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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-4
In night natik try to sleep but his back pain which dont sleep to him..
Na-mujhe bhut pain ho raha hai kya karu ye mera ghar bhi jaha mai hamesha medicine rakhta hu kya karu mai nd he sit on bad
Here akshu packed her clothes nd all things goes in wedding her phone ringing
Ak-hloo bol muskan mai aa rahi hu parso maa bau ji ko bol diya hai mai to aaugi hi
Mu-aacha maine yahi puchne k liye k call kiya tha 15 days our all frds will come ham bhut masti karege
Ak-waaw thats amazing mujhe mat bolna kuch jiju ko bhut tang karugi aaj to maine phir masti stop
Mu-what kon par this is bechara jo bhi hoga ya hogi band baja di hogi par yr kisi ko jayada hurt mat karna
Ak-oki oki na chal mil k bat karte hai sab ko pata chalega akshu hai waha
Mu-but bhut nahi alok ki family bhut traditional hai
Ak-oki bye cut d phone sry yr but mai essa nahi kar sakti bye are yr pani Nd saw water is not her room ye dhaniya bhi na kal batati hu
Nd went in kitchen but wo ..so raha hoga esse hi jati hu
But natik also stand on upstairs nd his back pain dont sleep him
Akshi in kitchen drink water nd about to go sudden she saw someone parchai
Ak-kon hai upar she stood in her hull nd swlly went upstairs but hidden position nd saw natik
Na-he walking here nd there ye pain mujhe lagta hai ab doctor ko dikhana padega kisi jagah undar chot lag gai hai
Akshu stood behind pillar nd saw little felt bad
Ak-akshu lagta hai tune masti mai isse kuch jayada hi pain de diya mai hu to ek girl hi na jo bhi ho mujhse shadi na kare bas but bura to nahi kiya I think I give u bam nd painkiller but how ...amm thought yes dhaniya
Nd went in dhaniya room she is sleeping than akshu said
Ak-dhaniya uth na she is still in sleeping
Dha-kon hai sone do na bhut kam hai mujhe pls
Ak-mai akshu di pls uth na
Dha-di apka juice nd slim tea morning mai de dungi pls sone dijiye na
Ak-ye na esse nahi manegi ruk nd took water mug nd apply on dhaniya face she is shivering nd wokeup
Dha-Kon hai kon hai
Ak-tera boyfrd hu mai hu akshu yr pls sun ye medicine le aur ja natik ko de de
Dha-par kyo di
Ak-bas pucha apko dard hai aur mera nam mat lena oki ja
Dha-aap bhi na kuch samaj nahi aata nd went saw natik
Nd ask here akshu ask from piller
Dh-ji apko bhut pain ho raha hai
Na-haa par tumhe kaise pata
Dha-wo aaakk
Ak-mar khayegi ye
Dha-saw akshu she gave anger look dhaniya feared😆
Dha-wo aaj mai na yaha se abhi gujar rahi thi to dekha ye lijiye painkiller nd bam mai chalti hu
Nd leave natik took nd said thanku
Na-chalo kisi ko to akl aai thanku god ab subah puja ho jaygi nahi to pain mai kya puja nd went in room
Ak-dhaniya came nd said thik bola na di
Ak-haha bolne ja hi rahi thi bas aakk mere sath reh ke kuch to sikh na chal ja socha
Dha-mujhe gila kar diya di pura
Ak-so ja bye leave
Dha-ye jamaisa ji kaise akshu di ko samalege 😆behare nd leave
More part coming soon

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Natik took medicine nd slept here akshi is also slept
In morning akshi is deep sleep sudden she heard some voice
Om jae jagdi sahare sawami jai jagdish hare
Akshi took pillo on her ears
Than loudly bhakat jano ke sankat pal mai dur kare om
Again she throw one pillo nd one is on her ear eee
Sawami pal mai dur kare again she throw all things nd shouted kon haiii open her eyes
Ak-listen music in sleeping position ye kon hai jo pagal ho gya itni subah in irritating voice
Nd throw pillo which she covered her ear
Ak-galti ho gai ye wahi aadarswadi hai kal medicine nahi di hoti to thik rehta na mujhse badla leta waah isne meri nind uda di hai puri eee so much in anger
Here natik doing puja rajshree nd vish also there but natik dont saw rajshree said to dhaniya that she call akshu in puja dhaniya feared but went in room
In room akshu sit in chair dhaiya saw nd becomes hpy
Dha-di wo apko puja mai bulaya hai badi maa ne
Ak-in anger mujhe kahi nahi jana ek to mai soi nahi aur ab puja ye sab thik nahi hai in anger
Dha-par di pls than rajshree came nd said
Raj-mujhe pata tha tu nahi aaygi chal ab mere sath naha aur pujakar mujhe kuch nahi sunna
Ak-par mujhe nind aa rahi h mom pls sone do mai nahi jaugi
Raj-kal shadi mai jid karke ja rahi hai na dekh lena cencel hi hai wo to hamne is liye haa kar di kyoki natik bhi kuch din yaha nahi rahega
Ak-what wo kaha ja raha h
Raj-uske dost ki shadi h
Ak-aacha hai jaye khabhi na wapas aaye
Raj -chal ab kuch nahi sunugi nahi to kuch bhi nahi shadi bhi nahi samjhi
Akshu have no option she got ready but behen ji look in puja room natik did complete his uja nd turn
Na-took asirwad are maine sab ko jaga diya sry wo mujhe morning mai puja karne ki aadat h to
Vis-nahi beta nice aacha laga hame bhi
Na-ji uncle nd gave aarti vish nd rajshree took than he went infront of akshi she is sleeping close her eyes
Na-saw ji wo aarti
Ak-dont reply still sleep 😆
Na-ji wo nd stand rajshree hilaing akshu
Ak-haa
Na-ji aarti
Ak-oo par kaise lu oo she took aarti but dont know about it so try but she put her hand on thali nd her thumb touch on diya suddenly diya falls on floor 😆
Raj-ye ladki akshu tu dekh nahi sakti thi thoda dekh leti
Ak-hihihi wo gir gaya tum utha k de do phir laga lo
Na-koi bat nahi galti sab se hoti hai but this is wrong tum ne giraya hai tum uthao aur do mujhe mai kisi ka naukar nahi
Ak-waah isko to juban bhi hai samjhata kya hai akshu ko bolega in man
Dha-mai utha deti hu
Raj-akshu hi uthaygi
Akshu has no options she uthaofy nd leave in anger
More parts coming soon

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Akshu throw her dress here nd there mujhe usse dena hi nahi chahiye tha medicine bhi aur ab mai uske samne nahi jaugi khabhi bhi than vish come
Vis-akshu chal breakfast kar le
Ak-no dad mujhe nahi karna
Vis-pls hamari beti itni udas hai
Ak-dekha na bauji meri bejati ki usne mujhe usse shadi nahi karni
Vis-to mat karo beta par usne galt kya bola agar tumse galti hui to tum hi to sudhaogi na
Ak-ye mere bauji I mean dad ki juban hai
Vis-bilkul hum hi bol rahe dekho hamari akshu badmasi jarur karti h par badmiji nahi hena
Ak-bauji par maine uski rat mai help bhi kari wo usse dava di
Vis-dard bhi to ane diya hoga I m sure apni beti ko janta hu
Ak-ji dad par help ki na mughe kal shadi mai jana hai
Vis-jao beta par no badmasi
Ak-I will try nd smile par fun k bina kaisi shadi
Vis-oki par samal k jayada nahi
Ak-mere pyare bauji nd gave hug
Here rajshree work in kitchen than natik came nd said
Na-aunty may I help u
Raj-beta aap
Na-haa apki help kar du nd said gajar nd aalu dedijiye
Raj-ji beta le lo iski jarurat nahi hum kar lenge
Na-koi bat nahi beta man ke hi par ye sab
Raj-wo akshu nahi khaygi halva nd parathe to piza uske liye
Na-i make pizza mai khata nahi par banata bhut aacha hu than he took milk nd gajar kas k dalofy on milk than made masala nd pizza took of Microwave ..
Raj-bas beta sab to kar diya halva ban gya pizza bhi ab masale se mai parata bana lungi aap jao
Na-par aunty apka beta
Raj-jao bola na maa bol rahi hai
Na-oki than all r set on table akshu also saw pizza nd hpy
Ak-thought waaw mom ko itna aacha piza banana kaise aa gaya
Everyone having breakfast
Both raj nd vish-bhut aacha h beta jaddu hai tumhare hanth mai to man karta hai khate jao
Natik saw akshi dont know why he is waiting for tarif from akshi mouth
But akshi
Ak-tumne banaya hai sab mai nahi khaugi nd sudden leave nd said hihihi mera ho gaya dont eat
Natik -maine aacha nahi banaya kya akshra ne kuch khaya nahi
Vis-wo essi hi hai man mai aaya to kha liya than everyone leave nd went for their work
Than akshi came in kitchen hidden nd saw pizza nd eat pagalo ki tarah
Ak-waaw kisi ko tadpane ka maja hi alg hota hai maja aa gaya khane mai yammi hai bhut bhudhu ho ab bura laga na maine aacha nahi banaya nd all waah akshu u r gr8 jo mujhe tang karega wo bhi gaya jo nahi wo bhi gaya nd ate but this is spicy so she want water someone gave she turn ye chasma na nd Shocked? ????
So gys this is for u dont know part is good or bad par pls give comment nd press like button if u like I try my best pls give comment waiting
Precap-natik saw akshu in wedding akshi shocked

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part..
naitik ka pain with akshara ki dawa..
par diya dhaniya ne..its ok ..like it
omg ! naitik is so sanskaari..pooja and kitchen ka work..
on the other side akshara 🤣
aarti bhi lena nahi aata..
now waiting for naksh nok jhok in wedding..
cool part
*** / 5
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

very nice part..
naitik ka pain with akshara ki dawa..
par diya dhaniya ne..its ok ..like it
omg ! naitik is so sanskaari..pooja and kitchen ka work..
on the other side akshara 🤣
aarti bhi lena nahi aata..
now waiting for naksh nok jhok in wedding..
cool part
*** / 5

Thanku sona😳dear for liking nd gave comments I loved it in serial natik also sanskari na 😆akshu is naughty yup
I will do update soon 😛thanku for stars next time I try my best 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonal I ask u dear u dont give me reply that I call u sona??? U dont feel bad na
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part...
akshi tho puri shaitani ki tizori hain... 🤣
but at same time gud also the way she utaaofy daniya 😆
and naitik ki puja and aksi ki pizza eating was hialrious... 😃
par na aage naitik ko bhi thodi tho akshi ki takkar banaao warna mazaa nahi aayega... its just my req ur wish...
waiting for shaadi masti and wen akshi see naitik in marriage 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchigarg

Sonal I ask u dear u dont give me reply that I call u sona??? U dont feel bad na

yup ruchu u can call me anything..i love to read my new new names..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

nice part...

akshi tho puri shaitani ki tizori hain... 🤣
but at same time gud also the way she utaaofy daniya 😆
and naitik ki puja and aksi ki pizza eating was hialrious... 😃
par na aage naitik ko bhi thodi tho akshi ki takkar banaao warna mazaa nahi aayega... its just my req ur wish...
waiting for shaadi masti and wen akshi see naitik in marriage 😉

🤣Thanku princess for ur vry vry funny nd vry true nd sweet comments😆i like it alot dear req nahi order princess I m hpy that u said what u want now natik ka pitara bhi kolti hu in next part oki 😳😃😛

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