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Posted: 7 years ago

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part-15

ak was in her room..

ak-kya karu essa ki nk khush ho jaye... she sees her dresses.

kya pehnu main haa nk ne mujhe western dress main nhi dekha. sees his pic aaj toh main tumhari chuti kar dungi nk g..

she was going in hull suddenly she sees to karishma.. she decorated her room fully.. ak felt so much happiness.. ak went in kitchen.

gy3 was making rbs fav dish..

ak-waww maa aap bauji ki fav dish bana rahi aap.. ohoo valentines day ke liye.. kya bat hai i cant believe aap is age main bhi..

gy-laugh kyo tum bache pool party kar sakte ho toh kya hum yeh nhi kar sakte. beta pyar ki koi umar nhi hoti aur nk bhi toh aayega. munna yeh sab main believe karta bhi nhi aaj sach tu jabse aai haichange hoga munna..

ak-maa woh mujhe permission leni thi main thodi der bahar jau thoda saman leke aana.. promise jaldi aa jaugi..

gy-haa beta koi bat nhi jao.. are car le jana..

ak-tqq so much maa.. gy3 laugh nd ak went in hull.. sees to naman. he hided flowers.. ak laugh..

na-are bhabhi aap kahi ja rahi kya..

ak-main toh kahi ja rahi par dever g aap badi jaldi main hain. mujhse chupane ki jarurat nhi main bhi janti hu chize kya kya hoti hai..

na-kya bhabhi nk bhaiya kam the jo aap ghar main better better.. aap bhi taiyari main toh lagi hi hai.. main aata hu.. he running. ak laugh..

ak-how sweet yaha sab kitne frank hain na.. thinking about nk.. tum ho ya nahi... ak went in car.. here nk was working in office... rb nd dj came on his cabin..

rb-beta nk kam kaisa chal raha..

nk-bhut slow bauji expect kiya tha aaj house jaldi jauga par kam kitna slow chal raha hai.. kitne worker nhi aaye aaj toh mujhe over time karna hi hoga..

dj-toh hum bhi rukte hai..

nk-nahi bauji bilkul bhi nahi aap kitna aur kam karoge ab hamari umar hai apko relax dene ki.. apka sath hi mere liye sab kuch hai..

rb-kitne lucky hai hum god essa beta sabko de.. main chalta hu jaldi kam karwana beta mujhe woh raste se rose..

nk-kya rose..

rb-nhi raste se roj roj kuch karidane ka man hota hai aaj soch raha mitha le jau tumhare award ki khushi main.

dj-chalte hain hum.. dey leave from there.. here ak came in house. she finished her shopping..

ak-pura saman le liya kitne din bad sabse mili.. she was going in her room... ab start karti hu sabse pehle bloon.

she starts decorating her room.. suddenly rashmi came there..

ras-waww bhabhi mast room sajaya hain aaiye khana kha lijiye..

ak-u liked it.

ras-aap toh bhut romantic ho but mere dada samjhege..

ak-unhone kaha hai aaj bhut khas din hai kuch toh karege..

ras-chalo aacha hi hai mere dada thoda badle toh sachi khana..

ak-aaj nk ke sath khaugi main... thak ke aayege toh..

ras-ohoo badi planning nd all.. waise naman bhaiya maa bauji dj bm sab apne apne room main khas tarike se manate hai yeh festival apka first time hain enjoy enjoy..

she leave from there. now ak was waiting for nk.. she put cake on table.. she changed her clothes... wore a beautiful gown.. it was printed gown..

ak-bas thodi der main 12 baj jayege..

here nk was working in office..

nk-kab khatam hoga... sees in cell phone. aap kya sochegi ak main kaisa pati hu yeh kam khatam hone ka kam hi nahi leta.. par aap mujhe samjhaiye yeh main kiske liye kar raha aapke liye apne pariwar ke liye.. ab yeh worker kam karke dete hai hi nhi... aaj toh mujhe rukna hi padega subah ho jayegi mujhe...

he called to ak..

ak-nk ka hai correct 12 baje matlb unhe yad hain she was so much happy.. hloo..

nk-hii aapne kha liya khana.

ak-apka kam hua nhi woh sath main kha lenge hum.

nk-par kyo nahi khaya kha leti na.. pehle khaiye..

ak-par kyo..

nk-i know aap nhi khayegi par mere liye pehle kha lijiye meri zid samaj lijiye aur kuch..

ak-par kyo main apka wait kar rahi aaiye toh sachi.

nk-plz ek wish..

ak-oki.. she starts eating... kha liya ab..

nk-thank god.. woh ak mujhe bhut jayada kam hai worker bhi nhi aaye hai so..

ak feeling sad..

ak-thabhi apne call kiya apko yad hai..

nk-sry ak main nhi janta ek rishta kaise banta hai par agar main apko samaj sakta hu toh aap bhi samaj sakti hai koi insan agar rat rat tak bahar rahe usse enjoyment toh nhi kahege par haa aaj worker nhi aaye toh kam karwana hoga khade rehkar.. i m sry ek bar yeh kam nipat jaye phir main.. ak cut d cell phone..

hloo hloo ak hloo.. cut kar diya.. meri bat toh sun leti inki problem kya hai agar nhi batao toh dikkat bata do toh dikat. so much attitude mujhe samaj kyo nhi rahi woh jab main samaj sakta hu unko.. fine rahe jaise unko pasand hain..

here ak feeling so much angry..

ak-sabko yad hai siwaye nk ke par nhi unko kyo yad rahega. sabse jayada kam karna h bas kam hi karna hai mera kya h padi rahugi ek kone main kya expect karu sari dreams sapne kya essi hoti h shadi. i really hate ittt... she throwed cake. take off bloon also..

throwed card on floor.. nd falls on bed..

ak-sab jhot hai galt hai pati patni jan nd all.. kuch sach nhi.. kyo shadi kari maine.. sees nks pic.. turn in other side.. i hate u...

she was in vry angry mode nd soon she got sleep..

now around in middle of night nk came in house..

nk-aaj tak itni der kam nhi kiya bhut thakawat lag rahi mujhe toh..

he went in room.. sees d decoration nd maxingup room..

nk-itni decoration.. ak so gai.. sees her dress.. kya kuch mera bdy toh nhi hai aur ak ka bhi nhi phir.. cake.. it was on floor.. nk put it on side. kitna ganda kar diya mere room ko.. he got a card..

meri najar main shadi ek ajib sa rishta thi jisme mujhe lagta tha ki gutan hai par tumse milke laga ki life sundar hai nk.. pata nhi kya hai kaise hai par yeh decoration aur aaj ka celebration hamare nam.. happy valentines day.. haww aaj shitt mujhe kisi ne bataya bhi nhi.. msges bhi read nhi kiya.. mera kam bhi toh itna bad gaya.. ak ko mujhe samjhna chahiye na.. galti toh hui par us time ak ne bhi bataya nhi.. he went near of ak.. happy valentines day.. main sry nhi boluga kyoki maine koi galti nhi ki main apko samjhata hu thabhi aap mujhe pasand karti hai toh apko bhi gussa piche karke mere kam ke sath mujhe apnana hoga... nk changed his cloth nd cleaned his room lill.. nd slept.. he covered to ak..

in morning.. it was so much late both naksh were sleeping... aks sleep broke..

ak-sees to nk.. got anger.. aa gye kya jarurat thi office main hi ek rook banwa lete better hota.. aahh... sar dard.. she put her hand on her mouth.. suddenly she noticed that somthing was wrote in her hand..

rat ko late aane ke liye sry par meri galti itni big nhi thi.. thanku for decoration but vry bad for spoil everything. happy valentines day..

ak-huh.. pen se likh diya sry toh sab mit gaya hain na.. main nhi manne wali daily daily ki natak..

she went to take bath... got ready nd went in hull..

gy-are bahu aa gai.. munna kaha hai..

ak-woh so rahe..

bm-kya aaj suraj kaha se uga hai munna aur late..

dj-are munna ko sone do kal bhut der tak kam kiya usne. ak made face.. gy3 sees to ak..

gy-haww der tak aaya munna ak..

ak-g mai so gai mujhe nhi pata chala..

gy-are bahu woh paper dena waha table pe hai..

ak-g.. ak took paper..

gy-bahu gussa ho..

ak-are nhi maa..

gy-itni taiyari kari sab kuch kiya aur munna late se aaya gussa toh aata hi hai par tum ab uski patni ho dekho uske side samjho usse..

ak-i dont know maa par mujhe nhi samaj aata main kya karu jise nk khush ho.. time hi nhi hai unkepass thoda sa time toh le sakti hu na.. aaj tak commen chat bhi nhi hui.. par aap chinta mat kariye thik hoga sab..

gy-main bat karugi munna se hmm tu tension mat le. aj party toh hai hi.. hmm..

ak-g... gy3 leave.. main kya karu i m sure aaj party pe bhi unko kuch na kuch kam hoga hi... mujhe kuch karna hi nahi hai ab.

after somtimes nk wokeup..

nk-oo god time. sees in cell phone.. omgg itni late ho gai mera kam.. he sat on bed.. sees to gy3.. maa mujhe uthaya kyo nhi..

gy-chup itni late se aaya hai phir bhi pagal.. bachapn main bhi esse hi karta tha.. naman dekh raha sab kam.. tu aaj rest kar.. yeh kya hai ak upset hai..

nk-unhone hamare bich ki bat apko batai maa..

gy-usne nhi uske face ne kitni mehnat karke usne shopping kari decoration kiya tere liye hi na aur tu..

nk-aap mujhe bol rahi maa.. par aap sochiye yeh sab kiske liye hai ak ke liye apke liye mujhe kya maja aayega rat tak kam karene main. haa valentines day tha par aaj bhi hai abhi suru hua hai.. yeh sab unhone mere liye kiya hai agar main hi thak gya hu aur i want rest toh kya mere liye nhi sochna chahiye unhe ki pehle main apni commitment puri karu.

maa aap unko samjhaiye main hamesha sry bolta hu jab woh galti karti hai samjhata hu.. yeh sab mere liye hain na meri khushi woh ek bar janne ki kosish karti hai..

gy-tu zid kyo pura ghar sab chod ke aai hai..

nk-maine kab kaha ki nhi kiya kuch mere liye par main kya karu jab main unko sry bolta hu samjhata hu kam chod du abhi thoda work bacha hai toh kya karu..

gy-beta zid mat kar..

nk-maa unko sab chiz batai thi unki marzi thi na mujhse shadi karne ki maine insist kara tha.. kya karne se roka gumo phiro sab karo. main aur kya karu.. maa main nahane ja raha hu..

gy-munna tum dono ka pehla valentines day atleast enjoy kar aaj toh.. he went in bathroom...

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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gy3 make a sad face... bm nd rashmi sees to her..

bm-kya hua..

gy-bhut chinta ho rahi bahu aur munna ki dono zidi hai bhut ek ko samjhao toh lagta hai yeh thik ho raha dusare ko samjhao toh dusra thik keh raha aakhir kya kami hai dono ke rishte main..

bm-laugh pyar ki kami hai turst ki puri ho jayegi dheere dheere..

ras-ohoo aap bhi na yeh toh hota hi hai maa dont worry main hu na essa chakar chalugi ki pata chal jayega dont worry.. aaj toh party suru hui hain..

after that nk came in hull.. ak sees to him..everyone were watching to him..

ras-are hii dada..

nk-tujhe kya hua..

ras-kuch nhi lo di ki call hain..

nk-mere main kyo nhi lagaya..

ras-mujhe kya pata.. lo..

nk-hloo hii di kaise ho.. i m gud.. ak.. she is fine sees to ak.. ak made face... kya kon si party..

nanu-valentines day ki party pool party hai tumhe ak ko leke aana hi aana hai sab honge waha..

nk-par.. ak aapko party aachi lagti hai..

ak-haa..

nk-kya di aap jante ho na mujhe party.. ak sees to him from anger... aachi lagti hai.. bm gy3 nd rashmi laugh... fine ab aapne bol diya toh pakka wada.. .. nk cut d cell phone.. kya kya karte hai aap log.. khana milega ya dat..

ak-ak put thali for nk... he starts eating.

nk-socha nhi tha ki mujhe bhi directly din main khana khane ka moka milega.. suddenly he got a call.. hloo haa naman.. waww kya sach i got it i got it... he cut d cell phone..

gy-kya hua munna..

nk-maa meri hard work safal hui.. rat tak maine almost complete kar di thi work yeh deal final ho gai aur hamari reputation bhi.

bm-dekha kitni mehnat karta hai hamara munna sabko khush karne ke liye..

ak-woh main bhul gai thi aati hu dress ko leke.. went..

ras-bhabhi subah se udas si hai.. dada aap jante h kyo..

nk-nhi woh main ek file check karne wala tha aata hu dekh ke.. he went in room.. ak was crying alone suddenly she realized that nk was coming... he watched her wiping tears..

ak starts working..

nk-woh woh ak aap aa rahi na sam ko..

ak-haa..

nk-kya hua. woh i guess aaj main nhi jauga office..

ak-apka work pura ho gaya na.. its better for u..

nk-ak aaj main apko pura time dunga kahiye wat u waana say..

ak-nothing.. i have no words for u..

nk-ak i m just.. ak keh toh raha hu jo aap chahe share kariye..

ak-meri dress maaa ne bulaya tha mujhe.. she was going but nk grabbed her hand.. nk from anger..

nk-wats ur problem.. main kitni der se try kar raha hu kuch toh better ho bat ho..

ak-mujhe nhi karni apse bat bas..

nk-aacha bat karo toh problem na karo toh problem main kya karu bataiye aaap..

ak-kya batau rat main wait karo toh nhi aana kam kam kam.. pak gai hu sun ke ek valentines day ka gift bhi time bhi expect nhi kar sakti.

nk-call kisne cut kari mood kisne spoil kara aap ek bat batiye aapke liye meri value hai ya phir gift ki mera time ki ya mere kam ki.. kya ek din valentine wish kar diya baki din fight kar rahe toh day perfect ho jata hai kya.. life woh ho jispe roj ek dusare ke liye pyar nikale woh valentines day hoga jisme aap kuch kahe bhi nhi aur main samaj lu.. apko mujhe samjhna hoga meri bhi expectations hai kuch..

ak-wat about me.. bat ek gift ki nhi bat hai mere emotions ki hai jaise apke hai.. pata nhi kya sach hai kya jhut par aap bhi mujhe samj nhi paye.. har kam ko responsibility se dekh rahe mere side nhi.. jo time free hai bas mujhe de diya bas kar diya.. mai koi faltu chiz hu..

nk-toh kya karu kam chod du.. time to time hota hai jisme samaj le ek dusare ko.. jab time deta hu apko lena nhi nhi deta hu toh kehti hai diya nhi.. rat ko late ho gya par aaj dena chahta tha na.. leave apke gusse ke aage kuch samaj nhi aayega apko.. he leave from there..

nk went in hull nd starts working.. ak was in her room..

ras-yeh lo inka toh bhut hi bura hal hai.. ab mujhe hi koi trick apnani padegi..

now in evening rashmi came near of ak..

ras-bhabhi aap ready ho gai kya..

ak-nhi rashmi main kya karugi jake plz tum..

ras-no ways yeh red gown hain na pehen ke jaldi aao.. my order bas..

ak-par rashmi she leave.. nk came.. ak went in bathroom..

here nk wore beautiful bleck coat nd pent tie also.. nd ak wore red coloured simer gown make juda side roses flowers.

red lipstick nd makeup.. with hill..

she came out from bathroom.. nk was just watching to ak..

his heart was saying oo my god... just⭐️

nk-amm.. aap ready ho gai.. gussa abhi bhi hai ya..

ak-chale rashmi wait kar rahi hogi. she went..

nk-laugh sach kehte h aaurat ko samjhna namumkin hota hai.. uff... now nk went in outside..

ras-ulala mast lag rahi bhabhi nk bhaiya ne control kaise kara nd laugh..

ak-kya tum bhi.. kisme jayege..

ras-batati hu dada ko aane dijiye..

than nk came..

nk-meri car key mil nhi rahi..

ras-heh woh booked hai abhi aap usme jayege.. naksh were shocked to sees it..

nk-pagal ho gai ho kya..

ras-it is needed aap dono ke liye isi main aana hai bas chalnai aati hai na..

ak-par rashmi..

ras-aap toh sant hi rahiye girl ko bhut pasand hota hai bike ki trip.. yes it was bike..

nk-tum bhi na than bm nd gy3 came..

gy-jao bahu jao munna..

nk-kya aap log aaiye..

nk sat on bike nd starts it.. ak sat on back..

ras-kya bhabhi jor se chipak ke pakdo dada ko..

ak-rashmi.. she grabbed lill to nk.. nk felt it.. sees to ak from side mirror.. her nervousness..

rashmi took aks both hand nd put it on nks stomach..

ak-rashmi.

ak-esse chipak ke baitho oki..

nk-gigling.. he starts bike.. ak went on nk..

ak-aahh..

nk-sry dhayan se... dey went...

ras-hehe.. he called to mohit... ho gya plan successful aaj toh dono ke bich pyar ki aag lagani hi hai jiju..

ab dada ki bike bar bar rukegi due toh break aur bhabhi unke upar... laugh.. 😲..

wat will happen next...

thanku for ur support..

precap-nk kissed to ak in party... 😆

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Uff ab kya bataao...

Daily daily fight...

OMG kab shuru hogi love.. But ya takrar ke baad pyaar will be very special...

Hmm wat to say both r correct in their pov..

But ya as ak said first we should give time for bond to build up

Then only they can understand each other priorities and likings

Good that whole family is supportive...

Ak surprise and nk disappointment

Waiting for next what will happen in party

How nk controlled seeing ak lol

Do update pool party... Nk to kiss ak and bike sawaari chipakke...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
Uff ab kya bataao...
Daily daily fight...
OMG kab shuru hogi love.. But ya takrar ke baad pyaar will be very special...
Hmm wat to say both r correct in their pov..
But ya as ak said first we should give time for bond to build up
Then only they can understand each other priorities and likings
Good that whole family is supportive...
Ak surprise and nk disappointment
Waiting for next what will happen in party
How nk controlled seeing ak lol
Do update pool party... Nk to kiss ak and bike sawaari chipakke...

bolo bolo i waana listen all i was waiting since long..

apne naksh ki habit hi hai fight karke phir pyar karo than love ka fun is like aww⭐️soo choo happy to read ur comments aww u liked this part thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😉..

haa both r same in their way but as u said pyar hogi toh aachi honi chahiye..

haa family will try hard but both budduram ka kya kahe re😳..

kya pata kya hogi.. i will start new part soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

part-16.

nk was driving suddenly bike stooped... nd ak came on nks back..

nk-aks lips touched to nk nd her lipstick put on his coat..

ak-apko bike chalani nhi aati kya.

nk-aati hai par pata nhi kyo.

ak-kya..

nk-ruk rahi bich bich main.. main phir se start karta hu.. he again starts bike... naksh sees to couple who were hugging nd kissing to each on bike..

ak sees to all.. nk feeling weired... ak grabbed nks shirt. nk can feel it that ak is watching to all couple... suddenly nks bike stooped nd forcefully went on nk her cheeks touches to nks cheeks.. nk was just numb..

ak felt strange...

ak-kya ho gaya yeh bike kharab hai kya..

nk-pata nhi aqj 15 minutes ka rasta half an hour ka ho gaya.. i m so.

ak-angry..

nk-nhi i m soo much worried..

ak-kyo..

ak-because apko mujhe jhelna hoga na har kadam pe which u dont want.. ak giggles.. nk felt happy...

nk-hope ab na ruke.. he again starts it.. after that dey reached in place. thankgod pachuch toh gye.. dey sees to all.. varsha shorya naman rashmi mohit nanu..

sh-namste jamaisaa..

nk-hug to him kaise ho dada.. bhabhi namaste..

va-hloo nice to meet u ak tu kitni preety lag rahi..hug to her..

nk-rashmi tu pahuch gai na hame bike pe atak atak ke bhejne pe.. i know all..

mo-oye yeh sab band kar.. bhadai ho pehli bar aap party main aaye toh sachi aao andar.. dey entered in party.. it was pool paety.. pool was in between..

d whole place was decorated with bloons..

red coloured light was here...

varsha nd ak were enjoying with each nd nk nd mohit wwre in corner..

va-kya hua u looking dull..

ak-nothing bas esse hi... sab kitne happy hai n.

va-nd tu..

ak-i m also try to adjust with life..

va-essa hota hain baby dheere dheere sab aacha ho jayega.

ak-hmm..

here mo-kya yr kya kar raha hai tu..

nk-pani pi raha..

mo-pagal kuch gadi badi aage.. i mean..

nk-pata nhi kya karna chahiye bat karo toh dikkat na karo toh. time do phir bhi problem ek bat kahu yeh ladies na problem kud hai..

mo-waah beta waah ek week main yeh bat ohoo.. ab kya kahoge jab hamare jaise time pass aa jayega..

are rashmi yeh kya hain..

ras-jiju drink hai yeh dada lo na..

nk-main nhi lunga..

mo-pagal cold drink hai yeh le.. gave to him..mohit gave isara to rashmi..

rashmi went near of ak..

ras-hii bhabhi apka fav cold drink.. aao..

ak took it... nk was drinking it..

nk-kuch ajib taste hai iska..

mo-pilo na aaj romantic night hai drink bhi naseli hai..

here ak took it..

ak-ajib sa taste hai na... main aati hu pani pi ke. put it on aside.

ras-are bahbhi ne piya nhi jayada..

va-kya hai isme..

ras-are hamne na bhabhi aur dada ko pass lane ke liye isme romance create karne wali teb mila di hai.

va-kya yeh dono toh gye..

ras-bilkul gye.. now mohit said on Mike..

mi-hii all.. so aaj jaisa ki life ka important din hai wahi main kahuga ki hum enjoyment karte hai thoda small small games.. first jodi hogi hamari ak nk.. dey were shocked nd naman karishma nd hamari pyari jodi varsha nd dadu ki..

dey came near of stage..

mo-so game yeh hain ki aap dono ke ek ek leg ko kapdse se hum band denge aur aapko run karna hai jo pehle pahuchega us red mark ke pass woh hoga winner..

nk-watt a stupid.. ak gave glare look to nk.

nice..

va-shorya hame jitna hai bas..

sh-jitege hum hi jite ge..

now rashmi tied cloth on naksh leg. on shava leg nd on narishmas leg.

naksh were hardly trying to run..

ak - nk try karo na plz..

nk-kya karu essa feel ho raha kisi ne meri ek pair leli.

ak-uff..

na-jaldi karo karishma hum sabse aage hai suddenly dey falls on floor..

kar-dekha out ho gye na hum..

ak-yaiee... ak put her hand on nks stomach.. nk starts feeling it.. his body was getting electric fire touch..

nk stooped..

ak-watt run karo na..

nk-nk was watching her lips... kya ho raha mujhe yr..

ak-varsha jit gai.. nk aap kuch nhi kar sakte kya..

nk-wohh mujhe kuch.. sees her nack..

ak-kya hua..

nk-pata nhi...

ak-mujhe alg karo.. she opened to cloth.

va-yaiee hum jit gye... tu har gai ak made face but laugh..

mo-congrtss bhabhi... dey gave gift to both.

ab bari aati hai sare couple ke liye.. paper dance ki..

ab hogi paper dance ki bari..

ak-waww my fav.. sees to nk. but.

va-alone nhi madam..

nanu-nk tu dikha dena mera bhai best hai best hi hai ekdom.

nk-kya didi main har gaya suna nhi apne..

nanu-aww ek bar hua na bar bar nhi hoga..

mo-now sab apni jagah lele..

everyone took their places..

naksh were watching to each..

nk was just waana to touch her like he never touched..

nk-kyo ak ko dekh ke essa lag raha mujhe..

more part coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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naksh standing on paper.. there between gap.. dey danced well.. now music stooped nd naksh fold to paper.

nk nd ak dancing with gap..

all were enjoying this dance.. now music stooped nd naksh again folded to paper..

dey were now close lill... again dey folded paper..

now nk was lill confused.. every wife put their leg on their hubby..

ak came close of nk nd put their leg on nks feet..

nk can feel it.. swlly swlly nk starts enjoying it.. ak was about to falls but nk grabbed her stomach.. ak was watching in his eyes.. varsha nd karishma falls.. dey wwre out now..

now naksh lastly folded to paper.. mohit took to nanu in his arms. nd nk left to ak in his hand.. ak covered her hand with nks nack.

dey were enjoying with each..

mo-oo god main toh thak gya.. he came out from paper.. naksh were watching in their eyes.. everyone laugh.. music stooped.. nk realize that everyone watching to them..

he put to ak on floor..

mo-yaiee ak nk won.. ap dono ka fgift... dey took it..

now party was going on.. nk was feeling so much hot now.. ak was taking water...

nk came there..

ak-kuch chahiye apko..

nk-woh aap pani pi lijiye main woh.. ak was taking water some water drops went on her nack.. nk want to touch it..

ak sees to nk nd put glass aside..

ak-kya hua..

nk-aap khush hai na i mean ak woh... his feelings were increaseing in every minutes .

woh ak.. he was coming close of ak.. she didnt like it. held aks hand..

ak-nk kya kar rahe..

nk-ak kaise batauu main wohh.. wohh.. kis apke i dont know.

ak-sab dekh rahe na plz nk i really dont like this..

she went outside..

nk-kya ho raha mujhe kyo ak ko ekdom uske lips uska sarir mano pakad lu.. essa feel ho raha i dont know wats this.. maybe sry bolna chahiye..

ak was outside..

ak-yeh nk ko kya ho gaya hai main kuch jayada hi soch rahi hu kya.. pata nhi par esse bina bat ke esse pass aana aur kiss ki bat karna pata nhi.. yeh ladke hote hi bure hai..

she was going without watching anything..

suddenly she went in rever... she dont know swimming.. nk was searching to ak..

ak-aah pani..

nk-watched to ak.. ak.. he went in rever... kya hua.. she was not in sence..

ak-i m ff. nk laid to ak on floor..

nk-r u fine ak...

ak-...

nk-oo god kuch bol rahi rahi.. pressed to ak but she didnt come in sence.. sees here nd there..

nk sees aks face..

nk-god safe me.. nk was swlly swlly going near of ak.. nd put his lips of ak..

ak didnt respond.. nk was seeing her eyes..

he starts giving breath on aks mouth.. she coughed lill..

nk-watched to ak.. nd he melt fully.. he again put his lips on her nd starts kissing to ak..

ak swlly swlly came on sence nd was shocked that nk is kissing to her..

ak-amm.. she was pushing to nk... she hitted to nk...

nk came on sence.. ak was fire in anger..

ak-stood nk... .. .

ak-kya socha tha kya nikle tum nk.. all were in distance..

kya ek ladki ka sarir sirf sex ke liye hota hai.. chii kitni ghatiya mentality hai tumhari. main waha dub rahi thi

aur tum apni essh dekh rahe the aacha laga hoga na kiss karke.. mujhe yeh umid nhi thi.. uff sara din socha guilty ho par nhi matlbi..

bhut gussa aa raha mujhe chii sachi kehte h life barbad ka hi ghar hain.. sach main i really dont exoect from u.. nk felt so bad. it was so harsh..

nk watching to ak.

nk-bas ak bas.. i m sry aaj ke bad nhi aauga pass.. behave like human.. in low voice mujhe laga tum dub rahi so breath de raha tha yeh sab nhi socha..

waise bhi is natak ko jayada der nhi chalna chahiye. aur aap bhut hosiyar hai na so jan lijiye main chah ke bhi apke pass nhi aauga oki.. than everyone came nk stooped.. sab aa rahe atlest ab toh pata nhi chalna chahiye inko wat happened between us..

aap aa jaiyega. he leave from there..

ak-oo god yeh sab kya keh diya. shitt.. mohit nanu rashmi came.

mo-kya hua bhabhi yeh nk bhi na gussa aa jata hai isko..

ak-kuch nhi bas yuhi.. rashmi hum chale.. .. varsha nd shorya came..

va-sab thik hain na ak..

ak-haa woh chote mote fight ho jati hai na.

va-koi gunah nhi kiya tumne itna chilate hai kya yeh expection nhi thi mujhe..

ak-tu chinta mat kar ja sab thik hai.. dey leave.

ak-god.. she was going. suddenly watchmen said to ak..

wa-are maam aap kaha thi nk sir apko koj rahe the bhut paresan the..

ak-kya paresan..

watck-haa puche toh maine bataya aap waha gye ho.

ak-kya... maine kuch jayada hi bol diya nk ko..

kya ho jata hai mujhe pata nhi mujhe manna hoga nk ko.. warna rashmi sabko kharab lagega aur nk..

chiii..

kaise manaugi..

precap-aks chulbuli rup nd manyofy mission to nk.. nd dey will leave for honeymoon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 7 years ago

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#97

lovely part.. ak did so much taiyari but nk aur uska kam.. i like ak's anger its justified and also like the way nk say sorry to ak.. whole part was like only fight but in last nk drooling over ak which i liked.. naksh ki bike ride aww so romantic will read next part and give comment soon

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#98

Pata nahi ye naksh ki fighting kab end hogi and when they will start a sweet bonding relation...

Pyaar mein takraar is fine but both r thinking opposite one is not understanding offo

Ek part pe kitne kisses wow

Pool party was cool

And paper dance was like aww

Naksh won the round.. ek fight finish nahi hui doosri is on board

Uffo naksh ki never ending fighting list

Wowwwhoneymoon so excited do update soon

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
lovely part.. ak did so much taiyari but nk aur uska kam.. i like ak's anger its justified and also like the way nk say sorry to ak.. whole part was like only fight but in last nk drooling over ak which i liked.. naksh ki bike ride aww so romantic will read next part and give comment soon

finally u read it yaiee thanku thanku so much dear for loving this part nd ur sweet comments aww haa ak nd nk both ki anger is justfy😃i will try ki kuch cute sweet moment put karu..

pura read karo nd say.. i will start new part soon😳

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
Pata nahi ye naksh ki fighting kab end hogi and when they will start a sweet bonding relation...
Pyaar mein takraar is fine but both r thinking opposite one is not understanding offo
Ek part pe kitne kisses wow
Pool party was cool
And paper dance was like aww
Naksh won the round.. ek fight finish nahi hui doosri is on board
Uffo naksh ki never ending fighting list
Wowwwhoneymoon so excited do update soon

aww hogi hogi now fight khatam hogi 😆now i will start their cute bonding yr thodi si fight was needed for story ⭐️u know na our frdship 😛haa think milna itni aasan nhi hoti..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 👏... haa kissy hui😆ur fav😆haa honeymoon nd aks chulbuli pan bhi.. i will start new part soon