31 Aug, 2023 - Synopsis Hub - Page 11

Originally posted by: AreYaar

I agree with these two points in bold.....FLAT is the word for the Abhira scenes right now....I was saying the same thing in a post earlier that their scenes feel disjointed and poorly directed....even if they are just coparenting, the interactions can be better written....it's not coming across in sync. I dunno if it's a deliberate choice to keep them flat like this until they magically rush to some reunion....cuz if that's the case, then again writing is very poor I must say

If the plan is indeed to wrap this up by October, then yes they still need to write something better than this to fill up that much time also....today was quite a hollow script. Abhiramnyu scenes were only salvaged cuz that was a simpler plot to resolve with the kid being happy that his bed wetting issue is fixed and he's now relaxed with Docman also. But Ak's dialogues continue to be a mess that no one seems interested in fixing.....lol

I am thinking the flatness is deliberate cause when Harshali want magic, its there. Both Abhi and Ak seem closed off to one another. And the one thing that these writers don't know how to do is to show friendship without romance. That connection and chemistry can still exist without there being a romantic lens to that. They could have given that friendship to both Navra and Abrogi, but they didn't and now they are doing the same with Abhira. I think they are trying to show that issues between them still exist but they are coparenting. Next will be resolving these issues.

I'm enjoying the episodes 🤣

As for dialogues nav said so much during kasauli 1 and I believed it and what did he do? Nothing, nada, zilch 🤣🤣

Il just take the positive vibe until show or this gen ends!

Originally posted by: NomadicWonders

If they have to give her those kind of dialogues few episodes down the line, why give her majboori like dialogues today. She could have just watched, smiled and left. I don’t understand what are they trying to still establish by all these scenes and dialogues.

She definitely hasn’t accepted Abhi as Abhir’s father but is not stopping him because ?? because Abhir needs a father 🤔 or because Abhi is helping with Abhir’s depression? So it is all still a dikhawa? Mrs. Sharma waiting to flip on Abhi-the-father the moment he does something she doesn’t approve of?

I absolutely can’t understand her stance right now.

Yep. You pointed it out pretty aptly. Behna ko God complex hai. 💁🏻

Originally posted by: AreYaar

Felt more like general detachment than coldness ....or should I say he was just sticking to a practical stance by changing the topic to focus on Abhir's award function....both Abhira were shown forgetting about the bowtie but they clearly didn't bother coordinating over it and each did their own thing to try and manage ....then even when they showed up at the school function, they both put the bowtie on Abhir in different spots but didn't really talk to each other much....it was a weird scene frankly

Again, I think its just to show that all is not well between them. Their original issues of lack of communication and stuff still exist. Ak's mera beta jhap still exists and Abhi does seem miffed about it, though he is not saying anything. She also felt like it was wrong, but from her heart that is how she feels. So no point in correcting also.

This has to boil over soon, cause that seems to be the main track to explore now.

Originally posted by: Nothingtosay

Def loving Abhi/abhir 💕 - but everything feels so rushed & this co-parenting stuff is too sweet to digest when she is still saying “mera beta”…

Obviously she won't say "hamara" yet. It is a long road for her.

But I don't feel it is rushed, why is it feeling like that to you?

Abhi-Abhir 💕💕 have always been adorable, now it has gone one notch up.

Originally posted by: lagjagale

Again, I think its just to show that all is not well between them. Their original issues of lack of communication and stuff still exist. Ak's mera beta jhap still exists and Abhi does seem miffed about it, though he is not saying anything. She also felt like it was wrong, but from her heart that is how she feels. So no point in correcting also.

This has to boil over soon, cause that seems to be the main track to explore now.

I hope they don’t drag it 🤞, although these are feel good episodes - since abhir and Abhi are in a phase now, there is nothing substantial to watch unless there is some big drama..

Originally posted by: lagjagale

Again, I think its just to show that all is not well between them. Their original issues of lack of communication and stuff still exist. Ak's mera beta jhap still exists and Abhi does seem miffed about it, though he is not saying anything. She also felt like it was wrong, but from her heart that is how she feels. So no point in correcting also.

This has to boil over soon, cause that seems to be the main track to explore now.

If their intent was to continue showing "all is not well", then again I'm wondering what was the purpose of the RJ scene .....why show a convo which was all about trying to write a new chapter in relationships but showing within an epi that they are still stuck at the same place as they were before the RJ monologue? Why show Ak saying in all those scenes ki humne sab milke kiya, tumhara beta hai - only to flip within one epi back to the "mera beta hai, meri majboori hai"?

Dunno if anything will boil over soon but yeah when the script pulls such shoddy switches in narrative overnight, one does have to wonder if there is any steady hand at the helm remaining

Originally posted by: jyoshna_1989

I'm liking the track too... its just that we wont be this lucky to get so many good episodes in a row. So we are wondering what is next worst

Phobia ho gaya hai hamein 😅😅

Originally posted by: lagjagale

I am thinking the flatness is deliberate cause when Harshali want magic, its there. Both Abhi and Ak seem closed off to one another. And the one thing that these writers don't know how to do is to show friendship without romance. That connection and chemistry can still exist without there being a romantic lens to that. They could have given that friendship to both Navra and Abrogi, but they didn't and now they are doing the same with Abhira. I think they are trying to show that issues between them still exist but they are coparenting. Next will be resolving these issues.

Itna dimag nhi hai in writers k paas. They'll conveniently skip all that😂😂

Originally posted by: shrutiraina007

Obviously she won't say "hamara" yet. It is a long road for her.

But I don't feel it is rushed, why is it feeling like that to you?

Abhi-Abhir 💕💕 have always been adorable, now it has gone one notch up.

All this family reunion and hum saath saath hain vibes KV going Manjari ma.. Abhi/AK co-parenting - it was too much goodness to take in a single episode 😂 - when we had to watch crap after crap for last 2 mnths