Naksh FF # Do DiL # Part 16 on Page 118

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
lucknow is a big city...tum ne kabhi iska naam nahi suna kya ?

sunne mein aur sachaayi mein farak hain na baby...

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
no

U started dieting kya???

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

nope yaar...
aaj meri dono sis chali gayi...apne apne work par
ek delhi aur doosri camp
isliye dukh me nahi khaya :(

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
nope yaar...
aaj meri dono sis chali gayi...apne apne work par
ek delhi aur doosri camp
isliye dukh me nahi khaya :(

aww...

but u need taakat na so eat be sad...

though dey r far always with u in ur thought na...

keep smiling...😃

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: --pranu--

aww...
but u need taakat na so eat be sad...
though dey r far always with u in ur thought na...
keep smiling...😃

hmmm...

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nakshkidiwani

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Day by day ur story becomes more interesting nd now I want naksh love story bechara natik I think gya fail ..nd akshi to first aa jaygi

But last natik celebrate his bdy with akshi vry cutee waiting for next part pls update soon

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ruchigarg
Day by day ur story becomes more interesting nd now I want naksh love story bechara natik I think gya fail ..nd akshi to first aa jaygi
But last natik celebrate his bdy with akshi vry cutee waiting for next part pls update soon

thank u soo much ruchu for liking it yaar...
ya i will update next part tomorrow

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

PART...3
FLASHBACK...
AT NIGHT ( NAITIK'S BIRTHDAY SURPRISE )...
its 10:30 pm.
naitik is sleeping in his room...
mohit already told gayatri about nk's birthday plan...
all came in naitik's house...
" tin tong " the door bell rings...
when shaurya hits on mohit's head
mo-aaahhh ! kya kar raha hai
sh-pagal hai kya bell bajyega toh naitik ko pata chal jayega...
all laugh at mohit's stupidity...
but thier good luck...gayatri open the door...and became happy to see them...she welcome them...
shaurya...mohit...alok...naman all came forward to take blessings...antra too hug gayatri...
sh-maa aap kaisi hain ?
gy-acchi hu beta...aur tum sab kaise ho ?
all-hum bhi acche hai
gy-shhh ... dheere acccha hua munna jaga nahi warna tum sab ka surprise kharab ho jayega...
after that gayatri saw akshara...who was just standing quitely watching them...
gy(surprised)-beta tum waha kyu khadi ho...yaha aao...
she politely call akshara near her...and akshara happily came there...she too take blessings from her
ak-namaste aunty

gy-hamesha khush raho...naam kya hai beta tumhara ?
ak-akshara...
gy-bahut pyaara hai...bilkul tumari tarah...
an-maa ye khud bhi bahut sweet hai...aur isse badi baat ye shaurya ki behen bhi hai
gy-accha...
akshara smile due to her so much tareef...
mo-maa ab aap akshara ki taareef baad me kar lena...pehle hum apni preprations start kar le
gy-haa...par ye sab karoge kaha ?
mo-terris par
alok-toh chale waha...
naman-yaa...
all came on terris for bday prepration...nd start their decorations...
naman n alok on dj.
shaurya n mohit with lights
antra with snacks
n akshara helping all of them...
gayatri blowing candels there...
when akshara sees gayatri...she came to help her...
ak-aunty !
gy-haa beta
ak-laaiye ye mai kar du...
gy-nahi tum hamare yaha pehli baar aayi ho...isliye tum araam karo
ak-ji nahi mere hote hue aap kaam kare...ye bilkul nahi hoga...pls aunty...
gy-theek hai par usse pehle tumhe bhi meri ek baat maan ni hogi
ak-ji
gy-aaj se tum bhi mujhe sab baccho ki tarah maa bulaogi...
ak became emotional...she quickly hugs gayatri..." theek hai maaa "
gy-hmmm...ab ye lo aur jaldi jaldi kaam karo...12 bajne wali hai...
with this gyatri went n handover her work to akshara...
akshara blowing candls when due to some air her dupatta catch fire with cadle...
whcih antra saw...
an-akshra ! tera dupatta
akshara quickly saw her dupatta...she suddenly removes it...
all became panic n came near her
sh-tum theek ho naa
ak-haa dadu...
an-dekh kar karna tha naa...ye dekh dupatte ke saath saath ye tera kurta bhi jal gaya
ak(shocked)-ohhh ! god ye mera favourite tha...
she start crying when gayatri came...she too saw ak's burn dupatta n kurta...
gy-tum theek ho naa
ak-haa maa...i am ok
gy-aisa kar tu mere saath aa
alok-maa par sirf 15 minute baaki hai...aur aap dono
gy-mai aati hu
naman-par naitik ko kaun jagayega ?
gy-wo maine har jagah alarm clock laga diye hai...wo band karte karte aa jayega...
gayatri take akshara with her...
she take ak in her room...and gave her one saree
gy-ye lo ise pehen lo
ak(hesitate)-par maa
gy-ye purani nahi hai akshara...
ak-wo baat nahi hai...par mai kaise
gy-kyu ? tum munna ki dost ho naa
ak(smile)-theek hai maa mai ise pehen leti hu
gy-good...ab ise pehenkar jaldi se aa jao...hmmm
ak-hmmm...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

here in NK'S ROOM...
first alarm rings...naitik wake up n switch off the alarm...and again slept...
When again alarm rings...
nk(irritatingly)-kya yaar ! abhi toh band kiya...but this time he can only listen that tone...but there was no alarm clock...
naitik got up from bed and came outside his room...
nk-awaaaz kaha se...
he start searching the alarm calling gayatri's name...
nk-maa...aap ne ye awaaz suni...
but got no reply...
nk-shayad ye terris se...
he quickly ran towards terris...but there was no light...only candles were given a beautiful lights...
all his friends were there in a pin drop silence...naitik came more forward...when suddenly lights on..." SURPRISE "
and he became really shocked to see them all...
whole gand start sing a birthday song " HAPPY BIRTHDAY TOO U "
naitik gave a big smile to them...
nk-thanks
he came and hug gayatri...
gy-janam din bahu mubaarak ho munna
nk-thank u maa...
he take blessings form her...
and with this all came n hug him...wishing him...
gy-ab tum sab party karo...mai
mo-nahi maa...aap bhi yahi rukiye...kam se kam cake cutting tak
gy-theek hai...
she sat on a chair...while naitik start looking here n there...
which mohit saw...slowly slowly he came near naitik...and whisper...
mo-wo nahi aayi hai...
naitik shockingly look at him...
nk-kaun wo...
mo-jise tu idhar udhar khoj raha hai...
here gayatri watching them...
nk-mai kisi ko nahi khoj raha...aur mujhe kya fark padta hai...usse...
mo-bday par toh dost se jhoot mat bol...
nk-mai abhi aaya...tu apni bakwaas band kar tab tak...
antra calls naitik for cake cutting...
all came together...
naitik was about to cut the cake when he saw akshara is coming in front of him...he didn't believe on his eyes...and lost in akshara...she was wearing a blue colour simple saree...
antra alok naman all trying to make him came from his dream..." naitik cake cut karo " but when mohit gave him a hit then he came in reality...
nk-" haaa "
mo-cake...
naitik became more happy to see akshara there...
he quickly cut the cake...but all became surprised...
nk-kya hua ?
mo-yaar bday ki itni khushi ki caldle bujhana bhool gaya 🤣
nk(embarrased)-ohhh haa...
then he blew off the candles...
after that cake eating session start...par usse bhi zyada cake lagana session start...
sabhi friends ne naitik ko cake khilaya...aur usne bhi...after that he came near akshara with a big piece of cake...and feed it to her...
ak-happy birthday...
nk(smile)-thanks ! yaha aane ke liye...
akshara too smile on this...
she take a piece of cake and feed it to him...
nk-aur mera gift...?
ak-gift...tooh mai...i am sorry...mujhe aapki pasand ke baare me...
nk-its ok...par mujhe apna gift lene ki aadat hai...jo ki mai lekar rahoonga...
ak-theek hai aap bataiye aapko kya chahiye ?
nk-aapka ek din...
akshara look at him surprisingly...
nk-kya aap poora ek din mere saath bitayengi...miss akshara...
akshara thinks a little bit...after that
ak-done... !
nk-ohhh ! wow ! thanks...
ak-toh kab chale ?
nk-ammm...kal...
ak-theek hai...kal subah mai ready rahoongi...
when their talk interrupted by antra...
an-naitik chalo naa mere saath dance karo
she try to drag him with her...
nk-ek minute tum chalo mai aata hu...
an-ok...
and she went...
nk-waise tum iss saari me aur bhi khoobsurat lag rahi ho...(and he too went from there )
for the first time akshara start blushing with anyone's word...
now camera turns to the other side...where gayatri saw naksh together...
she quikly came near mohit who was eating cake
gy(with a serious face)-mohit
mo-ji maa
gy-mujhe tujhse kuch poochna hai...
mohit too became serious " ji maa kya hua ? "

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

gy-ye kab se chal raha hai ?
mo(confused)-maa jab se mai paida hua tab se...i mean tab se mujhe cake khana pasand hai...
gy-buddu mai iss cake ki baat nahi kar rahi...balki mai ye pooch rahi hu ki munna akshara ko kab se pasand kar raha hai...
mohit's eye poping out with gayatri's question...
mo-maa...wo...wo...jaisa aap soch rahi hai waisa...
gy-mujhe pata hai ki mai bilkul theek soch rahi hu...aur munna ki koi baat mujhse nahi chipti...chal bata...
mo-maa...aap ko nahi pata...aapka beta akshara ke liye diwaana ho gaya hai...wo use bahut pasand karta hai...
gy-sach...
mo-haa...par bechaara darr raha hai...
gy-aur akshara...?
mo(dramatically)-wo toh pata nahi...par aap ye bataiye kya aapko akshara pasand hai...?
gy-haa kyu nahi...wo hai hi itni pyaari...aur isse badi baat kya hogi ki munna ko bhi wo pasand hai...
mo-par kya faida...aapka mumma naa apne dil ki baat bhi nahi kar pata...
gy-toh tu kis kaam aayega...jaa uske paas aur madad kar uski...
mo(shocked)-aree waah ! maa ho toh aisi...he gave her a kiss..." mai abhi aaya "
gayatri(smile)-pagal !
here naitik and gang dancing together...and akshara sitting alone...
when mohit came near her...
mo-hi !
akshara smile...
mo-tum bhi chalo na hamare saath dance karne...
ak-nahi mai theek hu...tum jao...
mo(st)-kya yaar iss ladki ko toh koi fark hi nahi padta...:(
mo-ok...as ur wish...
he went and came on the dance floor...hold naitik's hand and dragged him in a corner...
nk-kya kar raha hai ?
mo-tu yaha dance kar raha hai...ja akshara ko bhi bula...
nk-par kaise wo mana kar degi...i know...
mo-ek baar bhi tune poocha...
nk-nahi
mo-toh phir...
nk-tune poocha tha naa...kya jawab mila ?
mo-tune dekha tha kya ?
nk-hmmm...
mo-yaar mana kar diya...par mere kehne aur tere kehne me fark hai...maine ek dost ki tarah poocha aur tu ek lover ki tarah pooch...
nk-tu...
but suddenly mohit push him towards akshara..." jaaa "
naitik came near akshara...akshara to get up frm her chair...
nk-wo mohit keh raha tha...i mean mai keh raha tha ki chal hamare saath dance karo...
ak-sorry naitik...par mujhe dance nahi aata...
nk-wo toh mujhe bhi nahi aata...par phir bhi thoda kar leta hu...tum aao...
ak-ammm...nahi...
nk(sadly)-hmmm...
he was about to go when akshara hold his hand...
and came beside him...naitik gave a big smile on this...
ak-agar aap mere saath karenge toh mai kar sakti hu...
both came together on the dance floor...
and mohit announces " dosto aaj hamare beecch do cute non dancers apne dance ka jalwa dikhaane ja rahe hain
ak-par mai sirf slow dance kar paaungi
mo-its ok akshara bhabhi...i mean bha bha...i mean theek hai akshara ji...aap dono ek couple dance kar lijiye
naitik gave a glare to him...
all start cheer for them..." yaaayyy "...and all sat to their chairs...
naitik came in front of akshara...and forward his hand...akshara take deep breath n put her hand on his hand...and closed her eyes due to tension...
FLASHBACK END...
AFTER THINKING ABOUT THAT DAY NAITIK OPEN HIS EYES
( smile ) and came near a wall...where so many pictures of naksh were frame...
he hold one picture in his hand...
nk(smile)-jis tarah aap uss saari me pehli baar mujhe dikhi thi ...aur tab se mai aapka diwaana hu akshara...usi tarah aaj bhi mai waise hi aapko dekhna chata hu...isliye toh maa ne aapke liye dher saari saaare lekar rakhi hai...ki jab unki bahu ghar aayegi toh wo usi roop me aapka swaagat kare jaise unhone pehli baar kiya tha...
AGAIN FLASHBACK START...
PRECAP...NAKSH KI WHOLE DAY OUTING
SO FRIENDS HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...

Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago

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