TANGLED-KAIRA PART 5 updated - 22.12.2016. DO READ

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this is ramya... a few of you might be knowing already... This is my first attempt with Kaira.. I have written on ARshi before ... the ongoing track has been good but as always imagination never lets you rest... So this shall be my first one here... I really hope i get all your love

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TANGLED - PART 1

"Maybe I was destined to forever fall in love with people I couldn't have. Maybe there's a whole assortment of impossible people waiting for me to find them. Waiting to make me feel the same impossibility over and over again"
Karthik's hands gripped the book harder as his eyes blinked away a tear letting it roll down his cheek. As always the universe was working against his wishes this time too. Not that he was new to this but this time it felt worse... probably than ever before. More than when he had lost his mother. More than when his only childhood friend, his sister Keerthi moved away from him 2 years ago ... And it hurt more than the time when he had seen his father fall in the trap of the so called love of his greedy step mother... Perhaps this was all destiny had for him. Nothing but pain..The pain of always losing someone he loved ... He placed the book he was reading by his side as he heard someone call out to him " Karthikkk"
There walked a pretty girl clad in a cute red sari rolling her eyes at him... She scanned his face and in seconds picked up the book reading its title "Tell the wolves I am home by Carol"
She sighed as she sat by him " seriously Karthik... Not again... I mean how can someone get so lost in their books...😆 Trust me i cant focus more than 3 pages a day.. you keep hooked on it to for life and ...And top it all you sit with that goofed up face after reading them"
" Thats why Your a top model Miss.Neha ... and me ..." Karthik said managing to smile

Goofy Khadoos sounds perfect than top designer for you " she snapped with sarcasm

They laughed out for a second as Neha held his hand and smiled gently " Naira... 😳heyna"

Karthik nodded in negative as Neha smiled wider pulling him up shaking her head " Its okay...😊... time for shoot"

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" Dance is the hidden language of the soul... You need to bring what you feel in it " naira stressed looking at her students ...

" watch me now..." she said as she went on her knees spinning in circles vibrantly as the music played ... Everyone around watched in awe... The students fell in love with her all over again everyday... each time she thought them a step.. each time she showed a color...

" and thats how it goes " she declared in huffs and puffs as the students clapped for her

" I wasn't dancing for your claps... stay quiet and quickly get on the dance floor... we Just have 2 days for the final day " she reminded them sharply and turned away to set the music again.

" she dances so well and teaches even more beautifully... But why cant she ever talk more than that,,, or atleast smile.." a student vini sighed as another added " and she speaks just dance " cathy added " and other time khadoos " mini added further

" I said get to your positions... Am i clear ?" naira's stern voice spread through the air as the students quickly took their positions with naira beginning the dance


Akshara and Naitik watched from far with pain in their eyes..." whats happening Naitik... Its been a year... Gayu went away to swiss to handle the watches division... Unless I call she doesn't even drop a text ... and Naira... I seem to have lost her again... All that she knows is dance ... and talking with her is like rapid fire... yes no... or some irrelevant talk... What is happening to all our children... or .. Karthik... i dont even know where he is " akshara said in worry as Naitik frowned " Why his name now Akshara,,,, its been a year and he doesnt even contact us... Except for that one sudden mail of his resignation from Delhi I have no clue about him... i am terribly disappointed " Naitik said in temper as Akshara cupped his face " Its his birthday Naitik... And Something tells me He left us for a reason... this much i can guarantee about karthik 😭

Naitik ignored Aksharas words and walked away as Akshara stood there watching Naira 😳

SO THATS PART 1 guys... If you guys really like it i will pen this down further... Your comments would mean a lot 😳 chappals and tomatoes are welcome too... but throw something





Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 8 years ago
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PART 2- TANGLED

The director of the ad shoot handed Neha the dialogue sheet for the scene.. It was supposed to be the promo angle for a show which deals with heartbreaks ... Karthik checked the accessories she had worn and made a few alterations as they adjusted the lighting of the background

" he's just the best... He just works on ground to help us get perfection rather than just sending away the pieces of jewelery for us to try" the director told his assistants happily as they nodded watching Karthik fix every little thing around

" Jeeezzz" neha frowned as Karthik looked curious and she thrust the sheet on him " read this na... so cheesy"

Karthik read as a faint smile appeared on his face ..." come on Karthik... Not again... this is cheesy " she said rolling her eyes again

Karthik smiled on as he looked up at her " Not really neha... sometimes life gives us enough experiences to understand such cheesy stuff... Someday you will too" he said giving the sheet back to her as she shakes her head hopelessly memorizing the dialogue ignoring Karthik's gyaan

While the director called on the word " Action " the scene played right in front of Karthik bringing his old memories gushing faster than ever

Neha walked in clad in that beautiful saree as she looked at the picture of the guy she once loved and looked at the jewel he had supposedly gifted her once " Just because we can't be together doesn't mean I don't love you" she whispered her hands running over the fine piece of jewelry

karthik looked on as he remmebered the moment he had got naira the ring she had chosen once without her knowing.. he also remembered how he had to give back his treasure of her memories to her... The ring included ...

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Meanwhile elsewhere...

Naira's hands ran over the little ring still on her finger... It was the only thing she had of Karthik.. Her Karthik she fondly remembered as she waited for Mishti outside her school... Mishti had grown even closer to her since the time Karthik had left... She was her BFF now... She smiled as she remembered the recent friendship day when Mishti had showered her with friendship bands and taken her on a friendy date,,... But she always missed that one friend... that one person who was more than a best friend... her Jai...... " Happy birthday Jai... Wherever you are I hope you get all the happiness in the world " she sent a silent prayer as a tear rolled down her cheeks

" Naira diii" mishti screamed banging on the car's door bringing Naira out of her trance ...

" Mishtuuu... Sorry " naira apologized as she opened the door and Mishti sighed throwing her school bag behind

She got in the front as mishti spoke on... It was only mishti who did the talking now a days... The naira the world saw was shut in her own world and if there was one person who had the luck of seeing her smile and talk a bit more than needed it was her Mishtu...

" mandir di... Can we stop on " mishti screamed as Naira smiled nodding and pulled on the brakes

They stood before the idol their own thoughts engulfing them...

" Please bhagwan ji... where is my BFF... you are so mean... I pray to you everyday... Akshara bua told me honest prayers from the heart are always heard.. then why arent you listening to me... Please I want my BFF... I want to talk to him... I miss him so much " mishti prayed to herself silently not voicing out... niara might probably stop talking to her also If she mentioned Karthik...

she suddenly opened her eyes as she felt a hand on her head " Mishtuuu... You miss him na ?"

Mishti paled in surprise... this was the first time Naira had mentioned him since he left

" You wont be angry?" she asked softly as naira smiled faintly ... the next second Mishti threw her hands around naira and cried " I miss him diii...i miss my Bff " the little girl cried as Naira tried her best to not let the tears flow ... She went on her knees cupping Mishti's face

" I thought only I was your BFF now... you dint forget him na " naira asked softly as Mishti nodded in negative

" Mishtuu I am sorry... I am sorry you had to lose your BFF because of me " Naira said cutely holding her ears and mishti hugged her again as they remained silently both thinking of the one person in Thier mind... KARTHIK... THEIR BFF😳

"I miss you in waves and tonight I'm drowning. You left me fending for my life and it feels like you're the only one who can bring me back to the shore alive."


TO BE CONTINUED... will continue this part tonight.. need to rush as I am on on call😳😳😕

seeing ur comments i cant wait to write more... a big hug to you all.. i shall reply real soon to all of you... plz drop ur comments as that encourages me to write.. chappals or tomatoes or even eggs but something😆
Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 8 years ago
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Tangled - Part 3

"To make one person the center of your world is bound to end in disaster. There are too many factors outside your control."


Karthik saw neha sitting lost in thoughts as the rest were busy leaving from the shoot...

" And who's lost now ?" he snapped her out of her trance as she chuckled quickly looking up to him " nobody... the lane to my house is under construction and I wont be able to drive down... I Walked down in the morning assuming the shoot to wrap up but as usual " she sighed as Karthik smiled " I cant drop you... But.."

" Its okay Karthik... When has somebody been allowed to board your bike!" she said corking her eyebrows as KArthik chuckled now "Nothing like that... there was never a need and today I walked down too"... " hmmm ...sooo" neha looked on as KArthik continued grabbing her bags

" So I am walking you down... Comeee" he said as she nodded happily jumping up the chair

It was almost night and the day seemed too long than usual for Karthik.. they took the shortcut lane to nehas house ... Nothing but a few faint whispers were heard in the otherwise calm night with the shadows of the giant trees enveloping the lane ahead and it looked like the street lights were fighting to let their rays through the wide branches

" Karthik...the girl in your purse... Can you temme about her ?" neha suddenly disturbed the waves as Karthik looked on " just curious... As a friend ... If you don't mind you can temme" neha continued as Karthik smiled faintly

" Nehaa... She was everything ... I don't even know how to start but I felt at peace only by her side... I used to forget everything... I was finally walking out of the dark shadows engulfing my life... "

" shes so sweet haan?!" neha said as Karthik chuckled " sweet she is .. butto me never" he said remembering their silly fights ... " can you believe it neha .. she used to call me a Frog and I used to feel like a prince " karthik said mocking himself as Neha adored the way karthik kept talking about the photo girl.. " But shes the one person who knew me..when I would hurt , when I would smile everything... She just had magic " he continued with the glint in his eyes

" had she been here na.. she would have been the first person to say Happy birthday meendak today " he said his voice trailing away as neha paled " karthik... its your birthdayyy"

" hmmm" he said softly as neha almost had her hands on his collar " its 10 pm and we have just 2 hours left ... what should I do " she screamed

" nothing... You have been my only friend... and top it all I spoke my heart out after how long I don't remember... Gift obtained " he said as Neha sighed " Call Nairaaa"

" are you mad... She doesn't love me.. I mean she does but as a friend... I don't have the strength to let myself know she moved on... " he defended as Neha's eyes blinked in surprise " you don't even know if she has...?"

" Its complicated ... " he said as neha jumped the guns " may I know how ?"

" Neha ...I have moved on... I would prefer not to talk about this" Karthik said softly as Neha nodded with her usual sigh " fine Okay... But come in and share a coffee with me on your bday" she said with a sweet smile as Karthik stood dumb and neha hugged him " happy BdayKarthik,... Text me once you reach home "

" Neha I..." karthik hesitated knowing well she was disappointed but happy that she understood

"Go Karthik... This much I know you ... good night..." neha said as she stood by the huge gates to her house while Karthik smiled faintly and turned to walk away

" I really hope you haven't moved on Naira... Your Meendak hasn't"Neha said smiling to herself

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Gayu finally closed down her laptop with a huge sigh of relief... The final presentation for tomorrow was ready and it had turned out much better than expected

" Good Job Gayu" she said flashing a cute smile to herself. Suddenly she heard a Knock on the door... Rolling her eyes in wonder at who bothered visiting her at this hour her hands unlocked the door to her apartment

She stood in awe as her eyes widened and mouth widened in surprise " Vivaaannn"

" Should I come in and explain my sudden appearance in person " vivaan said raising to her the bouquet of flowers and gayu nodded letting him in while she happily received the bouquet of beautiful flowers

And before Gayu could realize he flashed a card right in front of her and her eyes widened as she read the card

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Meanwhile Naira pulled the blanket over her and mishti as they cuddled together

" naira di... Are you upset about something " mishti asked cuddling closer to Naira as Naira nodded in negative pressing her lips against Mishti's forehead signing her to close her eyes and sleep... Mishti smiled sadly as she thought to herself " If only you had not taken that promise from me BFF... Everybody is worried... I hate you... " she thought sadly as she corrected herself " I miss you" and let sleep take over her...

Naira remembered the times her and karthik were always together pulling each others legs and fighting with each other...

" where are you Jai.. I hope your fine " she said to herself softly

"What do you do when the one person you want comfort from the most is the one who caused your pain? How can I want so desperately for him to wrap me up in his arms but also want so much for him to leave me alone."

Something inside Karthik snapped as he read the lines of the AMANDA GRACE novel...His mind went running to the night he had just left the sighanias... Naira's happy dance flashed across his face... Now this was not new ... he kept remembering that one fateful day time and again... But this time it hurt him more... made him want to look deeper into it... something suddenly felt wrong...

Before he could realize his hands hands had dialed her number on his phone ...

" Helooo" he heard the voice faintly as he paled the color on his face and before he could realize rushed back into the call and stayed still...

Naira almost felt her breath to cease ... ... was it him ? her brains wondered as she slapped herself hard holding the phone tighter as her eyes glistened while heart told her " it was him...

The memories flashed in jet speed and all she could see was his face smiling at her ...

Karthik stayed still... he definitely dint want to call... did she call... or was it his hands... He just dint realize... all he knew now was he heard that voice... the only voice which has been ringing around him ever since he met Miss.. Rishikesh... his sherni...


" Kaa... Kaaarthikk... Karthik..." she called back not wanting to lose the chance of talking to him after a long year...

" Karthik... your listening right...its you only na" she almost begged as tears rolled down her cheeks...

" karthik ... Plzzz... talk to meee: She cried in vain but all she got in repsonse was a cold wave of silence.. she looked into the mobile screen... the seconds were still ticking... he was probably listening...

Karthik sat there his left fingers tightly holding the phone while his right covered his mouth ... he could feel his legs tremble even at rest,,,,,

" karthikkk" Nairaaa broke down disappointed as Karthik cut the call quickly... he couldn;'t afford to hold it back any longer... he never spoke... it was an unknown number... and she knew it right away... she dint even guess anyone else... And what was that pain her voice... it felt as if she longed for him..." karthik... you were wrong.. you shouldn't have left her" his heart raced in her defense while the mind walked in snapping" Come on karthik... we of course why she's desperate and who she is desperate for..."

His mind went back to the karwauchauth night when chandu had come to him " karthik bhaiyya fuse is gone... could you check over"

Karthik walked down quickly... he had to fix this fuse and leave for once... naira had turned down his proposal on dandiya night... but he had thought she needed time to realize seeing the way she had rushed around him every time he avoided her... he wanted to propose her again that night and reassure her that he would wait and she could take her time... But everything stumped and crumbled as he saw the scene in front of him... He say gayu hugging naira as she confessed " I love karthik Nairaaa... I really love him... ur with me right ?"

All he saw was naira showing her back hugging gayu tightly... Karthik paled and before he could think he saw naira breaking the hug with a smile... and this did it for him...

He rushed back taking the way out of the singhania house with his bags ... he stumbled on every block on his way... He crushed to the pavement in a corner and broke down finally... this time harder than ever,,,,, the smile she had for Gyau flashed across him again and again... " there was no confusion... naira was right... She never loved him "

He rushed to the airport and left in the first flight to Delhi... he had been with keerthi for a week and had managed to not let her know about anything... one fine day the singhanias had sent him mail..." come back karthik beta... we have something improtant to talk- Akshara " it read and thats when Karthik realized what was coming...

His hands quickly typed a resignation with a blunt request to naitik never to contact him again

"Why did you never think about me... Nairaaa" karthik cried as his phone vibrated with an SMS.. his fingers opened the message as his eyes read ... " happy birthday meendak..."


"Love is hard to find, hard to keep, and hard to forget."
Alysha Speer

to be continued

Sorry for the late post guys... sorry annie for the super late update 😃😃😃 really held up..

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Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 8 years ago
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Tangled - Part 4

"It's the love that goes through the hardest trials and survives that's worth having."
Katie Ashley, The Proposal

Karthik walked to bed and placed the phone close to his heart as the tears rolled down... Why was fate playing this cruel game with him...He suddenly felt a soft breeze over his face and he cleared his eyes as a memory lightened further

" Maaa..." he called out as the lady smiled warmly at him " Karthikkk" she said as Karthik teared yet again " maaa... where did you go... "

" Why is my bubble baby cryinggg" she asked with concern as Karthik cried harder " maaa..I need youuu."
His mothers face fell helplessly as she smiled faintly " I cant come Karthik... But she will... You need her... "

" I dont want anybody ... I just want you... i just want to come to you leaving all of this ... Plzzz maaa" Karthik pleaded as His mother smiled " One day you will remember what you need to and you will hate yourself for walking away... Dont do this karthik..." she said softly and before KArhtik could realize her image vanished

Karthik snuggled on his cot pulling the blanket closer and before he could realized shivered with tears to deep slumber...

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Meanwhile...

Naira looked out of the window towards her garden and a smile appeared on her face... She saw Akshara and Naitik holding hands and laughing their hearts out over something... They were the most beautiful parents one could have... and they had the best love story ever... Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder " karthikkk" she smiled faintly as karthik pulled her closer hugging her from behind..." secretly watching My boss's romance is it ?" he teased as Naira sulked turning her face

" Nairaaa... angry" he whispered into her ears as she nodded turning to him " why did you go?"

" why did you let me ?" he asked softly

" As if you would have stopped If I had asked you to" she sulked yet again as Karthik smiled " You could have asked and then decided "

" I need you Karthikkk" naira pleaded as Karthik smiled dropping a kiss on her forehead " you dont think I do!" he said as he vanished and naira walked out of her trance 😳


Naira smiled as tears made their way down to her cheek and she watched her parents from far...

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NEXT MORNING>...

the sun rays creeped through the windows making their way on Naira's face... Mishti was closely snuggled to her as if she was holding her for dear life...

" Naira softly planted a kiss on her cheeks as Mishti wriggled closer ...

Akshara smiled at the door watching the sisters much in love

" mummaaa" Naira said looking up as she noticed her shadow

" Good morning beta..." Akshara said placing her palm on her cheek

" you could have joined us for walk last nigght" akshara said softly as Naira paled " you saw me watching "

" haan... what do you think... maa hun thumari... i will always have my thoughts around my children" she said as Naira held AKshara's hand with a faint smile

" Naira... sometimes the conflict between mind and heart is so strong that we fail to side with both of it and loose ourselves... but we should know to decide " Akshara said

" who will you chose mumma... mind or heart " Naira asked softly as Akshara smiled " i have learnt to always listen to my heart... its difficult ... sometimes it hurts but in the end it always turns up right... I have tried the mind.. its easy but breaks my heart later and everything appears so wrong... so... heart... thats what I listen to" she said softly and naira nodded her head as Akshara got up walking away with a small smile to herself... her daughter was melting... 😳


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" karthik... where is this Karthikkk..." neha kept looking at the clock... time was ticking , it was almost afternoon and he was still not here... His phone was not answered and the director had no clue either

She quickly grabbed her handbag and drove out of the shoot to his apartment...

While the indicator on his apartment at the 5th floor showed him to be IN he was not responding to the door bell for the 100 th time...

Fear crept within neha as she quickly got the watchman to break open the door... In minutes she walked in to find a karthik shivering on his bed his eyes closed tight...His face had blackish trails all over making his overnight crying evident...
She felt weird... her heart stung in pain as she saw him lie there helplessly... " Quick... call the ambulance "she said


HOSPITAL.


The doctors rushed him into the ICU as neha stood out tensedly holding his phone...
In minutes the doctor's rushed out " He's running a very high temperature... we have sent some labs ... we will tell you shortly" the doctors said and disappeared back to their job

" i should inform his family " neha thought and suddenly held her hand " in this 1 year he never spoke about anybody... Nobodyyy... and she only knew he was here single and professional degrees..."

She suddenly remembered his phone and paled seeing the cal LOG .. NAIRAA... he had called her.. may be he broke aftr that... what was wrong with this girl she wondered ... But she cant call Naira... she scrolled the contacts and finally found " Mom..."

She breathed a sigh of relief as she dialed the number quickly

after a brief ring the cal was answered with a " hello...Akshara Singhania here"


TO BE CONTINUED😛😛

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PART 5 TANGLED
"...I gave you painted air - tears I couldn't weep - truths I couldn't speak - all the words that caught in my throat..."
John Geddes, A Familiar Rain

" Hey bhagwan... what has this guy been upto... " Akshara thought as her flight landed ... In minutes her cab drove down the wide streets across the majestic buildings amidst buzzling traffic and finally she heaved a sigh as she saw " Elysial Hospitals "...


She quickly paid the cab guy rushing to the reception anxiously " Mr. Karthik... "

"ICU mam... 3rd floor "the lady replied as Akshara paled " ICUUU" ... Neha had just told her he was unwell but this much... Akshara ran up the stairs panting for breath as she finally reached the ICU doors... She looked around to see all worried and fallen faces giving her tight cramps that pulled her heart


" AKSHARA AUNTY " neha quickly walked up to her as Akshara looked confused " neha... Heyna"

" haan aunty.. I saw ur pic in the caller ID of KArthik " she explained as AKshara ignored the intros jumping the guns quickly " Where is Karthik.. what happened ... Why is he in the ICU "

Neha quickly told her how she had found him and was in the ICU... " the doctors din say much except that they would talk to his parents... hes stable now but " she said as Akshara nodded " can I meet him?"


Akshara walked into the ICU nervous seeing all the sick patients supported with beeping monitors all around... Naitik's tragic period of illness flashed across her as she calmed herself finally seeing karthik lie down peacefully ,his eyes closed...


She walked to his side as she remembered how he had been aunty aunty mam mam around her all the time ... Her hands slowly ran through his hairs while tears rolled down her cheeks making way to his ..


" maaa" he shivered as she held his hand quickly " Karthikkk"


Karthik held her hand tightly his eyes still shut as the nurse walked in "don't worry.. He has been given sedation... He is better now... We will shift him to the ward in a while... And you need to meet the Doctor before that "she informed politely as Akshara nodded


She looked down to see KArthik holding her hand tightly not wanting to let go... "What relationship is this bhagwanji... You take him away from me without explaining and now give him back to me like this... again without explanation... He calls me maa but I never knew and he never let me ... and now when I do I still stand helpless...all my children are in their own worlds knocking us out and all I get to see is suffering ,,,,. please do something" she pleaded in silent prayer...

She slowly uncoiled her fingers off his and walked with a heavy heart to the Doctor's cabin

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Naira paced her room floors up and down with the phone in hand.. she even dint feel like visiting her academy for the classes... he had not replied... But after a year he had called.. She wanted to talk to him... Hear his tar tar... she couldn't stay away anymore... Not at all...and now his phone was ringing and totallt switched off since last 2 days... Akshara had told her shes going for some business meet... she dint know what could be done

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She suddenly felt someone closing her eyes and she quickly uttered " Karthikkk"


Gayu paled all the color in her face with a confused expression " Naira..."


Naira turned shocked listening to her sister s voice... What had she just done...

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Akshara sat beside neha as Karthik lay asleep in the private room bed of the hospital... They had shifted him out of the ICU but he was still under his sedation .. To doctors had told Akshara how he was possible suffering from a chronic depression and perhaps needs counselling too...


Neha sat beside telling akshara all that she knew about Karthik" there could be only one depression in his life

Aunty ..." she said and just Neha was about to mention Naira they heard Karthik " ouchhh"


" careful Karthik" akshara said swiftly going to his side


Karthik opened his eyes shocked hearing Akshara's voice " Mam..."


" Not bad.. you atleast remembered " she said as Neha looked on confused " why was he calling his mother mam"


" Akshara looked at neha,,, haan beta,,, I am his mam... he will only save my number as maa... calls me mam" she sulked with a smile as neha looked confused more


" Akshara mam is Naitik sir's wife" karthik said as neha spilled up more " so your nairas mother "


Akshara was surprised " you know naira"


Karthik quickly cut in " she knows everyone.. gayu naksh naira mishtii" and Neha nodded confused and excused herself with a cal and walked away giving them their time


" How are you now ?" akshara asked as KArthik nodded " better... sorry she called by "


" don temme by mistake " akshara said cupping his face ..." karthik... Don't think much... just rest.,,, we will talk later" Akshara said smiling gently as Karthik obediently nodded

... 4 days later ...

Karthik was a little better and he was home finally.. Its been almost 2 days he got discharged and came home and there was not single moment Akshara had let him budge out of bed...


" karthik... your soup" akshara said walking in with a smile as KArthik smiled taking it over ... "Thank you mam" karthik said as Akshara smiled cupping his face "you can call me maa"


Karthik's eyes glistened as Akshara took his phone " Your phone was switched off... charged your phone overnight... check out all your stuff... I will get lunch ready " she said walking out as karthik smiled yet again

His eyes widened as he saw the missed calls from Naira 2 days ago probably after which his phone got switched off... His inbox was flooded as well...tears rolled down his cheeks as he remembered their first meeting by the banks of water in rishikesh... " meendakkk" he whispered wiping his tears


His trace broke as he heard Akshara call him " Karthikkk beta... come for lunch"


Karthik walked out slowly surprised to see his entire hosue arranged beautifully than before.. the touch of a mother was evident everywhere... Even the Pooja altar was bright with the diyas glowing... Thoughts of his mother came rushing down as he walked straight to the kitchen and without a second thought hugged Akshara letting the tears flow finally... She was surprised initially but quickly wrapped her hands letting him be without talking a word...

" food is getting cold " she reminded as Karthik nodded breaking the hug...


" Karthik..." akshara said while serving the food


" How is Rajshri aunty , sir , dadi.." karthik listed as Akshara ruffled his hairs " All fine..."


" everybody is ?" Karthik asked again in despair as Akshara nodded curiously


" Naitik sir must be angry with me " he snapped quickly as Akshara nodded in thoughts " haan but when I told him your sick he asked me to go even before I asked... we kept it confidential from family as we thought you might not like it " she said as karthik whispered " I am sorry for everything"

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" gayuuu di..." Naira said as Gayu stuffed food in her mouth


" your mad Naira... You loved Karthik na " she said as naira let the tears flow time and again

" what made you think of all this.. Are we in the world of serial bahus .. what was the need to over react" gayu sulked as she thrust one more morsel of food into Nairas mouth


" But you loved him too" Naira said as Gayu slammed herself " So what... He loved you... You could have told me "

" He left anyway di" she said as Gyau's eyes teared up " its all because of me ... And I thought he just left half way"

" no di... its not coz you... nobody had spoken to him about the rishta yet.. remember,... karwachauth when I came to know you like him ...I wanted to confess to him and then tell you and explain everything.. I refused him once ... You know my past na di... I was scared... but he just left with that one rejection,... he dint give me the time...this has nothing to do with you... He left coz I said No" naira said as Gayu smiled " whatever be the reason... we should find karthik... He loves you and will still do... I am sure"


" how r you so sure di" naira asked as Gyau smiled sadly " Love... that's how It is... like you do" gayu said dropping a kiss on Naira's forhead.


" I am sorry di..." naira said softly as Gayu smiled sweetly " not at all...your sister is a bit hopeless not so much naira... I took the time to walk myself out of my world and I was almost done,... but after knowing his love for you I am totally out of the bubble that never existed."


" vivaan has his wedding in one week.. that's why I was here... " gayu said as naira smiled longer " really

" haan... You guys are so very the same kinds friends na like me and karthik" naira said excitedly as Gayu nodded and watched naira go down to wish vivaan " haan naira.. we r the same... we both loved the person who was probably never ours..."she thought ans looked at the mirror " but I will bring him back to you... just for you... My little princess" gayu promised herself


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OKAY GUYS SORRY ABOUT THE SUPER LATE UPDATE>>>>>> BUT WILL MAKE IT UP IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE>>. IT WILL BE ALL KAIRA IN THE NEXT UPDATE


and next will be full on KAIRA>. thanks for waiting and sorry again😳

Edited by coolbakes_Jalad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its awesome..
so kaira are separated n leap if 1 year...
interesting continue soon
loving it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It'x awesome..👏👏
different and interesting story..
Update soon plzz..
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Great work... Next part plz..
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It's really well written... please do continue. Can't wait to read how they meet again

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