His last good bye migrated (link in pg 21) - Page 16

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Ooh I didn't actually guess that... I thought like you know in some cases police will come and inform and people perform namesake rituals right? I thought something like that and Abhir wasn't allowed.

About the parents already punished I feel that the child have been suffering way more than them though they are not at fault at all...

You are a great writer... The story has kept me hooked so far

@bold Yeah... That was also the intent... I did not write the dead body in flashback because I thought it would distract from the story...I was planning to... But thought open ended line instead

But the way I wrote may give the idea that Abhinav was really dead. Abhir's acceptance of his death... Everyone's shock on learning that he is not dead. The use of the word Faked his death... making death was shown...Through these reactions, I wanted to show that for some reason they all never doubted Abhinav's death. Abhir did not get even have slight hope that his father could be alive somewhere...

I kinda tried to imply that Abhinav death was not assumed but was declared. I guess subtlety went into extreme mode when I was writing 😜😅😅😅

@italics: Yeah.... The children are suffering more than the parents and that too without their fault... But please be patient... Children can still be free from this whole mess on day... They have potential to lead a happy life... But not the adults who caused them pain.

Thanks for liking my story...

By the way.. I couldn't comment that day... I think I was busy and later forgot.. but I loved your story home...

Especially in the end where you explained the chapters and seasons symbolism...

Originally posted by: umawanderer

@bold Yeah... That was also the intent... I did not write the dead body in flashback because I thought it would distract from the story...I was planning to... But thought open ended line instead

But the way I wrote may give the idea that Abhinav was really dead. Abhir's acceptance of his death... Everyone's shock on learning that he is not dead. The use of the word Faked his death... making death was shown...Through these reactions, I wanted to show that for some reason they all never doubted Abhinav's death. Abhir did not get even have slight hope that his father could be alive somewhere...

I kinda tried to imply that Abhinav death was not assumed but was declared. I guess subtlety went into extreme mode when I was writing 😜😅😅😅

@italics: Yeah.... The children are suffering more than the parents and that too without their fault... But please be patient... Children can still be free from this whole mess on day... They have potential to lead a happy life... But not the adults who caused them pain.

Thanks for liking my story...

By the way.. I couldn't comment that day... I think I was busy and later forgot.. but I loved your story home...

Especially in the end where you explained the chapters and seasons symbolism...

Well, I for one enjoyed the subtlety as this was an unexpected twist and I don't know why but I somehow got attracted to Yash in your story from the moment he entered so him finding it out made me even more excited. I have pictured him in my brain to be like Harvey Specter(Gabriel Macht) from Suits whom I enjoyed a lot. I am happy Aarohi got a happy ending with him. I know he isn't one of the main characters but I get attached to minor characters in many fictions so I hope you don't mind me talking more about him in chapters he comes. Sometimes even more than the main characters🙈.

Thanks for the compliment. Glad you enjoyed the seasonal theme.

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

The name - Anchal Sharma is so famous 😛

I would laugh like anything if Anchal Sharma becomes canon.

Maine toh ainveyi mazaak mazaak mein likha tha woh.

Dr. Chinchole???

Yeh tum naam kahan se dhoond dhoond ke laate ho yaar!!!

🫠

Jitne characters story mein hai, RS may never be able to afford it🤣

Sanju... Ab Yash ki behen...

So, I think we need relationship tree somewhere...

Arohi ka pati - Yash,

Yash ki behen - Sanju

And that soul mate wala joke🤣

I feel worst for Shivu... His father was drug addict... He saw everything at its worse with his father....

Glad he is alright though...

Birlas are still sound so bad...

😭😭

Nikkeji and his papa are bonding... Slowly slowly... After 8 freaking chapters!!! Yayyy!!

Will he feel bad for not being meethiji of his life?

Throughly enjoyed reading the story so far... And waiting to see how everything unfolds ❤️

Krish, Ruhi, Sam, Shivu, Abhir, Anchal sab bacche bade pyaare hai...except Kiran...

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Jitne characters story mein hai, RS may never be able to afford it🤣

Sanju... Ab Yash ki behen...

So, I think we need relationship tree somewhere...

Arohi ka pati - Yash,

Yash ki behen - Sanju

And that soul mate wala joke🤣

Waise... Sanju is ready to work for free I guess... RS might consider it🤪

@bold: Uska actual word alag hai irl.. but I tweaked it😉

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

I feel worst for Shivu... His father was drug addict... He saw everything at its worse with his father....

Glad he is alright though...

Birlas are still sound so bad...

😭😭

Nikkeji and his papa are bonding... Slowly slowly... After 8 freaking chapters!!! Yayyy!!

Will he feel bad for not being meethiji of his life?

Throughly enjoyed reading the story so far... And waiting to see how everything unfolds ❤️

Krish, Ruhi, Sam, Shivu, Abhir, Anchal sab bacche bade pyaare hai...except Kiran...

@ bold: I take things sllllooooooowwwwwww🤣🤣

@italics: 🤣🤣Well it can't be helped.. Kiran was a 9th grader.. Everyone knows how ninth graders are..

Originally posted by: umawanderer

@ bold: I take things sllllooooooowwwwwww🤣🤣

@italics: 🤣🤣Well it can't be helped.. Kiran was a 9th grader.. Everyone knows how ninth graders are..

😉 I was supposed to strike the word Freaking 🤣 just did that...

Ek pura chapter toh Parth ko dedicated tha😭 slow nai hoga toh aur kya hoga.... 😆 but that was needed for bonding...

I don't know how 9th graders are... I think I was smart one.. 🤪

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

😉 I was supposed to strike the word Freaking 🤣 just did that...

Ek pura chapter toh Parth ko dedicated tha😭 slow nai hoga toh aur kya hoga.... 😆 but that was needed for bonding...

I don't know how 9th graders are... I think I was smart one.. 🤪

That was a joke from my school day actually..

You see my school had this rule that only 9th graders were selected to be house captains, head boy girl sports captain etc. 10th graders were much more focused on their studies..

When we were younger, we all were weary of all 9th graders because they were all haughty and always ordered us around.

That is when We became 9th grader we understood that the pain of power. Sports days were nightmares and young children just don't listen to you God Dammit!!!!🤣 Annual days become hectic and teachers always looked displeased with your work.🤣🤣