SS : When Life Gives You a Second Chance Ch4-pg14 - Page 11

Finally , Abhi started falling for Priya .. ☺️ Thanks Kriti for the quick update !!! Love you .. if we can portrait a story in our mind that is the brilliance of a writer ..And you have that magic with you ! 👍🏼
And to Akshara : cry baby doll cry ,, more loud ..accept what your mind feels.. let your ideal pathidev hear your cry 🤪 .

Such a short and sweet update. Can't wait to see the reactions of everyone.

Also, awaiting how you will play out the custody track now that Abhimanyu too is married that too not with someone related so the rishta isn't complicated here.

Awesome

Excellent writing. You guys are so good wish you would writing the story of this show

Can’t wait Priya to make Abhi’s life more happy and peaceful

I don't watch the show anymore but I am loving this one!

Wonderful Kriti!!! I'm liking the way the story is proceeding. I see abhi happy atleast in your story!!!

And I could visualise every scene, guess that's the beauty of story telling!!! 🥰🥰

Waiting for next chapter☺️☺️

Chapter 2

Gosh Abhi and Priya respective fathers fixed their marriage without asking them

they were indeed shocked

Abhi's thoughts were reasonable

his life is certainly complicated

of cos he feels Priya deserves better

alas its not easy for Priya

but she can do anything for her father

Abhi's dilemma was understandable

at least Harsh is aware of this

its really not easy for Abhi to completely forget Akshara

as expected Harsh tries to make Abhi understand

Harsh never liked Akshara

well Abhi thinks of Akshara declaring her loive for Abhinav

finally Abhi agrees to marry Priya

Vipul was really happy

he gives Priya's hand in Abhi's

oh no Vipul died!

Chapter 3

of cos Priya was shattered after losing her dad

Harsh was also affected

well Harsh sent Abhi to be with Priya

as expected Priya broke down

at least Abhi consoled Priya

well Abhi is affected by Priya

Abhi's thoughts well portrayed

amazed that he waiting for one call or message from Akshara

finally he realised that she did not feel is absence

his questions were reasonable

good that he wants to move on

pleased that he wants to a better husband for Priya

great seeing Priya's concern for Abhi

not surprised that Harsh and Priya are close

glad that Abhi and Priya are now friends

hmm both were lost in each other

liked Abhi teasing Priya

so Priya tells Abhi he cannot refuse to marry her

Abhi was indeed perplexed

however he assures Priya

wonderful that she was direct with Abhi

nice that Abhi was honest with Priya and assures her

she promises to become the best wife for him

I must say wonderfully written and such good pace without any dragging.

Akshara can lead her life cursing Abhimanyu .. nice he moved on and is already so much into the new relationship ❤️

And they are married. Finally Abhimanyu is out of AR's manipulations. I love how you have given both Priya and Abhimanyu's pov's. Quite different but similar in any ways. Loving your writing style Kriti💕💕💕

Looking forward to Abhimanyu and Priya's new journey and how Priya supports her PD in Abhir's custody case.

Chapter 4

feeling for Priya

can understand her emotions

Priya's thoughts well portrayed

PD has a ring to it

so she thinks Abhi is dashing and handsome

Abhi's thoughts were understandable

great that he thinks Priya is beautiful

liked Abhi teasing Geet

at least he noticed her nervousness

glad that he assured her

well Akshara is feeling like something terrible is about to happen

as expected she feels Abhi can never let anyone happy

she does not to lose Abhir

oh the lamp got extinguished

now Abhi and Priya are married