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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
aww so lovely romantic part.. morning scene was nice specially bandar bandariya scene.. then room scene was also nice and cute.. naitik ka akshi ko tease karna was nice.. precap is super cool.. waiting for it

Tqq so much misri dear for liking this part nd gave comments dear yup I will do update next part soon😛

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part-15

Na-akshu tumhari cheeks mai mark kaisa hai ..thoda sa ..

Ak-blushed. ..kuch nhi sab ..mere diwane ki den hai .bhut jayada lag raha hai kya ..

Na-nhi ..lill..but chalega ..

.chale ..sangit mai ..gave hand ..

Ak-caught his hand ..hmm..nd both went in party ..sath sath...where sangit was started. ..

Every one dancing with each other ..its seems that their is a computation between boys nd girls ...naksh also join this wer one song played ...nd natik took position nd went near to akshu..

Chal pyar karegi (took her hand in his hand)..(akshu hold his hand ..)haa ji haa ji .. mere sath chalegi (pull her hand ) naji naji (skkiped his hand)..

Than both r doing dance..

Chal pyar karegi ..haa ji haa ji ..mere sath chalegi naji naji ..

Went near to her ..are tu haa kar ya na kar teri marji soniyeee (took her in his arms ) hum tujhko utha kar le jayge doli mai bitha kar le jayge ... (skkiped her in floor)..

Hum ghar mai kahi chup jayge sang tere nhi hum jayge ..chal pyar karegi ..haa ji haa ji ..

Ja mai nhi karti shadi wadi (push him)mujhko pyari hai ye aajadi are mai to apne babul ke baho ki bulbul hu bas tujhse mujhe ye kehna hai (point her finger d side of his face)pinjare mai mujhe nhi rehna hai ...ho aankho se kajal le jayege jhulfo k badal le jayege (went behind her nd touches her eyes nd hair)..are hum aaye hai aa k yu wapas na jayege (took her in his arms)..hum apni sajaniya le jayge ..are hum apni dulhaniya le jayge ...

Nd dance finished ...with naksh happiness nd joy..

In night both covered blanket nd talking in phone ..

Na-akshu ..aaj bhut maja aaya na tum bhut sundar lag rahi thi ..

Ak-hmm..

Na-hamne sath mai dance kiya maja aaya na ..

Ak-hmm..

Na-kya hmm hmm..r u bakri ..

Ak-shh..mai mehandi laga rahi hu na ..To..parso

shadi hai ..

Na-oo..phir hum wapas chale jayge..nhi milege..

Ak-hum to mere yaha ruke the na ..mom dad ko tum bhut pasand bhi ho..

Na-hmm..mai wapas ja ke bat karuga ..kya tum kal ka whole day mere sath spent karogi..

Ak-kya ...par yha..

Na-mai is pal ko kash banana chahta hu ..sath mai ..

Ak-amm oki ..par ..

Na-mai tumhe lene aauga ..morning mai ..oki ..

Ak-hmm..

Na-I love u ..

Ak-I loveee u too...

Than both slept ...

IN MORNING ...

Akshu wore red colour dress full slip one piece ..with deep nack ..which was upto her kness nd she wore bute..long ..nd ..natik wore t shirt nd jeans ..both looking great..

Akshu is waiting for natik ..

Ak-kaha ho tum..

Than she saw to him ..he was in bike ..

Ak-r u serious natik ..mai isme jaugi ..cool..

Na-mem apke liye bhut kuch kiya hai ..bas dekhiye ..to ..saw to her nd lost in her beauty...her hair was open so some air touches to her ...she just felt this nd natik saw to her ..

Ak-kya ..

Na-kuch nhi ..u r looking so ..

Ak-so ..

Na-he sat on his foot nd came near to her ears ...hot ..in whisper voice. .

Ak-she blushing. .chale ab ..romance ho gya ho to ..

Na-ruko ruko ...sat on his kness..

Ak-ab kya ..

Na-he went his hand on back ..puted one red rose nd gave to her..she took..

Na-I love u ..

Ak-smile nd kiss to flower ..thanku ..nd I love u too..

Na-ruko nd took one more rose ..u r my life..

Ak-admire to him..same to u..took..

Na-u r d best ..again gave flower ..

Ak-haa ..bas karo ..sab dekh rahe ..took..

Na-dekhne do ..gave another flower..

Ak-haa ..bas nhi to puri dophar yahi bit jaygi ..

Na-bas ek aur ..nd gave some roses...I love u I love u ...in loud voice I love u too..

She Saw to her didnt take ..smile ..I love u too natik ..in loud voice. .nd gave huggg ..tight hug...

Kiss on his cheeks ...

Ak-thanku so much ...

Na-bas ...mujhe yahi dekhna tha ..aage bhut kuch hai ..chalo ..both sat on bike..nd akshu hold him vry tightly ...

Na-r u hpy na ..

Ak-hmm..bhut..

More parts coming soon😎

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Ak-hmm..ab hum kaha jayge ..

Na-sabse pehle god se pray karne ..oki ..

He stopped in mandir nd took things for puja..dey entered. .in mandir ..akshu dont know about it so natik went behind ..nd touches her hand both did ek sath puja ..

Ak-thanku mujhe to kuch nhi pata tha..

Na-most wlcm ..sab thik se sikha dunga ..wait nd watch ..

Ak-hm ..I m ready ..but pls mujhe change hone ke liye mat bolna ..mujhse nhi hoga ..hold his hand..

Na-I dont want that hum dono ek dusare ke change ho jaye ..hum sab sikhege par badlege nhi ..

Ak-I love u..

Na-I love u too..

Ak-sab esse kyo dekh rahe ..

Na-dress mem..sab suit pehen k aate hai yha aap one piece mai aai ho..

Ak-oo...natik to dekho mango...took his hand on her Hand..nd went near ..he saw to h only nd she eating like madly ..she extracted mango nd he saw to her ..

Ak-eeloo..

Na-nooded no..

Ak-oki..she ate nd clean her hand but wen she went to clean her lips natik took her hand nd both went in side corner nd pinned with wall..

Na-mera mango..

Ak-but u said no ...

Na-ab mujhe chahiye ..went near nd shaking her lips with his tongue. .she closed her eyes nd enjoy his love ..

Ak-blushing ..nd push him...bas..

Na-bas ..made sad face..

Ak-show her tongue ..iuu..bas ..bandar ..jab dekho chipak jate ho..

Na-to meri bandariya ho ..tumne hi to hak diya hai ..

Ak-tum na ..mera surprise. .

Both sat in bike nd natik drove d bike ..suddenly akshu saw trucks stood ..in side of road...wer in every truck wrote akshu I love u..

Ak-ye kya hai ..than both reached in middle on truks nd did lill slow his bike nd in truck ..two three man stood nd throw rose pattels..nd akshu opens her hand ...

Ak-waaw ...showering of rose pattle on both but akshu enjoy ...mai heaven mai hu ya jamin mai..

Na-tum meri princess ho ..I love u ...she stood nd cupped her hand on his nack ...I love u natikk ..thanku so much ..for this special gift ...

Both crossed dis area...

Ak-she is resting on his shoulder..mai to aaj bhut lucky feel kar rahi hu ...bilkul princess jaise ...I love u ..I love u ..I love u ..

Na-abhi aur bhi hai medam..

Ak-kya ...

He stopped d bike..nd both went in park..

Ak-ye kya hai..

Na-ye area hai lovres ke liye ...yha baith k kuch pal ko ked kar lete hai ..

Ak-bhut aacha hai ...waaw yaha to har wall mai kisi na kisi lovres ki pic hai..

Na-hmm..yha par jo bhi pyar ko rupe deta wall mai penting banwata h par order par..

Ak-mujhe bhi banwani hai pls..

Than she saw one wall ..nd surprised to saw her nd natik pic ...waaw I cant believe this ..ye ..run nd touches d pic ..bhut sundar hai ..

Na-bas esse hi shine dekhna tha ..gave hug ..thanku..

Ab isme kuch pyara sa likho ..she made heart nd wrote tum se jindagi suru hui .meri saso mai bas gyeho tum .tumhe bas essehi apni jan bana ke dil mai rakhege hum..

Both gave hug to each nd ate some food also..

Both was in bike..

Ak-ab ..aur kuch bacha hai kya ..

Na-chalo na ..dekh lo kud hi..

Both went in gurudwara...thiswas vry big ..nd outside was febluss..

She took step firstly nd wore duppata ..actually both wore ...in gurudwara its must..

Na-jab mai udas hota hu ..yaha aage sari udasi mit jati hai meri ..mai chahta hu ki tum meri sari chizo ko jano ..

Ak-ab ..mai yaha nahi aai ..

Na-both took blassings ...put their heads on floor nd sat ..

In outside :-

Na-ruko ..wo dekho..

Ak-kya ...

There was so many people ..persent. .

Ak-natik ye ...

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Than saw one girl stood to take one board..wer somthing wrote ..

Ak-mere dil ka hissa ..she stood in side nd than another girl came ..to ban chuki ho tum...another girl came...par mere jindagi ka hissa ...one more ..banogi ..more..hamari life mai tumhe..more..puri happiness milegi..more ..jab tum mujhse shadi karogi ...more ..will u marry me. .

All girls stood in line...

Mere dil ka hissa to ban chuki ho tum par mere jindgi ka hissa banogi hamari life mai tumhe puri happiness miegi jab tum mujhse shadi karogi ..will u marry me ..natik she felt like cry ...than every girl came nd took her hand ..she was confused so much ..than girls wore chunari to her ..nd natik sat in his knees ..nd gave bangle ..

Ak-mujhse shadi karogi ..mai tumhe kud se bhi jayada pyar karuga ..is chudi ko lekar ye bata do ...all girls clapping nd everyone saw nd clapping ..what a proposal. .

Akshi felt shy to wore duppata ..red colour ..

Ak-haa ..mai bhi ab tumhare pyar ki duniya mai aana! chahti hu natik ..gave her hand ..he wore bangle..she was hpy ..nd both gave hug ..in excitement she gave kisses on her both cheeks didnt see here nd there ..

EveryOne laugh ..she hide her face on his chest...

Now its night ..both sat on bike ..she was so hpy .which natik saw nd thought .what he did for her which was successful. ..

He stop d bike ..

Ak-ye ...

Nowthis place was so beautiful ..decorated with lamps white ..nd lighting like ss garden area..she unwore duppata. .nd both gripping each hands ..

Ak-waaw ...natik ..she talking step but put her face on his chest. ..tqq mere itna sab kuch karne keliye .sach mai ye khabhi socha nhi tha .

Na-tumhare liye sab kuch ..kuch time spend karege yaha ..baitho..

Both sat on chair..he resting on her shoulder ..

Ak-are mera gift ..mai bhi kuch lai hu..

She turn back ..open d zip..of my dress..

Natik shocked to listen ...r u mad ..

Ak-are this is my gift na ..ladke tadpate hai ladkiyon se gift lene k liye aur tum..

Na-bas ye galt hai ..tum ..thoda wait nhi kar sakti..

Ak-kya tum pagal ho kya ..open d zip ..

Na-.mujhe nhi unware karni tumhari dress not now..

Ak-turn..kya ..mai to back pekect se nikalne ko boli ..tum mujhe galt samaj rahe ho..mana I like western culture. .but itna bhi nhi..muss ne rakha bola ..din bhar yha rakh k niggt mai dena ..

Na-oo ..sry ..

Ak-sab boys ki thought ek jaisi..

Na-aacha aur tum ..esse bolti ho ..

He opened zip nd saw pocket ..nd went out gift..

Oki..rapping gift ..he opened ..nd saw pandal..wer naksh pic ..

Na-vry beautiful ..akshu wore in his nack..

Now natik gave gift ..she unpacked d gift ..saw nothing was in dis gift..

Ak-isme to kuch nhi hai..masti ..heat on his chest..

Na-uupass ..thodi ..

Ak-jao mushe koi bat nhi karni ..stood nd .turned her face ..their was one hull wer dey sat ..but der was birds next..

Nd he searching somthing on it saw beautiful ring was there ..

Ak-waaw ..ring..vry pretty. .

Natik took from her nd wore into her finger..

She gave again hug ..nd now its ran coming. .

Na-barish kaise jayege hum..

She went in rain...nd dancing. .

Ak-aao na ..

Na-I dont like ..tum yaha aa jao.

She jumped like kid ..meri pasand ka bhi kuch kar lo ab .

She took his hand nd both went in rain ..complete wet..he admire to her ..her dress was completely wet ndshe shivering ..she unwore bute..

Ak-took his hand nd both started dance ..like ..now last scene we get ..round wala step ..but natik pull her more close ..nd griped her back ..she putting her foot on his foot nd both started dance ..to saw eachs eyes..nd both was so close ..even her nose touches to his nose ..like swimming pool scene..he running his hand on back.she cupped her hand on his nack..

Both lost in each..nd now he went near to her face nd kisses near about her lips ..not in lips ..water falls on both face ..due to unbalance both falls on floor ..she camd over..he was under..

Ak-aauch..na -aauch..

But now her dress like lill transparent. .which showed lill her figer ...but both lost in each nd he caressing her legs with his legs ...nd running his hand ..she gave kiss on his cheeks ..her face water went on her lips ..now she gave kiss to his second cheeks ..he saw on her eyes ...

Ak-thanku mujhe meri life ka sabse hpy day dene k liye ..is din ko khabhi nhi bhul sakti hu mai ..gave soft kiss on his lips nd put her Face on his shoulder. .thanku meri life mai aane k liye..

?? So guys I try to give full romance ..hope u all r liking this part too nd press like button nd gave comments I m waiting for ur sweet comments. .

Precap-wedding nd naksh returned back in home..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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Nairaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ab kar bhi do update
Can't wait more

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#426

love u shutty..

aaj kaha hain???

ek msg bhi nahi??????

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: --pranu--
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Aww how sweet ..u always support me for my ff ..I really proud of u ..😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Ab kar bhi do update
Can't wait more

Congress nidhi ..I will update tomorrow dear ...pakka ...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: --pranu--
love u shutty..
aaj kaha hain???
ek msg bhi nahi??????

I love u too princess😳actually today mujhe bhut udasi lag rahi hai ..yr ..mai kyo yaha aai ...nhi aati to hi aacha hota na ...:(

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

I love u too princess😳actually today mujhe bhut udasi lag rahi hai ..yr ..mai kyo yaha aai ...nhi aati to hi aacha hota na ...:(

aise bakwaas ko teri dimaag se nikaal do...

koi hain ya nahi par i am der and always will be der for u...

u r my puchi na...

😆nd i know u cant live withput me 😊

aise math socho...

love u darling..