Scenes should be written like bf gf dating and not like Bhai behein - Page 2

Originally posted by: borntorule12

I am tired of these coming and hugging each other moments or door door se ishara moments. Show some conversation between them like an actual couple. Show some physical attraction. They are a couple not Bhai behein. For eg if they are coming and hugging each other, they should do flirting like actual couples do. Sometimes abhira scenes become boring and they look like a boring couple.

Some scenes are good too like ladder one. Just hoping they show more good scenes

This phase was suppose to be a fun filled fun. I thought we will get nok jhok, romance, meaningful conversations and family opposing them with some comedy also. The phase of rona dhona has already been done in aarohi track. Why are they repeating all those Rona dhona again!!

The fact that it's not even been 3 days to their dating phase and the couple already had a misunderstanding ( due to Anisha) and already had a foreshadowing conversation that what if they actually break up one day shows lack of base and meaning in the relation.

This phase should have been such a happy one with all our expectations that they've been yearning for each other since 3 months but cvs only know how to disappoint.

Exactly! Even in 2022 they are showing hugging and forehead kiss😂 they should go little bolder like how actual couple behaves!!

Okay.

so my theory is this-

Harshali have a bomb chemistry the yrkkh team knows it.

Its oozing even when they are seen simply smiling at each other on screen.

The simple ladder scene and the park scene where he runs after her and catches her are sensational.

And, when its a one soul,2 bodies wala love its said that talking is much less its usually telepathic and so on.

But then again you are right, they need to take some flirting pages from RadhaKrishn too and make the love seem more for real people too.

I would love more scenes like the kite flying day. but even that happened coz of the kid or else akshara was making him leave.

so keeping the story real they dont get to meet if someone does not create a moment for them.

And they have never said to each other lets go on a date. we are waiting for that moment. Valentines day also he is making her childhood needs come true.

I am not sure if its sensational enough for normal people.

But the day they start showing their love wala scenes... audience will be toe curling the whole day. 😆

The mandir scene where they are sayin hi n bye is also taken from someone's true life the difference is that such big professional men dont do this. its more of a college/teenage situation to meet in do isharas.

Originally posted by: borntorule12

All these rona dhona, yearning for each other , family problems , high voltage drama is already done and dusted and now is getting too much. All the time both are crying in some way or other. Pehle pyaar ka pehla ghum 😆🤣

I thought their dating phase is going to be fun but they've made it so dukhi dukhi as if break up chal raha hai.

Acc to me kaira were fun because they had nok jhok, physical attraction, naira had a bold personality which complimented kartik. Their journey from hating to becoming friends to lovers was v cute. As kartik was naitik's employee and the way he bonded with her family was cute. Here they are showing nothing substantial. The tracks seem so forced and that too copied.

But i am liking it better than before. I would love if they show this childhood trauma overcoming thing but that should come along with couple things like openly flirting ( i don't want them to talk just about marriage ki shadi ke baad yeh woh, let them behave like bf gf) and next time they talk about kaisha I will kill them. Show some romantic shayaris, show them expressing why they feel so deeply for each other, what expectations they have from other, show them bonding over music ( just a simple scene like akshara telling abhimanyu your playlist is so boring,let me add some happy songs) . Conversations should be like bf gf and not all the time stupid family problems.

@bold - Pls tell me kitne baar marogi tum unhe everything for 2-3 weeks is going to be Kaisha.

I'm telling you mujhse likhwa lo Yeh Kaisha khud ro-ro kar yah suicide vagere karkar shaadi kar lenge with bado ka ashirwaad n a main gate entry, Aur yeh Abhira zindagi bhar ladder se hi window entry lete rahenge.🤪

Rahi baat Kaira ki Naira was bold but I don't think writers have wrote Akshu as her she's very different n writers intend to keep her that way only.

Inke families ka toh tum bolo hi mat Udaipur main ghar main nahi Sanjay Leela Bhansali ke set par rehete hain yeh, Inte bade huye hain par bachpana jata hi nahi inka, mera kutta tumhari billi karte baithe hain pagal kahike.

Inke bharose Abhira shaadi nahi family court ke case zaroor le sakte hain, Itne problems toh Udaipur ke pure sheher ke families main nahi hongi jitni inn dono main hi ab.🤣

Let their be more of light hearted moments pls...

Originally posted by: borntorule12

P.S - there are a lot of love stories shown for eg zindagi Gulzar hai where couple have zero scenes of intimacy but they look so much in love because of the meaningful dialogues and background story of the characters. Here it is missing. YRKKh lacks a strong story . I am not a belivor show them touchy touchy, kissing all the time as that would look more cringy. The most important factor is communication and make akshara a strong person. Show akshara as doing something in life and abhimanyu admiring her for those qualities. They have simply reduced akshara to Abhimanyu's love interest in the show.

When both the partners personalities are interesting the scenes look fun.

I liked where akshu took stand for abhi in molestation case. Like a wife is taking stand for husband. Show some meaningful subtracks instead of this Anisha kairav thing.

Me waiting for Akshu's character development from day 1, But their is a slight increase in her growth as she takes a stand against Aarohi n I'm happy about it even if its for 2-3 mere lines but still.

Ig atleast for week or two they should let this Kaisha take a back seat, n these ppl bond instead of participating or taking a front seat in their both families debate competition.

Akshu ke andar ki sherni is like kumbhakaran saal main ek baar yah phir kabhi kabhi hi jaagti hain 🤣

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

Okay.

so my theory is this-

Harshali have a bomb chemistry the yrkkh team knows it.

Its oozing even when they are seen simply smiling at each other on screen.

The simple ladder scene and the park scene where he runs after her and catches her are sensational.

And, when its a one soul,2 bodies wala love its said that talking is much less its usually telepathic and so on.

But then again you are right, they need to take some flirting pages from RadhaKrishn too and make the love seem more for real people too.

I would love more scenes like the kite flying day. but even that happened coz of the kid or else akshara was making him leave.

so keeping the story real they dont get to meet if someone does not create a moment for them.

And they have never said to each other lets go on a date. we are waiting for that moment. Valentines day also he is making her childhood needs come true.

I am not sure if its sensational enough for normal people.

But the day they start showing their love wala scenes... audience will be toe curling the whole day. 😆

The mandir scene where they are sayin hi n bye is also taken from someone's true life the difference is that such big professional men dont do this. its more of a college/teenage situation to meet in do isharas.

@bold : i felt as if why they are keen on showing Abhimanyu as a jobless person chasing akshara. He is a surgeon. Deewanapan is definitely okay as in love anyone can get deewana even if he is a doctor but overdoing doesn't look good. Instead of such scenes, fill it with actual meaningful conversation scenes.

Yes I did try to understand from the soul wala viewpoint that from day 1 it's been about how they are one soul who have similar core, value, thought process when it comes to kindness, compassion yet don't you think even if soulmates the spark to have exciting talks should be there? Else they are very boring couple who till the end of the life would have silent conversations only. 🤪

Yes you're right. Ladder scene showed chemistry and a simple dialogue , "isliye nai chodta hu tumhe and akshara mai bhi toh pakad ke rakhi hu, chorne ka deti hu" elevated the scene. So even simple scenes can be elevated just with one meaningful dialogues instead of making hearts at each other n tripping n falling. 🥺

Originally posted by: aishapl013

@bold - Pls tell me kitne baar marogi tum unhe everything for 2-3 weeks is going to be Kaisha.

I'm telling you mujhse likhwa lo Yeh Kaisha khud ro-ro kar yah suicide vagere karkar shaadi kar lenge with bado ka ashirwaad n a main gate entry, Aur yeh Abhira zindagi bhar ladder se hi window entry lete rahenge.🤪

Rahi baat Kaira ki Naira was bold but I don't think writers have wrote Akshu as her she's very different n writers intend to keep her that way only.

Inke families ka toh tum bolo hi mat Udaipur main ghar main nahi Sanjay Leela Bhansali ke set par rehete hain yeh, Inte bade huye hain par bachpana jata hi nahi inka, mera kutta tumhari billi karte baithe hain pagal kahike.

Inke bharose Abhira shaadi nahi family court ke case zaroor le sakte hain, Itne problems toh Udaipur ke pure sheher ke families main nahi hongi jitni inn dono main hi ab.🤣

Let their be more of light hearted moments pls...

Imagine it's been 3 days to their dating phase and they're already talking about a breakup( the foreshadowing conversation) , abhi is already busy in solving the #kaisha case..i thought akshu would be the one who would do duniya ka problems solve but in this season hc is involved so abhimnayu is going to be involved in each n every track of family problem solving as hc was clear that he wants in screenspace in each track and the substantial role would be his..

Honestly, the kind of dreams he used to have of kissing her n stuff..I thot he's going to be very romantic but he's giving me that boring lover vibe .

Already ignoring Akshara's call. He was so desperate for acknowledgement of love from akshu's side but the charm is not there now in his gestures towards akshu.

@bold: yaha love story start bhi nai Hui khudki and dusro ka raita sametne chale. Even akshara naitik were 100x more romantic when it came to focusing on their own love story.

I understand you.

I also dont want this too much fatherly/brotherly lover that they are showing him. Inka romance to kuch dekha nahi but brother n lover similarities mujhe dikh rahi hai.

The way Abhimanyu hugs Anisha.

The way Kairav took Akshara's hand when he pulled her away from Abhimanyu.

Both are similar to ABHIRA gestures. so yrkkh team is trying to confuse us.

You see Naira and Naksh scenes you will never be confused. You see a still of Abhi or Kairav with Akshara you will wonder.

Kairav looks like a lazy fellow is the only reason I know he is side character.

Show the still pics to an outsider n ask the, you will see.

ANyways, I said this on twitter n so few had issues. so well its all about perception. there is no true romance between Abhira. that is the truth.

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

Okay.

so my theory is this-

Harshali have a bomb chemistry the yrkkh team knows it.

Its oozing even when they are seen simply smiling at each other on screen.

The simple ladder scene and the park scene where he runs after her and catches her are sensational.

And, when its a one soul,2 bodies wala love its said that talking is much less its usually telepathic and so on.

But then again you are right, they need to take some flirting pages from RadhaKrishn too and make the love seem more for real people too.

I would love more scenes like the kite flying day. but even that happened coz of the kid or else akshara was making him leave.

so keeping the story real they dont get to meet if someone does not create a moment for them.

And they have never said to each other lets go on a date. we are waiting for that moment. Valentines day also he is making her childhood needs come true.

I am not sure if its sensational enough for normal people.

But the day they start showing their love wala scenes... audience will be toe curling the whole day. 😆

The mandir scene where they are sayin hi n bye is also taken from someone's true life the difference is that such big professional men dont do this. its more of a college/teenage situation to meet in do isharas.

Maybe that is why they had Abhi spend time at Manaksh instead of being at the hospital. Cause if he was still working for Birla hospital dipping out like that wouldn't fly. But since he is doing some charity medical camp thing he has time to set up whenever and wherever he wants I guess so oddly more free time?

But we need simple dialogues of them talking not just saying I missed you. Even a call from Abhi telling Akshara about whatever he is doing at the medical camp like how they have supply chain issues or how he's planning a big event etc. Simple normal things. I understand the show runners are also crafting the show for a particular audience but throwing in some mature dialogues every now and then along with some of these dance sequences or ladder sequences isn't going to put that crowd off. It only enhances the balance to the show.

You then get your 3 targets: the teenagers who want all that cute love stuff, the twenties and thirty something crowd who want some more mature dialogues, the old vets of ITV who want the family drama.

Originally posted by: borntorule12

All these rona dhona, yearning for each other , family problems , high voltage drama is already done and dusted and now is getting too much. All the time both are crying in some way or other. Pehle pyaar ka pehla ghum 😆🤣

I thought their dating phase is going to be fun but they've made it so dukhi dukhi as if break up chal raha hai.

Acc to me kaira were fun because they had nok jhok, physical attraction, naira had a bold personality which complimented kartik. Their journey from hating to becoming friends to lovers was v cute. As kartik was naitik's employee and the way he bonded with her family was cute. Here they are showing nothing substantial. The tracks seem so forced and that too copied.

But i am liking it better than before. I would love if they show this childhood trauma overcoming thing but that should come along with couple things like openly flirting ( i don't want them to talk just about marriage ki shadi ke baad yeh woh, let them behave like bf gf) and next time they talk about kaisha I will kill them. Show some romantic shayaris, show them expressing why they feel so deeply for each other, what expectations they have from other, show them bonding over music ( just a simple scene like akshara telling abhimanyu your playlist is so boring,let me add some happy songs) . Conversations should be like bf gf and not all the time stupid family problems.

Simple scene like that would be nice and then at the end you add in dialogues about the family issue. There you achieve balance in the scene. You have a cute couple moment and then a serious conversation about the family issue they have to figure out and overcome so they can get accepted and get married.

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

I understand you.

I also dont want this too much fatherly/brotherly lover that they are showing him. Inka romance to kuch dekha nahi but brother n lover similarities mujhe dikh rahi hai.

The way Abhimanyu hugs Anisha.

The way Kairav took Akshara's hand when he pulled her away from Abhimanyu.

Both are similar to ABHIRA gestures. so yrkkh team is trying to confuse us.

You see Naira and Naksh scenes you will never be confused. You see a still of Abhi or Kairav with Akshara you will wonder.

Kairav looks like a lazy fellow is the only reason I know he is side character.

Show the still pics to an outsider n ask the, you will see.

ANyways, I said this on twitter n so few had issues. so well its all about perception. there is no true romance between Abhira. that is the truth.