glad that he knows, you know. He deserves to know. He should know. For sure.

I hope you continue this and we get to see an actual MishBir confession instead of these two just knowing that they love each other. They deserve to have this!

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