AbhiRa FF - Veritas / Chapter 5 Page 33 - 25 Feb 2022 - Page 23

That confession was the best ever...love the story no words...i want to bask myself in their love

Abhimanyu is bae ❤❤

I'm glad he didn't give upon Akshu and his confession😍 Naksh is cupid angle for them

Abhimanyu make your girl realise she is precious 🥺💕

He continued their game and the conversation in between was nice.

His kiss was so full of love

Keesh and Abhi- Trio together is a treat.

Superb update

Originally posted by: yogakshema

Hey!

First of all, your father must be proud of you, wherever he is! He's definitely showering you with all the love and blessings!

Coming to the update, it's a wonderful one. The scene where Abhimanyu and Naksh are talking is so well thought of. Abhimanyu was definitely irritated with Akshara's behavior when he entered but left with a sense of calm and understanding regarding what she has been feeling.

He thinks he's managed to convince himself to live without her, but the heart wants what it wants. It was a good way of realizing that.

The conversation between Abhimanyu and Akshara is heartwarming. Akshara has, most probably, realized that Abhimanyu is going no where leaving her. He loves her way too much for that.

But, but, but! The best part about the chapter was Harshvardhan! Oh my God! I can't imagine him to actually wanting Abhimanyu to give a chance of winning his love. He could have insulted her but rather chose to let her stay for a few weeks just because his son deserves a fair chance. Glad to see he's caring for Abhimanyu.

Waiting for the next part!

Thank you. Losing a parent as an adult has been such a harrowing experience that I cannot even imagine what kids like Akshara/Kairav undergo in real life!

Abhi has tried to leave Akshu multiple times now - but they are too much in love with each other to let the other one go. Even Akshara for all her talks is deeply affected by his absence. Now that Naksh has opened up about Akshu's fear of being left alone, Abhi knows that reassurance is the way to win his girl.

Harsh is a complex character - he values success and Abhi is his greatest success story. However beneath the layers of insolence and bitterness, I think he loves Abhi in his own selfish and conditional way. Maybe he'll slowly change for the better.

I just didn't want to write any out and out negative character though, hence another supporter for AbhiRa. 😆

Thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I'm so sorry to hear about your Dad. He is proud of you and loves you where ever he is.
Some voids can never be filled. Sending you loads of love .

Thank you.

And thank you for the update ❤️

Your niece happened.”

__**This is Abhi!!*_

Harshvardhan Birla might not be the most sensitive father on the planet, but he would be damned if he let his son’s love run away again without giving him a fair chance.

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*_Am I reading right...is this_ _really Papa Birla! Yeh hriday parivartan kaise...Jo bhi hai accha hai...we need as many people as possible for team AbhiRa_*_

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Harsh is a complex character - why he dislikes Akshu so much has not really been touched upon. Is it because she is not a doctor? Or because she didn't stand up for Abhi during the Tilak? Or is he just annoyed with Abhi's attachment to her? So, it's nice to write about him as someone who dislikes her but just wants his son to be happy. In a very selfish way, Harsh does love Abhi. It's conditional and it's based on his success as a doctor - but it's there somewhere. At least, I hope. 😆

Her phone still pinged with Good Morning texts but that was about all the communication they had had these past two days.

*I _can't imagine how excruciatingly painful it must be for Abhi to not meet / see her for these 2 days! 🥺🥺*
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And if a cardiac transplant had been no trouble, how much trouble could this woman be, whose heart already belonged to him.

*_Love his confidence*_ ❤️❤️🔥

The only thing I am sure of, Ma, is that she loves me.” He had replied, a little lost at what to do.

*_Yes she does!*_

She looked like every dream of his come true as she sat on her bed, hair pulled back in messy bun with a few strands flying every which way, dressed in a mismatched spaghetti top and shorts, her eyes holding barely repressed anger. It took all his surgeon’s composure to not run his hand up her wrist to her neck and touch that taunting mole on her throat, to not hold her close as his hands wandered down her legs to see if her skin was really as smooth as it looked.

🔥🔥 *_Loved* this .. *emotional, and sensuous! Very well written_* 🔥

Thank you! Adults in relationships have to be physically attracted to each other. Soul waala love is fine, but attraction is a factor too. It is glossed over in the show completely though.

Before she could sense the direction of his thoughts, he left her wrist, instead focussing solely on her eyes.

🔥 *Imagine if she could have read his thoughts! Mardalti woh Abhi ko* 🤣

“I told you Akshu, I’m not going anywhere. I cannot go anywhere. It’s as painful as it is futile. I don’t know why or how your father moved on from your mother’s death. All I know is that I can’t.”

❤️ *He can't and that is what makes him so special 🔥*

I hated the way Kartik and Sirat's love story unfolded. There should have been some time given between the two love stories. It completely undermined KaiRa's five year love story. And I can't imagine any child being completely okay with their father moving on so quickly from their mother. At least I wouldn't be.

We’ll never happen, Abhi.” She replied stubbornly.

*Dimaag thikane nahi hai ladki ka...so adamant on ruining her and his life...deep down she knows she can't live without him. Sort your head and listen to your heart Missy!*

You’re the first thing I think of in the morning. Just seeing you lights up my day. Listening to you sing mends my soul a little every time. You heal demons I didn’t even know I had, Akshu. Every time you go away, a little part of me dies. Every single time. But every time you smile, I’m whole again. I didn’t even believe in love before I met you, but meeting you has opened my belief to the fact that maybe soulmates exist. I know that you complete me. I feel it in my bones, babe. So, I’m waiting for you. I am not going to force you, but I’m not moving on. So if you are waiting for me to move on, it’ll be the wait of a lifetime.”

*_Beautifully written! Exactly how Abhi would say it. I can literally imagine this being said by him!_* ❤️❤️
Thank you ☺️

He gently moved his hands away and waited for her to open her eyes before he smiled down at her. “I love you, Akshu. You’re it, baby.” He didn’t wait for her reply as he stood up and made his way out of her room.

*Haiiiii! Ufffffffffff! Kitna Sahi Banda hai ye! Kaun isse Pyaar nahi karegaaa*

For a person who wanted him to go away from her life, she was needlessly happy to have seen him.

*Nautanki hai Akshu...why are you happy now.*

Akshara loves him. They both know it. She is trying to do right by Sirat's promise - it's just a matter of realizing the depth of Abhi's love for her, before the love overpowers her guilt. Give the poor girl a chance😆

Her fingers touched the place on her forehead where he had kissed her. She smiled involuntarily as a small tear escaped the corner of her eye.

*There begins the new journey!*

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Loved this update and seriously can't wait to read the next...it's gonna be exciting now how they both come together!
Blessed are you and gifted with words...

Thank you so much.

Replies in pink. :)

Originally posted by: mudz

Gosh Abhimanyu needs to be crazily patient to deal with this akshu

Hahahahaha. Dr Abhimanyu has the cure to Akshara's guilt, don't worry!

And Akshu is finally turning the corner. 😆

Keep reading and commenting :)

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Beautiful update

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Yaar… tag kardia karo…. Pehle PM karte the.. now tag please

Next update se I'll be tagging. Isliye I wrote on the note too that if you like this chapter, I'll tag you on the next one :)

Hope you liked the update 😆

Originally posted by: Hriju321

Great chapter! A little more insight to the mechanics of Akshara's psych.You have hit the exact point-- Akshu's pain because her father moved on rather quickly from her mother to her step mom-- their story had been of eternal love but after the passing away of Naira,Kartik's moving on was rather embarrasingly quick!

I am loving the equation between Naksh and Abhi ❤️

Eagerly waiting as usual for the next update 😃

Kartik and Sirat irked quite a lot of people. I was not even a viewer of the show, but it was annoying to me how quickly he fell for someone else - it didn't matter that he had Naira's blessings.

As someone who now has a single parent, I would be very uncomfortable if my parent moved on so fast. I'm not against remarriage etc, but there should have been a significant time gap if they wanted to show that what Naira-Kartik had was potent.

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Originally posted by: ashigupta89

Great update dear....Abhi needs patience of the monk to deal with Akshu...

I understand your feelings dear...i m sure your father is watching you and celebrating his birthday

Thank you. I don't think the pain of losing a parent ever lessens. It just becomes an ache that you get used to.

Abhi knows that his girl is just dragging her feet due to guilt and mental trauma - she'll be his very soon.

Originally posted by: Manju1066

What a beautiful chapter 😍I loved it .I think I am falling in love more with this Naksh Mama 😁looking forward to the next update 💖

Naksh Mama is the love-guru and father figure that Abhi/Akshu/Kairav do not have. He is fun to write 😆

Thank you so much for reading and commenting :)