A soulmate's tent: fromMyThought's imagination

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Abhir was standing in the court to tell whom he would like to live with. Everone was holding onto their breath. Time and heart had stopped beating for AbhiN in that moment. Abhir glanced at everyone and said, ' मै मेरे RWP के साथ मतलब real wale papa के साथ रेहना चाहता हूं '

AbhiN could not believevhis ears, he felt as if the world has come to an end..he checked if he is breathing because he felt dead inside.

AbhiM had a wide smile on his face, it was a mixture of two emtoions, he was happy that his biological son had chosen him and second he had WON..

AbhiN gathered himself up.. He remembered when he had met AK on the bus for the first time... He had bought a ticket for her. Next moment it flew from his hand. He had said, 'मेरे हाथ मै तो कोई चीझ रेहती हि नही है!'. He always knew it but still he had thought this time it might be different. But it was not..

Silence had filled the Goenka house. It was time for Abhir to pack his bags and leave for Birla house. Hiding the excrutiating pain that he was feeling in his heart, AbhiN kneeled in front of Abhir. He said, 'आप को वही रेहना चाहिये जहाँ आप चाहते हो. मै हमेशा यही चाहुंगा की आप खूष रहो. बडे डॉक्टर बनो. आपके RWP की तरह..'. He hugged abhir, Abhir hugged him back. AbhiN felt a difference. He was not same innocent abhir, his son but suddenly a grown up Abhir. Why was that? He caressed his head and Abhir allowed it. AbhiN and AK decided that AK would move to Birla house as Abhir can't be left alone.

Back at Birla house, after all the celebrations were done, Abhir asked, can he get a big tent in his room? AbhiM agreed the next moment. A tent of Abhir's choice was brought. Abhir insisted on buying board with 'Do Not Enter' sign just as in Kasauli. He told everyone including AK to strictly not to enter in his tent.

AbhiN came back to Kasauli as there was nothing left for him in Udaipur. He had to restart his business so he did. He was changed man now. No smile, No PJs.Only thing that remained with him was his helping nature... Abhir looked happy to everyone. He would laugh, play while facing others but as he would turn pain in his eyes would be visible. AK noticed it a few times and asked if he is fine.. Abhir said, "मै ठीक हूं मम्मा.. अब मै big boy बन गया हूं. आप मेरी tension मत लो.." and AK would say, Okay...

AbhiN felt something is not right.. He would always ask, if Abhir is fine and AK would assure him that he is and share Abhir's pictures with him. Manjiri and others would take care that they prevent Abhir from talking to AbhiN somehow.

Abhir now and then would close his room's door and go into the tent.. AK would ask, " क्या कर रहा है अंदर? " Abhir would respond, "MSH मम्मा.. मेरा secret है.. " and AK would smile.

2 months passed. AbhiN was ignoring his health and just working. One day he fainted and met with an accident. Nilamma informed Muskan. As AK could not leave Abhir, kairav brought AbhiN to udaipur. At Birla house, everyone decided keep the news secret.

Abhir even though following his routine started spending more time in the tent. Dark circles developed around his eyes. In the hospital, AbhiN was critical. Finally AK decide to get AbhiN to the hospital just as last resort to save AbhiN against wish of the Birla's.

But, Abhir could not be seen anywhere. Even after calling his name he did not respond.They searched...finally she realized that he could be in the tent. For the first time, she opened the tent door and a voiceless scream came from her mouth.. Her heart wrenched with pain..Abhir was in deep sleep. On all the tent wall was pictures of Abhir and AbhiN from kasauli home...there were multiple stacked notebooks. She flipped through the pages.. On every page was written,' ILMP.. I love my Papa'...She then realized that Abhir was sleeping on AbhiN' s swetaer just as he would sleep on AbhiN in Kasauli.

Tears were rolling down her cheeck. She thought, who says, only romantic couples are soulmates? A father and child could be soulmates too.. bound by soul ka Rishta not khun ka rishta. She kissed Abhir lightly and just held him tight cosuming the vibes of that soulmate's tent before he picked up Abhir to take him to AbhiN. She knew they are meant to be together.. Just like heart and it's beats... ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyThoughts

Abhir was standing in the court to tell whom he would like to live with. Everone was holding onto their breath. Time and heart had stopped beating for AbhiN in that moment. Abhir glanced at everyone and said, ' मै मेरे RWP के साथ मतलब real wale papa के साथ रेहना चाहता हूं '

AbhiN could not believevhis ears, he felt as if the world has come to an end..he checked if he is breathing because he felt dead inside.

AbhiM had a wide smile on his face, it was a mixture of two emtoions, he was happy that his biological son had chosen him and second he had WON..

AbhiN gathered himself up.. He remembered when he had met AK on the bus for the first time... He had bought a ticket for her. Next moment it flew from his hand. He had said, 'मेरे हाथ मै तो कोई चीझ रेहती हि नही है!'. He always knew it but still he had thought this time it might be different. But it was not..

Silence had filled the Goenka house. It was time for Abhir to pack his bags and leave for Birla house. Hiding the excrutiating pain that he was feeling in his heart, AbhiN kneeled in front of Abhir. He said, 'आप को वही रेहना चाहिये जहाँ आप चाहते हो. मै हमेशा यही चाहुंगा की आप खूष रहो. बडे डॉक्टर बनो. आपके RWP की तरह..'. He hugged abhir, Abhir hugged him back. AbhiN felt a difference. He was not same innocent abhir, his son but suddenly a grown up Abhir. Why was that? He caressed his head and Abhir allowed it. AbhiN and AK decided that AK would move to Birla house as Abhir can't be left alone.

Back at Birla house, after all the celebrations were done, Abhir asked, can he get a big tent in his room? AbhiM agreed the next moment. A tent of Abhir's choice was brought. Abhir insisted on buying board with 'Do Not Enter' sign just as in Kasauli. He told everyone including AK to strictly not to enter in his tent.

AbhiN came back to Kasauli as there was nothing left for him in Udaipur. He had to restart his business so he did. He was changed man now. No smile, No PJs.Only thing that remained with him was his helping nature... Abhir looked happy to everyone. He would laugh, play while facing others but as he would turn pain in his eyes would be visible. AK noticed it a few times and asked if he is fine.. Abhir said, "मै ठीक हूं मम्मा.. अब मै big boy बन गया हूं. आप मेरी tension मत लो.." and AK would say, Okay...

AbhiN felt something is not right.. He would always ask, if Abhir is fine and AK would assure him that he is and share Abhir's pictures with him. Manjiri and others would take care that they prevent Abhir from talking to AbhiN somehow.

Abhir now and then would close his room's door and go into the tent.. AK would ask, " क्या कर रहा है अंदर? " Abhir would respond, "MSH मम्मा.. मेरा secret है.. " and AK would smile.

2 months passed. AbhiN was ignoring his health and just working. One day he fainted and met with an accident. Nilamma informed Muskan. As AK could not leave Abhir, kairav brought AbhiN to udaipur. At Birla house, everyone decided keep the news secret.

Abhir even though following his routine started spending more time in the tent. Dark circles developed around his eyes. In the hospital, AbhiN was critical. Finally AK decide to get AbhiN to the hospital just as last resort to save AbhiN against wish of the Birla's.

But, Abhir could not be seen anywhere. Even after calling his name he did not respond.They searched...finally she realized that he could be in the tent. For the first time, she opened the tent door and a voiceless scream came from her mouth.. Her heart wrenched with pain..Abhir was in deep sleep. On all the tent wall was pictures of Abhir and AbhiN from kasauli home...there were multiple stacked notebooks. She flipped through the pages.. On every page was written,' ILMP.. I love my Papa'...She then realized that Abhir was sleeping on AbhiN' s swetaer just as he would sleep on AbhiN in Kasauli.

Tears were rolling down her cheeck. She thought, who says, only romantic couples are soulmates? A father and child could be soulmates too.. bound by soul ka Rishta not khun ka rishta. She kissed Abhir lightly and just held him tight cosuming the vibes of that soulmate's tent before he picked up Abhir to take him to AbhiN. She knew they are meant to be together.. Just like heart and it's beats... ❤️❤️❤️


Oh my god.... I really cried... That too in my office...


This is really beautiful....

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Posted: 2 years ago
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But..... Why didn't he say that he wanted to stay with Abhinav phir 😒😭


Koi na, rwp is real wale papa - but who the heck said that Abhinav isn't real papa and Abhimanyu is.... People usually watch shows for romantic wala soul connection, and I must say that this is definitely one of those shows where soul connection seems so much deeper with Abhinav and Abhir than any other couple of this gen!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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That was heart wrenching😭

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautiful....Felt like crying.....this cud be a possibility...if cvs watch India forums..

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