love is frdship...:) ff#part9(page 28)

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nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --pranu--

accha...
ab jaldi se sazaa bataado?

U will give me so much love this is ur punishment ...:) bolo apnaogi ..

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SA-SIMRAN

@SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Nice update dear

naksh best part
and care for each other
akshi fight and naitik sweet nature
i lked
but plz yar jaldi update karna next part
aur tere baki ff kab update kar rahi hai
Sare ff mein sr kisi ne update kiya
plz update all ff

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

U will give me so much love this is ur punishment ...:) bolo apnaogi ..

okeiii zaroor doongi...

zarurat padi tho 2 doongi... 😃

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

first part is amazing.. akshi ki dhishum dishum for naitik was superb.. their friendship reminds me the rahul anjali of kkhh.. naksh are so cute and adorable friend.. love their sweet fights..

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
first part is amazing.. akshi ki dhishum dishum for naitik was superb.. their friendship reminds me the rahul anjali of kkhh.. naksh are so cute and adorable friend.. love their sweet fights..

Aww how sweet misri thanku thanku thanku so much for liking this part nd gave comments dear. ..no both characters r different from movie even story also ..but yaa dey r best frd like this ..😊next bhi esse sweet scene honge ...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: --pranu--

okeiii zaroor doongi...
zarurat padi tho 2 doongi... 😃

Awww ...😊I want double triple. ..😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Part-2

Na-kya hua tumhe ..

Ak-kuch nahi table mai lag ga..

Na-oo ..show me ..she unwore sandal nd he saw their is no mark ...akshra ki bachi kuch nhi hua ..natak bas haa ..

De kar du notes complete jayada natak mat kar ...

Ak-thats like my frd ...put her hand on his shoulder ..but ruk pehle lunch ..le gave her lunch box ..

Na-amm..felt gud smell of food ..waaw mera fav kheer ..thanku ..

Ak-thanku ko pocket mai rakho oki ..

Na-ate ..but alone ..vry testy haa ..

Ak-bhukad ..😡mujhe bhi puch lo ..I made this na ..

Na-this is vry testy yr ..kya karu control nhi hua..lo gave her in same spoon ..

Ak-nhi ..tu hi kha ..

Na-aacha ruk ..hold her hand nd feed into her mouth ..

Ak-amm..thanku ..

Na-thanku ko pocket mai rakh haa ..both laugh at d same time with same expression ..

Ak-oki ..ab annual function ke liye hope kar na painting competition mai first aau ..

Na-dont worry ..u r best aayegi ..

Than one boy came ..

Boy-akshra ..pls karwa do na hamara kam ..

Ak-sochti hu ..phir aa gaya ..oki ..but I want extra charge oki ..

Natik didnt understand what she did ..

Boy said oki nd went ..

Na-ab kya kurapati hai ..extra cost kyo ..

Ak-kuch nahi ..students grup ki leader hu na to abhi competition ke liye name dena hai ..ye late ho gaya hai ..ab sources karugi ..to change to banta hai na ..

Na-tu na ..bata to kiske liye money collect kar rahi hai ..

Ak-kuch nahi na bas esse hi ..tujhe to yad hai na ..

Na-medam mai nhi bulta hu kuch bhi ..

Ak-haa to ..hisab barabar ..tu bhi mat bata mai bhi nhi ..din aayga to hi batayge ..deal..gave thumbs up. .

Na-yes ..meri jhagdalu billy ...gave thumb s up..

Ak-hit him..kya bola ..

Na-tu to meri pyari frd hai passed buddys hug ..

Ak-tu bhi ..

Now varsa came nd mohit nd rashmi..

Hii frds ..

Naksh -oo hii ..

Na-kaisi thi classes ..

Trio-bakwas ..yr kash natik ki bat man kar hum bhi same subject choose kar lete ..but alg alg ki ..

Na-haa ..bola to tha ..but mane to nhi kisi ne..

Mo-to akshra jaise jabdarsati nhi kar sakta tha ..

Ak-nhi ..natik ne bola tha na ..hum alg class mai ja hi nhi sakte hai kyo ..

Var-tum dono na hum dono ke sath reh ke bhi ek dusare ke sath hi rehte ho ..

Na-we r best frd..

Var-aacha tum dono ne ek dusare ..akshi gave glare look ..so she stopped ..kuch nhi bye ..

Mo-esko kya hua ..

Ak-kuch nhi ..chalo natik ghar ..every one said bye nd naksh stood ..outside ..

More parts coming soon. ..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Na-aacha aaj to scooty mai ja but kal mai aauga lene oki ..

Ak-hmm..chal bye ..mere doggi ki tabiyat bhi thik nhi hai natik wo thik ho jayga na ..

Na-haa baba ..pichle bar bhi ho gaya tha na ..pls sunday ko shooping pe chal na mere sath ..

Ak-oki ..I will go ..but dekhti hu ..thik ho jayga to ..nhi to u will help me ..mai use admit karaugi ..

Na-oki baba ..chal bye ..

Both gave hug nd leave in home ..

In morning:-(family bhi I told but with naksh)

Natik gave horn two times ..but akshi wont come..

Na-roj to do horn mai aa jati hai ..aaj kya hua ..oo noo ..doogi ..

He went inside of house ..wer rajshree nd vis stood nd anshu laugh ..her bro..

Na-kya hua ..akshra ro kyo rahi ho..

Raj-beta dekh na pagal ho gai hai ..wo doggi ab nhi ..to ..kaise ro rahi hai ..

Na-sat near ..are tu ro mat pls ..ye ladki mat ban ab ..chal breakfast de nd clg chale ..

Anshu-didi ...to esse ro rahi hai jaise natik bhaiya aap chale gaye chod ke . 😆

Ak-maa ..bauji ..mai ise mar dungi ..apne motu ko bol do chup rahe bas jab se dekh rahi hu ..has raha hai mere upar ..tu kya haa ..yad hai ek pen gum gya to kaise roya tha ..cry nd anger look..

Vis-bas beta ..aap mat roiye jayada ..

Ak-bauji ..usko mai apne pass rakhti thi ..kilati thi ..

Natik gave isara to all ..they came nd doing gudgudi to akshi ..aaa ..chodo mujhe pls natik ...maa bauji ..lill laugh ..

Natik singing song ...

Has ke to dekh le tu ek bar ..kud hi aa jaygi phir bahar ..ga le nhi sargam ..(took rajshree hand nd dance with her )git ek naya yr ..aaya naya mosam aaya din naya ..(than all came with smile) chak de chak de ..chak de sare gam ..chak de chak Dr (went near wipe her tears with thumb)

Tere sang hai hum ...nd grup hug ...somehow she gave hug ..both did breakfast ...

Na-mom ..vry nice food ..gave kiss on rajshrees hand ..

Raj-thanku beta ..mai to bolti hu rat mai bhi tiffin le jaya kar ..

Na-koi bat nhi ma ..mai yaha aata hu na ..do yime thik hai ..gave isara ..that akshra is not hpy ..waise bhi aapki angry beti se ek time to bachne ka moka milta hai to kyo na bachu ..

Anshu-didi to jhagda karti hai bas ..

Akshi was silent still ...

Ak-bye ..mai clg jati hu ..chalo natik ..silently she went ..all r sad to saw her like this ..she sat on bike ..

Na-vry fast driving ..akshra dekh tere liye ..tujhe pasand hai na fast driving ..

Ak-hmm..

Dey reached in clg ..she was unhpy ..

He puting hand on shoulders ..

Na-pls esse chup mat reh ..mai nhi dekh sakta hu ..chal has de ..pls..

Ak-natik ..gave hug ..mera doggi ..hold him ..mai kaise rahugi uske bina ..tujhe pata hai na wo mujhe kitne pyar se mila tha ..sunsan aklea ...

Na-sshh ..chup ..sab hasege chilane wali aaj ro rahi ..aacha chal masti karege ..today class attent nhi karege ..

Ak-chal class mai ..nhi ..

Na-par ..chal garden mai ..oki ..

Ak-nhi ..

Na-chal santi se ..nd went in garden ..she didnt anything ..

He throw leaf ..on her face ..gave smile .sign..pls ..

Ak-nodded no ..

Than all frds came with golgapa ...

Var-aaya hai bhai aaya hai ..

Na-sweet si ladki ke liye golgapa aaya hai ..

Mo-jo hai uads kyoki sad news usne sunaya hai ..

Ras-par wo hasegi chupke hasegi ..

Na-kyoki hamari pyari hai wo akshi ..kha lo inhe warna hum bhi udas ho jayge ..ek hasi mil gai to took golgapa nd feed her ...pyar se jindagi ban jaygi ...

She ate ..

Na-in isara ..thanku guys ..mere kehne pe karne k liye ..

Ak-natik ..

Na-hmm..lo feed him..

Ak-I know sabko tumne hi bola hoga ..

Na-smile na pls ..

Ak-chalo class ...took him ..in class ..??

So guys enjoy this part nd gave comments. .I will wait ..nd pls press like button if u all enjoy this part. ..

Precap-natik gave her doggi ..nd shooping of naksh..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Aww... so cute our naksh is. Har concept me vo lovely lovely lgte hai .
ak ki smile k liye nk kuch bhi krta hai.
Uska ek tear bhi nhi dekh skta. Love them both .their understanding is wow