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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Aww di just aww moments in dis part..
Thanku so much for giving sach a cute part 😊 ..loved d respect of everyone towards naksh...like everyone gives farewell in clg than in khirshana 😊 ...naira sach a sweety pieee loved her natkhat panti..
Now it will be interesting that how nk nd duggu relationships will moves in story 😳 ...
Thanku for writing story in ur busy schedule. .plz do update next part soon di.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so happy to see that you continued your story.. I hope you remember me I am pragati.. this is heart touching part.. like that how much naksh become happy and emotional on going india even liking naira too 😊 rb and devyani scene is also nice... waiting to see a family bonding.. how's the reaction of duggu when he sees naksh and how their relation take place.. do update next part soon will be wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: abinaksh

Wow! So happy days are back again... The family reunion after years.. I want to see the foursome emotions.. Do update next part..

thanx abinaksh for like my ff hope i give u all a touchy story ya i get time i update this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Aww di just aww moments in dis part..
Thanku so much for giving sach a cute part 😊 ..loved d respect of everyone towards naksh...like everyone gives farewell in clg than in khirshana 😊 ...naira sach a sweety pieee loved her natkhat panti..
Now it will be interesting that how nk nd duggu relationships will moves in story 😳 ...
Thanku for writing story in ur busy schedule. .plz do update next part soon di.. 😃


thanx ruchi for like this and encharge me to write more
ya update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

so happy to see that you continued your story.. I hope you remember me I am pragati.. this is heart touching part.. like that how much naksh become happy and emotional on going india even liking naira too 😊 rb and devyani scene is also nice... waiting to see a family bonding.. how's the reaction of duggu when he sees naksh and how their relation take place.. do update next part soon will be wait


hi pragati no i am not forget u i am not busy now a days so hardly comes here nyc to read ur comments n ur post after a long time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --neeru--



hi pragati no i am not forget u i am not busy now a days so hardly comes here nyc to read ur comments n ur post after a long time

me too become happy to see you here.. do continue your story it's so interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

me too become happy to see you here.. do continue your story it's so interesting



ufff typo mistake not busy nahi busy seriously boss aa gaye the
THANX PRAGATI FOR LIKE MY STORY plzz do comments like that nd hope i give u all a nyc story 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 9th

Sorry for late update busy too much

Naksh about to opens the door

Suddenly he stop then the camera on Natik, Akshara &Naira

They all are comes in the house.first their footsteps and they comes inside the house

And every 1 sees them,all are shocked and stunned.

Rajbhanna and chotimaa sees them and they smiles to see them and all are happy as well as sad too.

Natik and akshara stand in the hall and naksh in shocked .he close his eyes then open again he is stunned and all the emotion comes in his face he is angry but as well as hsappy to see them and he sad too to see them.

Akshara and natik too sees him

Natik is like to hug hoim but he stop and naksh steps back too

Every one - akshara and natik tum log yaha kaise kya sach mein sapna to nahi hai

Chotimaa - nahi maa yeh sach aa gaye hai mein aur tumhare bauji to daar hi gaye the kitni late kaise ho gaye, are naira kitni badi ho gayi hai to

Naira- ha dadi 5 years ki ho gayi hoo main and she hugs her jai shree Krishna dadi

Bhabhimaa - devyani rajbaana yeh sab kya bol rahe ho tum

Chotimaa- kuch nahi bhabhi maa inhi logo se bhat kijiye

Bhabhimaa - natik and akshara... and tears comes in her eyes

Naksh about to go

Choti maa- naksh beta kaha ja rahe ho tum bhahar bharish start ho gayi hai

Naksh again sees then in anger koi nahi chotimaa bharish kabhi tej nahi vaise bhi aabhi mein yaha rukhkar kya karuga waise bhi abhi aapke guest aaye hai mein inhe janta nahi ho mein bore ho jauga aplog inhe handle kijiye .yeh log jale jayege tab mein aa jayoga

Chotimaa - naksh kya tarika hai tumhara yeh mummy papa hai tumhare

Akshara- koi bhat nahi chotimaa naraz hai hamse maan jayega natik too joins akshara

Naksh then again about to go

Suddenly naira comes in between

Bhai kaha ja rahe aap mein to yaha aayi hoo aul aap jaha rahe mein sang games bhi ni khelege

Aap kyo ja rahe hai

Naksh- vo kuch Nahi aata ho ja kar

Naira -nahi mujhe abhi khelana hai

Naksh thik hai kya khelana

Naira - bhaiya aapko "zip zap zip "khelana aata hai

Naksh -ha start karo

And they both are playing naira bhaiya mein jeet gayi majha aaya majha ek bar aur

Naksh- ok and they again Start to playing

And suddenly naksh sees natik standing in front of him and natik too sees him

And he goes inside the house in his room

Naira- bhayia kya hua

Natik- koi bhat bhayiya ko kaam mein jane tho(2)

Naman and karishma too comes their and they too her happy to see them and naman hugs natik and akshara hugs karishma and they mishit and said kitni bhadi ho gayi mishti in joy and tahiji and tauji and hugs them and chotimaa rajabhana comes their too natik and akshara touch their feets and yeh rishta ... plays

And they goes near bhabhi maa and about to touch her feet but suddenly bhabhi moves back and goes inside

All are stunned

Devyani -bhabhi maa kya hua

Akshara natik- naraz hai vo chahiye manate hai unhe

Bhabhimaa -in her room infront of God dhaynvad(thanks) bhagwan aapka jo aapne mera parivaar bura kar diya mere rahete rahete

Natik and akshara comes in the room

Bhabhi maa sees and hide her tears and said kyo aaye hai tum log wapas jaho

Akshara- aab kahi nahi jayege ee bhabhi maa hummm.. case jit gaye hai aapke bina hum kahaaa rahege (tears in her eyes)

Bhabhi maa -mujhe tum logo se bhat nahi karni tum log jayo

Chotimaa and rajbhana - bhabhi maa aap to kitne salo se bacho ka intzaar kar rahe the

Bhabhimaa - dekh devyani mujhe tujse koi bhat nahi karni tumho aur rajbhanna ko sab pata tha mujhe nahi bhataya

Chotimaa - meri koi galti nahi aap inse hi aur natik se bhat kariye mujhe to aach hi pata laga subhhe mein to khud shocked thi yeh log kab se plan kar rahe the

Rajbanna- ha bhabhi maa yeh mera aur muna ka plan tha kyoi surprise ka alag hi aanand hai aur thoda tense bhi the ki kahi yeh log aa na sakeaap pareshan ho jayogi

Bhabhimaa- kuyo nahi aayege bhagwan sath he hamare par abhi mujhe koi bhat nahi karni

Akshara and natik koi bhat nahi bhabhi maa itne salo bhat samaj sakte

Naira comes in the room too and hugs bhabhi maa and said dadi mere sshe bhi bhat nahi karoge

Bhabhimaa - aare nairu kya bol rahi tu to meri jaan hai kaise nahi and bhabhi maa melts and bhahimaa natik akshara and naira hugs each other and said tum sapko 41/2 -5 saalo bhad dekh kar--- and rajbanna and devyani too join and pyar ke bhandan plays

Natik and akshara goes near the naksh room

Natik- mein bhabhar hi rukta ho mujhe dekh kar vo naraz ho jayega and dukhi ho jayega

Akshara-natik kuch nahi hoga aap andar chaliye

Natik- thoda samah to ushe rehne to mein bhahar ki kada rahte aap milayi aap nahi milegi to mein naraz ho jayoga aapse

Akshara(sad) thik ke natik jaisa samjhe

Akshara goes inside the room naksh doing some computer work in his laptop

Akshara- naksh ... naks

Naksh- sees her and sees her and their too

Akshara- (understand ) akshara nakash kaisa hai

Naksh- aacha hoo

Akshara- kitna bada ho gaya hai

Naksh- he said nothing but tears in his eyes

Akshara hugs him beta papa bhi tujse

Naksh- suddenly goes back

Akshara- naksh

Naksh goes from their and see natik too

Natik-(tears) naksh meri koi galti Nhi thi (in his mind)

Akshara comes and criess and natik hugs her

Precap- in the maheswari house all r talking suddenly they all are stop

Hope u all like this part too hope i write next part soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice part... finally nakah came india.. naksh meeting with all and their emotional scenes is nice.. hope duggu bhi jald hi naksh ko samajhe and unki family complete ho jaye
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aww how sweet neeru di..thanku so much for writing this ff..it was really a cute part of family bond 😊 ..this leap is more touchy nd realistic than serial di...i m hpy that u r writing it..hats off to ur creativity nd dedication 😛
Naira she is a darling key maker between all..hope duggu Will join to his family nd dey wil be one ⭐️ plz di update next part soon 😊

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