Kaira OS Sinking(another part) part 3 updated

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OS Sinking


V- achha hoga Naira aagar aap apne waade ka maan rakhe..

Naira heard it.. yes that actually was Kartik’s wife asking her to leave.. KARTIK’s WIFE

Wasn’t that her place or say her identity.. but not anymore.. Kartik wasnot hers anymore atleast not her husband...

She bit her lips and clenced her teeth to supress the cry that was gonna come anytime.. Naira didnot speak a word.. Everyone was there standing still.. Noone wanted her leave but nobody had the guts or right to ask her to stay back.. Kartik stood there numb.. did somebody ask his Naira to leave.. his love.. his life.. to leave him.. again.. before anger could take his head.. Naira finally spoke and what came out of her mouth just made Kartik’s world stop..


Naira- chalo baby( she said looking softly at her son)

Kairav- kidhar jana hain mumma

Naira- Ghar...

Kairav- aap bhi kitni silly ho mumma.. hum ghar main hi toh hain..(he said that not paying attention to the awkward surrounding)

Naira- Mumma k ghar

Kairav- aapka aur papa ka ghar diff kese he???

Naira- enough questions baby.. chalo..( she said picking him up in his arms)

Kartik- (holded her hand) mera beta kahin nahi jaa raha ( he was restless.. and desperate.. his nightmare was taking action)

Naira didnot speak a word just looked at him..

Thats actually his fear when Naira stops speaking.. that means she is determined and is ready for destruction..🔥🔥

Kartik- (scared but trys to soften to control the situation) Naira please...

Naira- tum jante ho.. this is the right thing.. hamare bete k liye..

She had no explaination.. no argument.. just her decision

Kartik- haan yeh theek.. har waqt tumhari manmani.. tumhara faisla.. mere liye kabhi kuch chodna nahi hain.. sab khud hi decide karna hai.. kya hamare bich.. hamare ristein mein main kuch decide nahi karsakta.. mera kuch haq nahi.. tumhe meri padi hi nahi hain na Naira.. kabhi bhi.. kuch bhi decide karna ho.. akele karna hain.. mere sath ki jazurat nahi.. sabit kya karna chahti ho tum.. kya mera tumpe hamare baby pe koi haq nahi..hamare riste mein kya mein kuch decide nahi karsakta..

Naira- hamare riste ka future tumhi ne toh decide kiya tha Kartik( she said that with a straight face.. no pain.. no anguish)

Kairav was on the floor stunned by his father’s condition..

Kairav- mumma.. papa ko daato mat..please.. papa aap jaldi mumma ko sorry bolo.. mumma maaf kardegi

Kartik- nahi baby.. tumhari mumma ko papa ki sorry chahiye hi nahi..na toh unhe kabhi tumrahe Papa chahiye the..

Par aab bas.. tum yeh decide nahi karogi ki mere life mein kya hoga.. samjhi tum.. kairav kahi nahi jaa raha..

Naira- aur nah tum decide karoge ki mujhe kya karna hain..

Kartik- agar tumhe jana hain toh tum jao..( he said that with confidence knowing that if kairav stays his mumma will stay there too)

Naira- theek hai

Kartik was stunned... he felt like he was having a nightmare.. his confidence went to drain.. did he miscalculate Naira.. how can she decide to live without Kairav.. its not possible.. she can leave anything even kartik but never her baby..

Naira turned toward Kairav

Baby aapko yahi rehna hai.. papa k paas.. kairav nodded his head for yes.. so did kdadi.. she was dreaming in her own world.. she couldnot believe k yesa bhi hosakta hain.. how can evrything fall in place perfectly..

Naira- (to kairav) aacha to theek hai.. but baby.. mumma yaha nahi reh sakti..

Kairav- kyun.. (almost crying) papa sorry boldenge mumma

Naira- No baby.. aab mumma papa ko forgive nahi karsakti ...its late..

Kartik wasnot getting any clue what to say.. how to stop her.. his breathing was getting heavy.. he was getting nervous like his world was falling apart

Naira signaled one of the worker to get her bags.. yeah she was all set to go.. before V could say anything but V got impatient so the situation happened..

Naira had a straight face.. and carried her bag..

Kairav too was living his nightmare now.. did his mumma mean that he has to live in this house without her..

Kairav- mumma.. nahi.. mumma( he started clinging to her.. directing her to carry him) but Naira wasnot budging

Kdadi came in to hold kairav.. beta dadi ki baat suno..mumma aajayengi.. aap se milne.. aao dadi k paas aao.. aao kairav aur papa sath rahenge..

Kairav was crying continiously.. and was trying to jump into His mumma’s arms.. he was pulling her hand her dupatta but what made his little heart more upset was that his mumma wasnot holding him..

Kartik- kitni selfish hogayi ho tum Naira.. pehle mujhe chodiya aur aab hamare baby ko.. kaisi hogayi ho tum

Naira was walking determind towards the door.. without budging like she couldnot hear or see anything other than the door neither Kartik’S rants nor her child sobbing trying to cling to her

Kartik hasnot felt this helpless in his entire existence.. what ever he said or would say to aggitate her was not affecting her at all.. he was going blank.. only action that came to his mind was to hold Kairav..

He kneeled to hold his baby.. their baby..

Kartik- baby suno.. jaane do mumma ko.. mumma ko hamari jarurat nahi hai.. tumhari mumma ko kisi ki jarurat nahi hain.. unhe sirf apni padi hain.. but Papa hain na.. papa aur baby team banenge.. humesha sath rahenge( who was he consoling his baby or himself)

The whole family was crying.. and V was just getting nervous

Gayu- Naira.. kya kar rahi hain.. kairav ki tabiyat theek nahi hain.. kitna roh raha hai bachha

Kartik- (holding kairav)chodo gayu usse khud k aasu k siba kabhi kisi k aasu nahi dikhte..

Naira was on the door just to step out..she tured her head a bit to the side.. not fully turning back and took her palm out and said

Baby.. chalo.. in a stern voice


Kairav ran out of his Papa’s embarace like his life depended in that moment towards holding his mothers hand..

(Like a child is an addition to a mother’s self.. mother is the most fundamental need of a child.. she is not an option.. she is the child’s world)

Kartik was taken aback with what happened.. his life his child were outside the door or his world..


Naira carried sobbing Kairav in her arms and just turned sideways just to acknowledge her goodbye to G family

Naira- I AM SORRY




🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thanks to all who liked my previous OS this is a diff one but still with the same heading.. do like and comment for encouragement.. let me know how you felt abt this concept😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful....

Hope the show depicts something like this....

Naira needs to be strong.. . Everybody is coming and taunting her.... It's enough...

Loved your writing..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arooshee

Beautiful....

Hope the show depicts something like this....

Naira needs to be strong.. . Everybody is coming and taunting her.... It's enough...

Loved your writing..

Thanks dear.. i was so hopeless seeing no body like and comment but thanx for ur words🥰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved both stories!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is amazing amazing and amazing. Would it too much to ask you to continue this story?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

This is amazing amazing and amazing. Would it too much to ask you to continue this story?

Thanks for liking... i have continued it but not like a regular ff or ss but diff portions.. and heading will still be same🥰

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Weirdly enough I have pictured the exact same scene happening in the show. Naira leaving, Kairav staying but then running after his mother, leaving a sobbing Kartik on the floor.

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Originally posted by: Fari_15

Weirdly enough I have pictured the exact same scene happening in the show. Naira leaving, Kairav staying but then running after his mother, leaving a sobbing Kartik on the floor.

I think thats only thing going to happen now... coz see kdadi n manish have also started to melt towards Naira.. so they wont create any hirdle now🤪🤓

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Originally posted by: Raxya

I think thats only thing going to happen now... coz see kdadi n manish have also started to melt towards Naira.. so they wont create any hirdle now🤪🤓

Also read your second part and even I had imagined Kartik moving into the Singhania's after Naira and Kairav. Would actually love if they show Naira having anxiety attacks and Naira seeing Kartik's black room.

Like I have mentioned in other posts, there's a lot that can be explored in this track, in terms of Kaira discovering what they put the other through in the past 5 years and then working towards rebuilding their relationship. Unfortunately, Vedika and the illegal marriage has taken precedence over the relationships that actually matter, mainly Kaira and Kartik-Kairav (since Kartik-Kairav have barely spent any time with each, would have liked if they showed them strengthening their bond as well rather than Kairav being 100 percent comfortable around Kartik from the get go).

First thing first, want Naira out of the Goenka Villa ASAP.

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Originally posted by: Fari_15

Also read your second part and even I had imagined Kartik moving into the Singhania's after Naira and Kairav. Would actually love if they show Naira having anxiety attacks and Naira seeing Kartik's black room.

Like I have mentioned in other posts, there's a lot that can be explored in this track, in terms of Kaira discovering what they put the other through in the past 5 years and then working towards rebuilding their relationship. Unfortunately, Vedika and the illegal marriage has taken precedence over the relationships that actually matter, mainly Kaira and Kartik-Kairav (since Kartik-Kairav have barely spent any time with each, would have liked if they showed them strengthening their bond as well rather than Kairav being 100 percent comfortable around Kartik from the get go).

First thing first, want Naira out of the Goenka Villa ASAP.

This is top on my priority list.. naira has never been shown as typical hindi serial bahu.. she has been the warrior princess so now when they are showing her crying continiously it irks me alot.. i want her back with a bang..

Secondly i would love if they bring Naitik back.. may be with a serious depression track where Naira can realise she has don bad to her father and brother too and may be she can move on for her fathers sake from a dukhiyari mom to determined confident strong lady who can take the world in her flairs

They should show Naira forward in her career and may be she should take over Singhania daimond.. how time and again GV state that singhanias have less than G family.. i hate it.. Naira has full power and capability to turn the economy upside down.. they should focus on that rather than these kitchen fights😪😪😪

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