AbhiRa FF - Veritas / Chapter 5 Page 33 - 25 Feb 2022 - Page 20

Originally posted by: Maneetlover123

Awesome update 😁

Waiting for next

Thank you <3

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

My favourite bits of this update are as follows-

1. “SRK style kind talk”

2. Naksh’ scare for Akshara

3. Kairav supporting AbhiRa

4. Love the song choice

Also, I liked that you included Aarohi’s POV briefly into the update

Hahahhaha. Thank you. I personally loved writing about Kairav being the one responsible for the dance because Naksh is already a vocal supporter.

I heard the song on television and that is what prompted this chapter.😆 The lyrics are PERFECT for Abhi in this story, no?

Please mention other songs which can inspire me to write if you can <3

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Lovely 🥰 I really like this Naksh Mama and Kairav 😁💖waiting for the next chapter 😍

Thank you <3

The Kairav is the show is disappointing to a very large extent and Naksh has been hit by an asteroid. So here's my contribution to making it better🤣

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

That was one hell of a chapter. Emotions running might high. Like a roller coaster. From love to no love🥺 Akshu ka kya hoga...what will she do! Why is she becoming the death of Abhi...Baksh do usko he loves you like no one and you won't survive with out each other.

Kairav playing cupid. Naksh getting Abhi to Dance with Akshu...I hope she melts in his arms. I think Akshu needs a wake up call.. what will actually happen if she looses Abhi forever?

And yes Abhi can't give up on her, whatever she says...he has promised himself and Naksh.

Brilliant writing. Scenes, dialogues, characters all perfect.

Pls don't make us wait too long for the next update.

Love n hugs

Thank you so much. Your comments always make me smile <3

I had fun writing this chapter and it reads like a roller coaster because as I went in wanting to write about Akshu accepting Abhi but then the story wrote itself.🤣 I think they have a little longer to go before they see eye to eye and become one.

Kairav was the one who got Abhi and Akshu to dance together. Naksh was a spectator this time around. Why should Mama have to do all the work? 😆 Let the young generation do some match-making too.

And yes, Abhi is a tough cookie. But it's up to Akshu now. And she's a frustrating character to read 😆

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

I cant believe I missed the last 2 updates... but no worries... I had plenty of to read in one go now...😆Akshara is definitely testing ours and Abhi's patience... but I have hope in her or more like on Kairav to play cupid... I'm loving this Kairav... he's the perfect brother here...I wish we could have gotten a glimpse of this Kairav in the show...but seems like we might. Can't wait to read more.. please update soon.

Aww. Thank you. I'll not forget to tag you on future updates <3

Kairav is barely able to handle his own love story, forget AbhiRa's. 😆

Akshu is a tormented soul - give her time and you'll love her like you love Abhi. I think the show grossly glossed over Akshara-Aarohi's relationship at the moment. 25 years of resentment and bad blood are not finished with a single conversation. It takes time - I'm hoping to bring my own spin on their relationship. I hope you like it :)

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Phirse gadbad kar di Akshara ne... Her promise to her Sorat ma is like chains on her legs... Binding her

Yep....Self-Sabotage ki Devi hai Akshu. 😆

But no worries - Abhi, Naksh and I have the key to unlock her chains😆

Keep reading <3

Originally posted by: ashigupta89

Beautiful update....

Akshara has to deal with her guilt....and Abhimanyu should be patient and calm...

Thank you <3

Guilt is a huge thing - especially with regards to someone's death. And Akshu and Abhi have other skeletons in their closet. As the closet gets cleaned, they'll become closer <3

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

“If the red rimmed eyes, and the Rudolph nose are any signs, I would say you were crying.”

“I know you love me, Akshara. One day, you’ll accept it. But till then, I love you enough for the both of us. Jitna intezaar karana hai, kara lo. Main yahin rahoonga.” He told her, slowly removing his hands from her cheeks.

These lines made me smile so much ... I can't tell you xD much more than ABHI na jaaoo .. xD

Your words are magic, and it makes me imagine everything, so much so that I wish this was the world I lived in.

I look forward to each of your updates, because not only fun, they deal with each issue so delicately, I wonder how you write it all so well :')

I would have left a more detailed reply, but I don't think anything will justify this. You're amazing and this story has my heart ❤️

Awww. *Hugsss*🤗

You made me smile and blush. 😆

Your comments are what motivate any writer to write, so please continue to do so!

I just wish the show would have focussed a little bit more on Akshu-Aaru before they buried the hatchet. 25 years of resentment and then one handshake. Life is not that simple. Maybe they'll touch on it later on, when Aarohi-Neil become a couple, but it seemed very superficial to me. I'm going to try to deal with them in my own way. I hope you like it <3

Thank you so much and keep commenting. <3

Your stories make me Smile so thank you!

When is the next update.....we are waiting!

Love n hugs

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

I don't know how you do this, but you make me smile, laugh and cry, all in one part xD

This part was sooo good ❤️

I'm so glad someone addressed the issue of Aarohi working as an intern and showed the work load xD sometimes, I think people forget what she does why hyping her up :P

And Triple B mystery still remains one...when will we find out what it means? 🤔🤔

I can't wait to see what you have in store next :') too excited with the way this story is going ❤️❤️

I was an intern not too long ago, so yeah, people do not understand her workload. But then again, she's always dressed up and at home, so her life was mighty different than mine.😆 I remember 18 hours of just taking out blood samples, LPs, taps; inserting cannulas/catheters/RTs, measuring manual BPs and writing discharges etc etc. Don't even remember wearing lenses/wearing fancy clothes 🤔

Thank you so much. I'm glad it made you feel so much :)

Triple B has turned into a bigger mystery than it was supposed to be. I'm scared that the reveal is going to be a disappointment 😳