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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: --pranu--

terinetbas mere liye kaam nahi karegi i know
waise bhi mein kisika rely ka wait ek ghante se kahi kar rahi hoon..
kripa karke ans dijiye.. 😡

Princess I gave ans every werto u na ..😳

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Part-9

Ak-pls kuch bolo ..I love u ..pata nahi ye kaise aur kab ..par .

Na-stood like statue .

She broke d hug ..

Ak-kuch to bolo..

Na-hmm..

Ak-pls.

Na-mujhe nhi pata kuch..

Ak-Oki..mai kuch nhi bolugi jab tum nhi chahte ho to .

Na-)-

Ak-haa ...kuch bolo par chup mat raho..

Na-mai chlta hu ..pls..

Ak-mai jati hu tum raho..bye ..

She leave ..

EVERY ONE enjoyed but naksh were silent. .

Na-saw to akshi..

Akshi stood on side ..she didnt say anything. .

Na-kya ye sach mai ..dil se mujhe chahti hai..aur ye kisse puchu mai ..mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai mai kya karu ..

Than everyone returned back...

In night ..

Natik trun ..his face on both side ..didnt sleep..he thought only about akshi..her word I love u ..what he will gave replly to her now..

In morning ...

Akshi ask to muskan now whats next ..

Ak-aaj kya hai..

Mu-kuch nahi hai ..abhi do din tak kuch nhi ..rest bas ..

Ak-oo ..phir ..kya karege..

Mu-aaram ...

Ak-tujhe jiju se nhi milna ..hai kya ..

Mu-haa rat mai get to gather hai na .wo kuch games bhi hai ..

Ak-matlab hum rat mai enjoy karege phir se ..

Mu-hmm bilkul..

HERE NATIK WAS SO CONFUSED ...

Na-mai kya karu ...mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha hai..than alok came..

Al-kya hua..tu itna paresan kyo hai..

Na-ek bat bata na tujhe kaise pata chala tha ki tu bhabhi se pyar karta hai..

Al-ohho ..tu kyo puch raha hai..

Na-bata na ..

Al-din bhar usi k bare mai sochna ..pehle jhagda hota hai phir pyar ho jata hai mere dost ..eyes close karo wo dikhe matlab pyar ho gya hai..

Na-oo ..

Than alok maa came nd said about joda..

Al maa-beta natik ye tum waha de k aa jaoge ..pls..

Natik becoming so hpy to listen this ..ji bilkul ..

He took nd sat on car ..

Na-ab mai ankhe band karta hu ..agar akshu mujhe dikhi matlab sach mai mujhe pyar ho gaya hai..

He close his eyes nd didnt think anything now...he saw first day akshu ki naughy things smile came on his face ..than both fight ..but he felt now her touch her hug which she gave to him..now he also took his hand nd slowlly slowly ..put on her back ..like (on serial mai naksh ki sr wali hug)...nd hold her ..but suddenly someone knock d mirror. .he open his eyes..

Al-natik.

He opened mirror. .

Na-kya..

Al-ye dress mus ko de dena pls ..aaj rat ko yhi pehnegi bolna ..

Na-hmm..

He leave..

Natik gave smile ..

Na-kya sach mai ..mai to usse bhut pyar karta hu ..mujhe visvas nhi ho raha hai ...he was so hpy ..

Mai use ye bat batauga abhi hi batauga ...

He drove d car nd reached in mus home ...

He sat on sofa saw to akshi actually his eyes finds to her..

He gave lehnga to muskan nd gift also..

Mu-tqq bhahiya ...

Na-hmm..wo ..koi dikh nhi raha hai..

Mu-smile ..matlb..kon..she understood ..about akshu..

Na-nahi mai chalta hu bas ..esse hi..

Mu-bhaiya waise ..sayad jise aap koj rahe wo garden mai akli udas baithi hai..

Na-nahi bas esse hi ..mai chalta hu ..he went infront of muskan ..but slowly he saw in garden. .

Wer she sat alone ...near swimming pool. .

Natik saw no one is here ..so he went ..

Na-akshuu ..

She turn..

More parts coming soon. .

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Ak-haa..

Na-mai ..

Ak-gave smile .tum ..yaha kaise..

Na-tumhare qu ka ans dene k liye ..

Ak-matlab..

Na-I love u too..

Ak-shocked ..kya ..tum ..mujhse ..

Na-haa pata nhi kaise par sayad tumhari tarah mai bhi dil mai tumhe like karne laga hu..

Ak-waaw ..jumping ..aakhir tumne mujhe ..

She gave hug to him..natik hold her vry tightly. .

Na-maine khabhi socha bhi nhi tha ...ki mai tumse ..

She broke hug ..maine bhi ..he want some close to her ..but she cut..

Ak-yahi baithe kya..

Na-oki ..

Both sat near of pool..

Ak-meri wish puri ho gai ..

Na-meri bhi ..mujhe bhut ahjib lag raha hai ..

Ak-mujhe bhi ..

Na-matlab..

Ak-maine socha tha jisse mai pyar karugi wo mujhe sab k samne knees par bait kar pyara sa bucket dega..

Na-smile ..sach..

Ak-hmm ..par tum mil gaye I m hpy ...

Na-haa ..mujhe ye sab nhi hoga ..

Ak-aacha late ho rahi hai..tumhe jana hai na ..

Na-thabhi to rat ko milege ..

Ak-mai wait karugi ..than eyecontract. .

Na-mai chalta hu..bye ..

Akshu said bye to him..he went ..

All way he thought about only akshu ..

Na-saw buckets ..nd took. ..thought ..ab dekho night mai tumhe duniya ka sabse pyara surprise. .dunga aaj..

Here akshu got ready wore beautiful ..gown..sover..lite pink ..open hair ..looking gorgeous. .

Mu-waaw aaj to tu bhut pyari lag rahi hai..

Ak-haa ..thanku .aaj mai bhut kush hu...bhut hi jayada ..finally wo mil jayga ..

Mu-kya ..

Ak-kushi ..

Mu-hmm..tu na kya bol rahi hai mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha hai..

Ak-man..I know tum mujhe jarur propose karoge ..

Mu-chale..

Ak-teri shadi maina mujhe bhut maja aaya ..

Gave hug..

Mu-waaw ..tu to kuch jayada hi kush hai ..

Ak-haa ..bhut bhut bhut..

Here natik reached wore jeans ..shirt ..looking nice ..nd jacket..

Natik put bucket oncar nd enter in garden..with was decorated beautiful lights ..soft music..nd fire ..vry nice atmosphere ..dis is for girls boys ..oldies nhi..

Nd couple also..

Natik nd alik gang all r here nd sat ...than mus came with akshu ...every one saw themsaid waaw..

Natik saw to akshu ..nd admiring her beauty. ..she didnt see..

Mus sat ..akshu also .natik came nd said to mus ..

Na-bhabhi aap to bhut pyari lag rahi hai..

But saw to akshu ..she gave smile den said..

Ak-mai aati hu..

Went in coroner. .natik follow to her..

Natik hold her hand ..

Na-tum bhut pyari lag rahi ho ..

She turn ..

Ak-thanku ..nd skipped his hand ..koi dekh lega .kya sochega..

Na-dekh lene do ..waise bhi thodi der bad..

Ak-kya ..

Na-kuch nahi ..

Ak-aacha mai chalti hu ..but he hold her ..

Na-mai kaisa lag raha ye to bata do..

She push him..bander ..saw tongue ..nd run from der..

Na-ye bhi na ..laugh.abhi thodi der ..tum bhut hpy nd surprise ho jaogi akshu..

More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Now Games started..girls boys two teams ..One boy stood nd said ..

Bo-so is thodi si lite..thodi si games wali..pyar bhari sam mai sabka wlcm..mai karta hu..

To ab hum ek game khelege jo hai to sab k liye par ye hoga life bhar ka sath ..

Every one clapping so much..

Bo-to game ye hai ki ye do bowl hai..ek girl k liye hai aur ek boy k liye ..ab twist ye hai ki ..isme sab me alg alg words likhe hai ...but dono mai sirf ek hi chit mai wo do disite hai jo kisi ek esse girl ya boy k pass aayga jo made for each other hai ..

Dey gave chit to boy nd girl..naksh ko bhi ...everyone put..

Bo-so sabko chit mil gai ..ab ho sakta hai wo do word kisi k me ho ya nhi bhi ho..

Every one excited to listen to word ...wo do digits. .

Boy-so wo digit hai 3 nd 6..

Everyone was silent ..

Bo-matlab ..no one made for each other .kisi k mai ye nhi hai ..

Akshu stood nd said mere mai hai ..boy ..natik stood ..mere mai bhi ..

Boy-waaw ..ab ye bata de . Ye bhut bada joke tha ..essa kuch nhi hai ..

Every one laugh ...

Akshu sat again down..

Bo-but aap dono ko prize jarur milega ..made for each to hamne esse hi bola ..but u both won prize..

Than naksh came with each nd took beautiful couple so pice..

Na-in low voice..jo bhi hai majak mai hi tum meri hi ho na akshu..

Ak-sshh..hmm..ye tum rakho..

Na-nhi tum lo..

Ak-thanku ..

She took nd went ..now everyone Enjoyed d party..

Than natik said in Mike ..

Na-hloo every one .mujhe kuch bolna hai..

Akshu gave smile..he said..

Na-ab jisse mai bhut pyar karta hu..every one clapping nd hunting so much...

Na-he took bucket nd slowly took step.near akshi..

Muskannd alok was shocked nd surprised. .

Than he went near to her..

Sat on his knees ..

Gave bucket ..I love uso much akshu. .

Akshu gave smile but suddenly she laugh ???,

So guys enjoy this part nd give comment ..pls press like button if u like this part ..comments ka wait kar rahu guys pls..kuch to bolo...

Precap-mai nhi bataugi..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

New part is updated on page 37

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

pata nahi if its a prank na sab jaayas hain par dil ke saath kilwaahat is go galath...

akshi ki masti is fine par itna 😔

but thispart is so good naitik ka realisation and party and all...

naksh jheet gayi woww...

so cute part hope u dont make me sadin next part...

waiting for it...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: --pranu--
pata nahi if its a prank na sab jaayas hain par dil ke saath kilwaahat is go galath...
akshi ki masti is fine par itna 😔
but thispart is so good naitik ka realisation and party and all...
naksh jheet gayi woww...
so cute part hope u dont make me sadin next part...
waiting for it...

Thanku thanku thanku so much princess for giving me such a lovely comments dear. ..yes I know tum kya kya soch rahi but dont worry ..sab kuch thik hoga .actually some time fun bhi aacha k liye hota h na ..but mere ff mai dono k sath sachi hoga ..dont worry nd enjoy this ff princess😊yup I will do update soon dear. .

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

Thanku thanku thanku so much princess for giving me such a lovely comments dear. ..yes I know tum kya kya soch rahi but dont worry ..sab kuch thik hoga .actually some time fun bhi aacha k liye hota h na ..but mere ff mai dono k sath sachi hoga ..dont worry nd enjoy this ff princess😊yup I will do update soon dear. .

its a challenging part foru next...

igive comments though u likeornot which i feel bas 😃