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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh
NYC ff dear plz cont soon

Tqq sameera ..I will update. .

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Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow friendship day ka unexpected gift mila but next day
Jldi update kro Ruchi intro read krke ff interesting lg rha hai
Sorry for mistake ruchi dear

Edited by Nairaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Wow friendship day ka unexpected gift mila but next day
Jldi update kro pragati intro read krke ff interesting lg rha hai

Aww how sweet ..tqq nidhi but ye mera ff hai dear ..ruchi ..ka ..I will o update soon. .

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Part-1

Story stars with natik drove d bike ..nd he wore jeans nd t-shirt beg ..like duggu ..nd clg going boy ..he was hpy ..but stop his bike ..nd gave horn ..

Na-late ho rahi hai ..mahrani ji kaha hai ..saw somthing ..oo noo ..gya mai .uff ..I driving vry fast his bike ..he was so tensed ..

Reached in clg ..named city clg ..naksh were popular in clg beause natik was best in studies nd akshi was best in other activity..both r best ..frds..

Na-oo god ..Scotty means ..ye rah nhi sakti hai mujhe kuch karna hoga ..par ye hogi kaha ..wahi jaha kal ..nd running in hull ..

Saw their was so crowd of students ..who ssaw fight ..someone shouted vry loudly in hull ..

Na-put his hand on his head ..uff ye ladki .. (ladki is non other then our cute babli girl akshi ..she was in so much in anger .nd shouted on someone)..

He went in middle of crowds ...

Na-akshra ...

She turned nd saw to natik ...wore curti side cutting nd jeans ..smart girl ..hair was like in serial ..

Ak-gave glare look ...ruko ek minute ..tum kya bol rahe the natik is a looser haa ..tu kon sa bada bajran bali hai ..ek word bhi bila to muh tod dungi mai ...

Boy-hai hi looser ..

Ak-abhi batati hu .ek to race mai har gaya ..upar se ..she went near for fight ...but natik went near ..nd hold her ...stomach ..

Na-kya kar rahi ho pls ruko ...

Ak-chodo mujhe ..I wil kill him ..tumse to fight hogi nhi mujhe karne do ..

Na-chalo pls ...he taking her ..hold her tammy nd her hand nd foot flowing on air like she will kill him..

Ak-natik bich mai mat aao pls ..mai ise batati hu ...

Na-uff kitni heavy ho gai ho ..kyo tamasha ar rahi ho pls stop it ..chalo ..teachers ne dekh liya to punishment milegi ..

Ak-like kid ..natik ..nd flowed her hand on air ..chalo ...

Boy-jao ..looser ..ye ladki bhi chip tum bhi ...

Now natik skkiped her ..what ..felt anger ...went near ..

More parts coming soon. ..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Na-kya problem hai haa ..kal se bakwas ..mine socha its oki ..mere liye bol raha hai ..but now akshra ke liye nhi ..

Akshi was hpy ...nd did her hand like disum disum..ye natik maro ..fight ..lado ..

Na-dekh hold his collier. .went near his ears ..man ja ..akshra ko bhej diya na wo muh tod dego tera ..nd sir se complain kar di to no exak ..career end ..sab end ..ab ..fight ya man jaoge ..

Bo-jane do haa ..nd went ..

Ak-phir wahi damaki na bas ek panch marte to Pata chalega. .but no hoga hi nhi ..

Na-Jab jarurat nahi hai to hath kyo uthana ..

Ak-bade aadars wadi ho ..ji ..chale ..canteen. .

Na-kyo class ..mai ..

Ak-man nhi hai yr ..pls natik..

He puted his hand on her shoulder ..like frds..

Na-jayada halla mat kar ..chal ..this is vry important lecture. .scooty mai kyo aai aaj..

Ak-wo patar patar kar raha tha ..fight karne ..

Na-tu bas fight karle haa ..

Ak-hehe..tujhe bhi gussa aaya na mere bare mai usne bola to..

Na-chal class mai chup chap..

Ak-nhi na pls ...

Na-chalo ..pull her hand nd both went in class ..

She sat but silent ..

Na-ab ye sadi face mat kar pls ..

Ak-bachpan se dekh rahi hu ..esse hi mujhe class attend karni padti hai ...

Na-tu na ..lill hit her head ..bakwas mat kar ..teacher jo bol rahe sun..

Ak-she went down on banch ..

Na-kya kar rahi hai ..

Ak-sshh..sone de na ..pls ..

Na-tu bhi na ...dekh dat padegi ..uth..

Ak-sadu ...pls na ..puppy face. .

Na-aacha oki ..but ..notes cover kar than ..oki ..

Ak-thanku ..:)

Than class finished ...

Both sat in canteen ..

Ak-le ..sari notes..

Na-kya ..tune bataya nhi mujhe ..puri ki na notes ..mai nhi karuga ..ja ..

Ak-fine ..mai bhi ek song likh ke nhi dungi tujhe ..aur gana bataugi bhi nhi ..tere liye kitni mehnat se song likhti hu..

Na-thabhi I completed ur notes ..na ..mere karan tu pass hoti hai ..mai hi janta hu tujhe padana kitna muskil hai ..

Ak-aacha ..tere liye kya nhi karti hu mai ..roj mere hand se bana hua breakfast ..aur phir lunch ..shooping ..

Na-matlab badla haa ..ja mai bat nhi karuga nd kuch khauga bhi nhi..rakh lunch..

Ak-fine mai bhi nhi karugi ..aauch?

Na-akshra ..kya hua???

So guys I think essi story bhi naksh k upar honi chahiye ..so I gave first part ..hope u will press like button nd gave comments. .I m waiting ..

Precap-akshi is sad nd natik want make her hpy ...in every way...😊

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

good start gappu ( ur new name like happu 🤣...
akshara fight for naitik...
and other hand naitik is so sweet...
both are perfect friend for eachother...who can't tolerate any bad thing about their friend...good...
ek notes banaye aur doosra song likhe...
i love the starting...
****/5

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Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Ok, let's start ...
Ruchi very unique concept for our very own naksh. first part was nice their friendship is like they are perfect for each other. their perfect friendship .ak is tomboy types and nk her saviour.
Overall it was good start dear.

Edited by Nairaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
good start gappu ( ur new name like happu 🤣...
akshara fight for naitik...
and other hand naitik is so sweet...
both are perfect friend for eachother...who can't tolerate any bad thing about their friend...good...
ek notes banaye aur doosra song likhe...
i love the starting...
****/5

Thanku for my new name ...omg..😆 u r honey for me urs new name ..

Thanku thanku thanku so much for liking this part nd gave comments ..I liked vry much ..yaieee ..4 stars ..

Aww ..aage mai esse hi cute se ..care fight ..likhugi ..

Honey ...😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Ok, let's start ...
Ruchi very unique concept for our very own naksh. first part was nice their friendship is like they are perfect for each other. their perfect friendship .ak is tomboy types and nk her saviour.
Overall it was good start dear.

Thanku thanku thanku so much nidhi ...u liked concept ..aww I loved it ..yup naksh r perfect ..natik anger wala hai sab bolte hai mere ff mai to isme sant hai..

U liking this part nd gave comments dear ...yup I will do update next part soon dear. .😛

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Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Han Naitik ka gussa misunderstand kiya jata hai , cvs bhi ese hi dikhate hai ... But according to situation uska reaction galt nhi hota uska nature hi thoda gusse wala hai . Ab naksh ko studies hi krni chahiye practically dekha jye to ... I agree with Naitik

I understand Naitik coz I'm also short tempered like him. 😛

Edited by Nairaksh - 10 years ago