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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

I love love and just simply love this story, it wasn't much except Akshu and Kairav settling in Singhania house... its sad to see so many have passed away but I guess that is life. The scene of Naksh feeding Akshu was so sweet makes me wish it really happened in the show as well. Anyways, Naksh is as displeased with Goyenka's as ever and good maybe he could give them a good dressing down sometime in future. Also its clear that he doesn't like Aarohi at all, finally at least there will be now one adult to knock down that stupid girl a few notches!! Interesting that Akshu's room is the room of Akshara... maybe living in Singhania house would make her understand that she doesn't need to constantly put up with Aarohi's abuse. Also maybe Gayu could visit and have a chat with Akshu, have a chat about how Gayu, Naira and Kartik were once in a its-complicate-relationship-situation and Gayu backed away because it was right since Naira and Kartik loved each other and it would have been wrong for her to get in between... maybe Gayu could make Akshu understand that since Abhi loves her and she loves him, it would be wrong to make him marry Aarohi just because of that stupid girl stubbornly decided that she wants Abhi for herself.



Finally at least Kairav disclosed everything to Naksh and Kirti, hopefully these two adults will meddle to get Akshu and Abhi marry each other. Interesting that Biral's are invited to Singhaina House and Naksh invested in Birla Hospital, I wonder this move was some plot to do little scouting of Abhi. Fantastic that Harsh noted that Singhania's are incredibly wealthy and maybe knowing that not only Akshara's mother was Naira Singhania but her grandmother was Akshara Maheshwari, since the Maheshwari are also influential family... maybe Maheshwari's could visit sometime. I would love to see Aarohi's face when Maheshwari and Singhania family pamper Akshara in front of Birla's while Abhi goes all heart eyes on his Akshu too... you should definitely do that in your fic for sure.



Update next chapter soooooooooooooooooooon!!



#PS: Get well soon and take care of yourself.


Thank you :)

Half of your post I already answered with regards to Aarohi/Goenkas and Naksh. :)

Maheshwaris will have a part to play in the future. Rajshri-Vishambar are doting parents/grandparents. They will make an appearance some time.

Although the reason I want to introduce them is less to show how influential Akshara's family is but more to show that she isn't alone. I mean Riddhima/Khushi/Sai/Pallavi were orphans/adopted but their beaus and their families loved them all the same. But yeah, the families are brought in here to level the playing field so to speak. Less with the Birlas and more with the Goenkas. Also, I come from a sort of pseudo-joint family, and that has it's own charm which YRKKH and AbhiRa need!

Akshara needs counselling actually. She's conditioned to respond to Aarohi in a certain manner. Constantly gas-lighted, constantly threatened, constantly demeaned. Abhimanyu can only push her so far according to me. Look at the frustration we all have because she won't open her mouth. IMHO, Sirat did her dirty when she was younger. And now her daughter knows exactly which button to push in order to wound Akshara.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Hriju321

I am hooked! Your story has my heart.Please update Chapter 2 as I am waiting eagerly to see how the Birla's react,especially Harsh Goenka after learning that Akshara is the niece of the Singhania scion.Also,waiting for Abhinanyu's reaction and finally what's in store for the vamp Aarohi?


I don't really understand Harsh tbh. Akshara is actually pretty wealthy. She's an heir to at least quarter of the Maheshwari hotels, a quarter of the Singhania wealth and around the same amount of the Goenkas. Akshara-Kairav would actually be the most wealthy if properties were divided on the basis of the number of children/grand-children. 🤣

When it comes down to it - she alone might be richer than the Birlas, I guess. At least in my story. But money is not something that she desires or loves. But yeah, Harsh will certainly have to respect her for that - because clearly morals mean squat to him.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Loved it 🥰 waiting for the next chapter 💖💖


Thank you :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Hey,

I hope you're doing well. Covid is tough :/ and I'm glad you're recovered now. Please take care ❤️


Coming to this update, I absolutely loved it. It felt so good to see a normal family, a Naksh who supports the kids. Children should be allowed to remain children, and not carry the burden of the world. And I liked how you made Naksh and Keerthi provide the safe haven for Akshu and Kairu. You made me like Kairav a bit xD and I thank you for that.

I just wanted our dear Akshu to have some peace, and I'm glad she got it here :')

I wish I had this spidey sense that Abhi and Akshu have :( I'm so jealous. I want my Abhiii xD


Our leads are the cutest:') and you're writing a beautiful story on them. I can't wait to read what comes next :') I hope you update soon 🥰🥰


Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm better now, although still a little off. :)

I think Sirat made Akshara a pawn subconsciously. Without meaning to, she made a small child liable for crimes she didn't commit and responsible for relations she barely understood. It'll take years for Akshara to become a normal girl, if ever.

Spidey senses, I don't know. I do feel an ominous feeling when my partner is in trouble. I have my Abhiii and I'm going to be borrowing our life's scenes in bits and pieces 😆 You'll find him, trust me!

I started watching bits and pieces for HC. He has tremendous chemistry with all his FL - KDMHMD, Tere Liye, Bepannah, etc etc. I'm hoping Abhimanyu has the makings of an Aditya or Anurag. ;)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

This one always leave me craving for more. You so aptly put it that she is his personal siren.

Abhimanyu can never resist Akshara's call.


Please write more. This was absolutely wonderful!


Fate/ Mahadev/ Naksh, whatever you might call it 🤣 is heavily in favor of Abhimanyu and his Akshu.


Thank you :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Summer400

Awesome! Can’t wait to read more….


Thank you :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Oh yes, Naksh is the only one who can show the real thing to Goenkas


Thank you.

Naksh as a character has always intrigued me! Who knows, maybe he would be as complacent as the Goenkas. But at least in my fantasies, someone can bring the Goenkas a notch or two down 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ashigupta89

Great update dear....


Please update soon....only Naksh can save our Akshu....


Aww. Thanks a ton :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

Beautifully written... Naksh and Keerti, be the support that Naira's kids lack..

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